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Reviewer: everintruiged (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
That was insanely hot. And creative, I don't believe I've ever seen Bella's... blood, used like that before. I mean, a little while back ago, I wrote a story about using Bella's pads and erm... the Cullens, but wow. It's amazing, for sure!
Continue writing and updating, and just out of curiousity, is there a way to put stories on "alert" as you can on FF?
EverIntruiged
Reviewer: Nicolette (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Absolutely brilliant. Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter.
Can't wait...
N
Reviewer: kyla713 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Hell no I don't hate you... build up is just as hot as actions :D Great job once again
Reviewer: kyla713 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Hoooooooooooooooooooooooly shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit. Just when I think it cant get any hotter.... whoa. Nice work... would leave a longer review but whoa....brain is mush and need more
Reviewer: Edwardsfavoritebrunette (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
AHH! The honeymoon! So exciting!
I love reading Edward's POV because it's so cool to see what he does when Bella thinks he's merely hunting or reading.
Also, Bella and Edward take showers so often, it scares the hell out of me. I mean, it's got to be 2-3 times a day!!! Don't they run out of shampoo in a week??
Anyway, so happy I finally got to a dead-end chapter!
UPDATE SOON!
Reviewer: kyla713 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Goooooood does wet Edward ever deserve a review! Why is it that Edward self love is just so damn erotic?! Bella Bella Bella....... Luuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuucy, you got some splainin ta doooooooooooooooooo...hehehe should be interesting... moving on
Reviewer: Cali Twilighter (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OME fantastic!! Each chapter gets better and better. I am glad to hear you will keep writing past the wedding and honeymoon. I can't wait to see what you have planned once Bella is changed.
Reviewer: PhoebeAndPiper (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
"...She'd be screaming my name as I claimed her from behind. Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.' Fucker." HAHA one of my favorite lines from this story! It made me really laugh! Love the story!! Can't wait to see the wedding and the honeymoon!
Keep up the fantastic work!
<3
Reviewer: kyla713 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
ohhhhh boy Bella really does have quite the list going there... cant wait to see the additions
Reviewer: kyla713 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
GO BELLA!!! GET YOUR MAN!!! Well.... somewhat anyway... hehehe.. that was just awesome!!! ready for more :D
Reviewer: kyla713 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
AHAHAHAHA leave it to Alice to ruin the moment!! That was great!!! But I guess she also saved the day as well. That was awesome!
Reviewer: kyla713 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I have been told about this story for a while, and have finally gotten around to starting it, and OMG... that was hot.. Love it, and moving on to read more!!
Reviewer: Lisa1070 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
hi, I just finished reading your story and OMG! I think its awesome Im going to get my bf to read it too. This was everything you wanted to read in Eclipse and Breaking Dawn that wasnt there. Please finish another chapter soon!!!
Reviewer: onyx8514 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
love it. love how she finally figured it out that he added to the list; maybe they should do a combo list since she figured it out or he should write it down and they compare and act out fantasies. i actually made my own list because of this story. lol. plus i was bored at work on the ambulance. i hope since the wedding and honeymoon are coming you dont end the story because that is what i am thinking and it is breaking my heart. i also like all the times he said mine and the panty thing. lol
awesome writing keep it up
Reviewer: onyx8514 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
love it. love how she finally figured it out that he added to the list; maybe they should do a combo list since she figured it out or he should write it down and they compare and act out fantasies. i actually made my own list because of this story. lol. plus i was bored at work on the ambulance. i hope since the wedding and honeymoon are coming you dont end the story because that is what i am thinking and it is breaking my heart. i also like all the times he said mine and the panty thing. lol
awesome writing keep it up
Reviewer: tisaveeone (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
That lab table scene should come with a free sample of icy hot. I'm sure bella needed it after. my aren't our two little virgins creative. and the last little edward visual was the cherry on my hot vampward sundae. Bring on the wedding and the honeymoon.
Reviewer: limetree (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
this whole story has been awesome. im a little dissapointed that my husband and i arent as after it as bella and edward, but, what can you do?
thanks for giving me something to daydream about!
Reviewer: ktwrn (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
W O W !!!!
Reviewer: Becky03 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
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Hey!!! I want u to know that I adore your story! as do alot of my friends! We all brag on ur story to each other! I cant wait for u to write more!!! Keep up the awesome work!!!
Reviewer: TwilightMundi (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Oh, man, this was terrific! I loved the talks Bella had with each of the Cullens, but her talk with Alice especially. You have such a great grasp of these characters, I sometimes have to remind myself that SM didn't write this.
This is my first review, because I learned about this story a few days ago and have been ravenously reading it. Now that I'm on the last chapter you have posted, I figured I would review. I'm really, really looking forward to more.
- Stacy
Reviewer: Muze (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I am enjoying your story and look forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Leesh (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Kay lady...that was a long "A" chapter! I freakin' loved it though!! Sorry it took me so long!! RL is kicking my butt right now...and I am like 10 updated chaps of various stories behind in my reading! Ugh! I'm trying to get caught up though!
Can't wait till the honeymoon bb!! I can't wait til the blood thing....gah...so excited for that!!
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
hahaha, this chapter made me blushhhh!!!
Reviewer: ShanMc325 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Just like one of your previous reviewers, I started reading this and couldn't stop. I love your imagery and it has made me want more, MORE!! Anyway, I also wanted to say it occurred to me when I was listening to music the other day that the song Venus Doom by HIM was almost perfect for your version of this fantasy. If you get a chance, check it out. I also want to mention that I loved the Jasper point of view in an earlier chapter, HOT. I wouldn't mind seeing more of that as well...lol.
Shan
Reviewer: dax33 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I start reading this when you had only finished through chapter 18. i am officially hooked. It is a great stop with wonderful side effects. thanks i cant wait for more chapters.
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