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Reviewer: Emy (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OK all I can say is OMFG totally awesome and I need more keep it coming!!!!
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
This chapter was so sweet at the end! I bet he will fix the truck for her!
Reviewer: jlc (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
please please please! we need MORE
Author's Response: Hi everybody! In case anyone is reading reviews--it'll be early next week before the wedding chapter gets posted due to a sick kid and a death in the family. Sorry for the delay but couldn't be helped! Thanks, jlc, for the review!
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I love how he is jealous of Jacob and said mine. That's awesome.
Reviewer: MissBella (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
AHH GOD
1) (on my list) role play as bella and edward while READING THE LIST.
god i fucking LOVE this story! update. now. <3 <3 <3
Reviewer: corriander (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
i feel a little spoiled now! I read from chapter on to this point and all I can think is..." post the dang chapter already!" LOL
Great Job with this story! Everything Edward thinks in your story sounds just like what I imagine he is like...and props on the car replacement although I dont see bella in an SUV I imagine she would find it wasteful for only her...but then again she will be with a bug family soon, so I must be wrong!!! GREAT JOB!
Please post the next chapter now PLEASE!!!
Reviewer: ginnieNat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
hahahahaha Emmett is soooo diabolic!!!! Poor Bella!!
Reviewer: sarafiena (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
so far so good, friends have told me that i HAD to read your fiction...looking forward to it!
Reviewer: AndieCullen (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Seriously, lady!! I don't know how much longer I can wait!!! PLEEEEEEASE post the next chapter!! AGH!!!
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
A couple of things...
I completely disregarded all of my real life things to do for most of today to completely catch-up with this story...I'm mor than thrill thay I did...this stroy & you a AMAZING!
I adored Bella's convos with each of the Cullens, they were all very touching.
The lab table...I have no words for that (*swoon*)
Now I'll sit paitiently (well maybe not really patiently) waiting for the next chapter...please, please, please make it soon!
*big hugz* and thanks!
Reviewer: ginnieNat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
hahahahaha that was so fun to read!!!
You gave me a veeeeery fine idea XD
I cant believe Edward made up his mind with a blowjob!!
Reviewer: marlink (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 10:38 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
DAMN!WOW, I am going to ravage my husband now, thank you very much. I am amazed on how well you capture Bella and Edward's personality. I want mmore!!!
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
oooo, Edward found the list!!! Excellent!!!
Yes, I;ll have an Edward sundae please.....
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
There are so many great things in this chapter I don't know where to start...but I think my favorite is Bella's revenge on Emmett!
Thanks so much!
Reviewer: ginnieNat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Oooooooohhhh God!!!! I have another "In the back sit of his Aston Martin" XD. That was so damn hot!!!!!!!
Would Edward actually do something more wild in his house???????
I'm going for the next right now!
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Between this:
Mine.
Okay.
Now.
Fuck. Okay.
and the picnic and Bella's Lullaby and the balconey...I'm thoroughly melting!
I bow to the goddess of a writer that you are!
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:30 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Wow, that was close! I swear I don't know how you come up this this stuff...butI love it!!!
Amazing!
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
"Spent" is putting it mildly!!!!! I want more!!!!
Excellent chapter...again!!!
Reviewer: fudgie (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMG!!! Totally awesome story..You are an amazing writer...can't wait to read more...
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
OOOO, you're such a tease!!! Seems Domward will be making an appearance...goody!
Excellent chapter...as usual!
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
SWEET HOLY HELL WOMAN!!! *thud*
THE most amazing chapter yet! Btw, the blood talk is a non issue for me...it fits perfectly into the story line. Bella's revenge on Ewdard was hot as hell! I can't wait to see what she has in store for Emmett. I also can't wait to see what Edward has planned for Bella & his reaction to her tattoo.
Must! Read! More!
Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Oh Hale, awesome chapter! Edward's love letter to Bella was perfect! And their "phone call" smokin'!
I love Bella's list & that she got the tattoo! Gotta keep reading!
Reviewer: ktwrn (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2009 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Talk about starting with the best!! I recently only started reading Fan fic I didn't even know it existed. I read about it from the twitarded blog. This story was the first one I read. It just blew my mind. I have since read some more fan fic but it don't compare. PLEASE PLEASE keep writing I would love for you to continue on with this story. Thank you for taking the time to write it I throughly have been enjoying it.
Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
haha I love the last line!
Reviewer: marlink (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
OK Girl, you can write some smokin hot stuff! I just wish that would be in the movie! What a visual! Keep up the great work. Marlene :O
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