Number Ten was abso-bloody-lutely amazing!!!!!

I've never thought of Edward as a... "stimulated boy-type", i dont know why, but i loved your version! In some way it was very "realistic"

Im going for the next one!

EPIC! Bed now, but reading first thing in the morning! I love it! It is MADE OF AWESOME! And so are you, great job!

HAHA! I heard this story get pimped out on the Temptation ff podcast and this sounds great!...hehe, can't wait!

wonderful as usual!!

Ahhh, that was quite lovely. Can't deny a vision of E pleasuring himself. =] And that fantasy about Jacob watching them...HOTNESS. =]

I haven't reviewed any previous chapters because I just had to get on to the next chapter ASAP. I have been so enthralled with the story and I couldn't stop reading. I figured I would send a review about half way through so that you knew your work was still being loved and appreciated. Your story is so creative and juicy. I am so impressed. You really are a great writer. You seem to have a great imagination and I really think you could write your own novel and get published. I am supposed to be working on my final papers that are due tomorrow and later this week, but I can't stop reading! Keep up the good work. I'll have to see if you have any other stories up. I haven't looked into yet. I just can't wait to see where this story goes. :)

audra

http://ellenstwilightfans.com

Awsome!!!!! ^-^

I just finished reading your story.  You are sooooo good!!!  I think its absolutely perfect!  Just the right amount of romance and eroticism.  I laughed, I cried, I wore out my husband.  Thank you! Fabulous job....anxiously waiting for the next chapter!!  BTW...I love the minor changes from Stephenie's storyline.

I loved it....

Absolutely. Great. No futher review needed. I finished reading still holding my breath and I gasped when I saw that there's no next chapter so far. The whole time I was in a some kind of trance or whatever. Anyways- write a book, woman. You should. I'd buy it. Everyone here would buy it. Hell, you'd probably be the next SM ;DDD

Thanks from Lithuania :)

OMG!  This story is PERFECT! Just efffin Perfect!  It is totally what was missing from the books.  I have thought from the very beginning that there was no way that Edward would not harm Bella on their wedding night if he didn't get out some of those 104 year old pent up 17 year old hormones!  He needed RELEASE!  I'm sorry I didn't review every chapter but this is by far one of my favorite stories of all time!  Your writing is phenomenal.  You have the cadence and the voices down perfect.  I totally picture this as blending in with the book.  It totally fits and is spot on with everything they would be thinking and doing at the time.  This last chapter was especially loving when she acknowledges each of the Cullens individually.  How beautiful was THAT!  I love hearing Jasper's point of view about how hard Edward's emotions were on him for decades.  Awwwhhhhh!!!  Man, it just makes me love it all the more! 

Thanks so much for sharing your talents and since I'm new to this whole fanfiction thing, I hope to get alerted if there is an update.  I hope your still writing this because it's just truly lovely and I don't want it to end!

Fabulous chap, your writing is so great!

Hmm. I like how you continue on with the point of views and not repeat everything too much. I like :D GOOOOOOD job !!