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Reviewer: laela (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I think it'd be so hot if somehow Emmet, Jasper and Rosalie found out about Bella's list and about wat Edward and Bella ere doing and wat they thought bout it, its soo hot I can't believe you came up with this stuff :P

I think Edward should share so stuff from his list with bella and he should see the improvements she made, Bella could also punish Edward for reading her list in the first place :)

Love you so much

Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans

"Oh, fuck, Edward. Fuck me.""I will, Bella. But right now I want you to come. I want you to come all over me."------------- Holy motherfucking shit, the hotness that was that exchange. I will be waiting for him to fuck her. I also loved how they danced together on the dance floor; that shit was hot. Oh, and also the part where Edward stated that he "hated when Emmett made sense." I don't know why, maybe it's the late hour (1:55 AM), but that just made me fall into a fit of giggles.

As I've stated on previous chapters, this is well written. I can't wait to find out what you have in store for them next. Sadly, I will have to pick this back up tomorrow, well actually, later on today. Night!

Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:05 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward

Not upset, my nether regions needed a chapter break. *Whew! wipes sweat from forehead* I can't believe he took her panties, though. Edward is a naughty boy and I adore it! Yes to the possibility of crossing more things off the list this weekend!! Of I go...........

Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected

Just fucking WOW-- fingering and handjobs have never been so hot. Shit, I hate that my brain is so fucking clouded with lust that I can't articulate how profound this whole experience is for me. Seriously, fucking fantastic writing! Off I go........

Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

Damn it woman, you'll either be the death of me or one of my toys once I get ahold of them tonight (sadly, the hubs is out of commission- works long hours on the weekends). Anywho, I loved actually hearing that although the pairs love each other beyond belief, they still find other's appealing. Jasper fucking Alice........shit, shit, shit- *files away for another day's use.*

As all have previously stated I'm sure, this is exceptionally written.

Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions

I love Bella and how devious she is becoming. I'm super eager to see his reaction to the panties, what a fucking fabulous idea. Also, I enjoyed her additions to the list. I encourage the growing length *snickers* growing length. Anywho, off I go......

Oh, again, another awesomely written chapter, but you know this by now.

Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice

Ummmm, not my most intellectual statement, but HOT DAMN FUCK, THAT WAS HOT! Sorry, my brain can't assert much energy into this b/c my blood is currently pooled elsewhere.....IthinkyouknowwhatI'msaying, andthankyou. Anyways, extremely fuck-glorious chapter. Off I go........

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

You know, I was actually thinking about a similar idea for a fic the other day.  What would Edward think of doing *that* while Bella had her period.  What would the others think.  Interesting (if not yucky) concept.

Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

Okay, so him reacting to her arousal was quote him, "phenominal." Yep, I won't try to speak all eloquently right now b/c my brain is frenzied, but I will say fantastic job. Hook.....line......sinker, I'm caught. Still curious as to where you will take this. Also, I love that Alice knows about her little notebook. Off I go........

Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

Well, I've heard other's sing your praises in the BBR. I've had you in my to-read list for a while, (I'm a bit OCD about reading my fics in the order I put them on my list, sorry, I know I'm super weird.) Anywho, I was thrilled to finally get to yours' today.

After I read the first chapter, I must say I'm intrigued. I can't wait to see what you have in store for this duo. Everything was written beautifully as well. Off to the next chapter.......

Reviewer: TessTheBest (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control

this chapter was SOOO hot

Reviewer: Virety (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans

wonderful climax and letdown.

Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

ok, ok, you have got to write more...I have enjoyed this more than the Twilight Saga and I am totally addicted to it!!! Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssseeeee update soon. I have been checking my email through out the day at work just to see if you have updated!!! You are a damn good writer! Edward is just too hot in this story....I LOVE HIM EVEN MORE!


Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  Hang in there for a few more days for the update.  I had a sick kid and a death in the family this past week and I haven't gotten done what I thought I would.  So it'll be just a few more days...

Reviewer: Amethice (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Goodness Gracious Me! I've just happened upon this story, and I tried to read it straight through but unfortunately sleep got in the way. So, now I'm at the end of my tether, begging for more. Honestly, I've been reading it as relentlessly as the actual book ffs. Needless to say, I find your writing style, concept, and of course all the hot sex pretty awesome. I giggled (particularly when Edward was innocently misconstruing Bella's sundae dream), I cried (a tad), and I think I may have went through just as many pairs of panties as poor Bella. Sorry for sharing, but honestly, we are all thinking it, right?

Just in case there is any doubt - there is nothing sexier than a dirty talking Edward. Except maybe dirty thinking Edward POV. (Hint hint please... more...mmmm).


Reviewer: Virety (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions

Great idea with the panties. hope to see EPOV next1

Reviewer: Virety (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice


Reviewer: KerryCullen (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

PLEASE keep on writing! I have been constantly checking to see if you have posted the next chapter yet.  I love your story, i love the chemistry between Bela and Edward you write it very well.  Other stories that I have read arent up to parr with yours so PLEASEEEEE post the next chapter soon!


Reviewer: Meclipse (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

I just discovered this --where have I been?????  This is GREAT!! Hot and sweet and sexy and fun.  Did I mention hot?

Reviewer: TessTheBest (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions

fuckk this is awesoome

Reviewer: smeloise (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

*waits impatiently for updates* ooh naughty edward, i would be MORTIFIED  if i was bella and i realised edward had read this. is there a forum btw>?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  The forum is located under Fan Fiction-->Post-Eclipse-->The List

Reviewer: Becca (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Aha! She finds out about Edward writing on her list. :) Can't wait to read about the wedding and wedding night! ;) Great job!

Reviewer: sweetpea1118 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

This story is absolutely amazing. I was pulled into it head first from the very first chapter. And the intimate scenes with Edward and Bella are so amazingly hot. WOW!!! PLease update very soon. I can't wait for the wedding, honeymoon.. and when does Edward to taste Bella's blood? If I could give this story more than 10 I totally would. Time to go and see if my hubby's interested in making a list ;)

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

*imagines Edward in the shower*  Yummy.  *drools* 

Hot.  Hot hot hot hot hot hot hot!

Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

Oh, perfection!  I can't wait to read the rest.

Reviewer: Deepred (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Ithink it's time for an update! i've been waiting like 2 weeks

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