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Reviewer: watwilightqueen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Ah, Edward is old fashioned! How cute!
Reviewer: Deepred (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
the closer and closer it comes to what i believe the end of the lusty story.i find you bringing more and more of the bella and edward that SM wrote about.i like that you touched on the fact that one can still be "lady like/gentleman" but still be freaky. it would have been awesome if she and you touched on these subjects more.it seems it could follow very well in her continuing the seres with a different point of view. although with how she(SM) wrote about the actual honeymoon night together(all full of self doubt) that it would not have been this way in the context that you continue this story :) ..... then again bella does say she was not expecting such insecure thoughts.....well i'd have say good job and a pleasure to read.
i have less to imagine now,lol
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
How is it possible that every chapter is better than the last, when ALL of them are fucking phenomenal?? Loved how confident she was to tell each of them how she felt & find out how much they already thought of her as part of the family & grateful she saved Edward. Loved how Jasper shared his feelings with her. Rose, not Rosalie (you clever girl). Major sqee when Edward found The List! And then added to it!! AND #8 & #32!!! FUCKING HHHOOOTTT!!!!!! THIS. STORY. ROCKS.!!!
Reviewer: watwilightqueen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Holy Hell! Gotta go upstairs and find the hubby right now!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: lauraleeor (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I loved Edwards fantasies--so hot!
Reviewer: Jmemac (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
aBSOLUTELY PERFECT!!!!!!!!!! YOU aRE SO CLEVER! CaN'T WaIT FOR THE NEXT CHaPTER! I aM ENJOYING YOUR STORY aS MUCH,MaYBE EVEN a LITTLE BIT MORE THEN THE ENTIRE SM TWILIGHT SERIES! HONESTLY YOU aRE SO VERY TaLENTED! I HOPE THaT LIST MaKES IT TO THE TRIPLE DIGITS!!
Reviewer: katmiles77 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
A little grody, but still works for me!
Reviewer: watwilightqueen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Geeze! Why the hell didn't he let Bella do that to hime!!!! GAHHHHH
Reviewer: Deepred (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
love that you didnt just fall right in to full on oral for bella...thats was bringing back more of the edward we know !!!!
Reviewer: watwilightqueen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Oh! I love that she left her panties on his bed! I wonder what he'll think (evil grin)!!
Reviewer: watwilightqueen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Holy crap!!!! That was awesome! Against a tree.....AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!
Reviewer: katmiles77 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
You're my best friend.
Reviewer: NomadiCat (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
What I love most about this series is that it manages to be incredibly erotic, romantic in ways I never thought possible, and fucking hillarious. Honestly, I've spent the last five minutes laughing to hard that I think I may have injured myself. THANK YOU for writing this story. I don't care how far it departs from the strict (and given the way the honeymoon really turned out) very sad canon. I like yours better! <3
Reviewer: katmiles77 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I almost died reading this. It.Is.So.Perfect.Thank. You.
Reviewer: Zara Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
that was so hot... to tell you the truth at first I thought to myself 'Edward and Bella wouldn't say those thing' but then why not??? It's a great story keep going....
Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I know I haven't reviewed every chapter, but I am thoroughly enjoying this story. What they are doing, with his control problems, makes complete sense. And it's really hot. I need to invest in a bigger, better, faster fan--lol!
This chapter was so touching. The way Bella protected him and then the way that he said she had saved him in every way imaginable was beautiful. And the last sentence was perfect. Lovely writing. This story is sultry and sensuous, but it's also every bit as much about their love and devotion. It's amazing.
Reviewer: Deepred (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
love it
Reviewer: watwilightqueen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
LOL! What else does Alice know about Bella's little experiment!? So funny!
Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
lovelovelovelove did i mention love?, ed it. AFUCKANMAZIIING. i cant wait for the next chapter... as well as when edward finds out about the bellas blood thing.... holllly shit.
Reviewer: watwilightqueen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Whew! Removable shower heads....I have heard of this but never tried it. If Bella gave it a try, maybe I should! :)
Reviewer: pillowbiter (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
"For a solid week, every time Rose was, um, interested, I made him start crying," Jasper said with a smile.
that line right there absolutely did it for me. I must have laughed for 5 solid minutes. I even had to get up and walk away.
You have done such a wonderful job at fufilling any needs I had with the story after SM completed it. THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!
Reviewer: FigureSkateMeOut (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
i LOVE that you put the lemonade bottle cap from midnight sun!so cute!
Reviewer: Twinsmom (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
This is so yummy. :)
Reviewer: stephanayynayy (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
ohhhmyyy!
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I. Fucking. LOVE. This. Story~~SO HOTT makes my panties fucking melt!
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