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Reviewer: adidas187 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I've been keeping up with this story for about a month now and I just LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! It's sexy and steamy, but not trashy and corny. You're a great writer!
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Oh my lord! I think I need a cold shower after that! Or perhaps that would make it worse, lol. Props for making it wonderful yet not trashy!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Hi Laura, Review #4500 for you!
I'm really, really looking forward to vampire role playing and his stalking her. gah!
love ya, Richelle
Reviewer: fouryearsout (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I thought this one made a lot of sense. Edward would be angry at himself and would try to keep his distance.
Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Juat had to say that it looks like you're having pretty tough time right now looking at the reponses to reviews you've posted. Let me just send you the very best thoughts and wishes for you and your family at this really hard tie for you all. We'll all here gained so much enjoyment from your talented writing that I think we'd all want to express the most love and strength we possibly could for you right now. xxxx
Reviewer: fouryearsout (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I wasn't sure of the first chapter. This one seems more like Bella. And I love the idea of Edward's sense of smell. Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Foro (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
This fic is AMAZING! You need to update though (Please? Pretty please with whipped cream and a cherry on top?) before I get serious withdrawal symptoms!
Reviewer: EternalDusk (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Hahahahahah lmfao I love Edward's little fantasy about Jacob seeing hahahahaha. Pricesless... that one HAS to happen, so matter what. And evevn if it doesnt work into the story, you could make it a one shot. Make sure you tell me if it happens (:
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
OMFG I need a cold shower after reading that!
Reviewer: Virety (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
best shower scene ever written in my opinion
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Really enjoying it so far!
Reviewer: Virety (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
tattoo locals: shoulder back, hip joint, foot, heart.
Reviewer: laela (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I think it'd be so hot if somehow Emmet, Jasper and Rosalie found out about Bella's list and about wat Edward and Bella ere doing and wat they thought bout it, its soo hot I can't believe you came up with this stuff :P
I think Edward should share so stuff from his list with bella and he should see the improvements she made, Bella could also punish Edward for reading her list in the first place :)
Love you so much
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
"Oh, fuck, Edward. Fuck me.""I will, Bella. But right now I want you to come. I want you to come all over me."------------- Holy motherfucking shit, the hotness that was that exchange. I will be waiting for him to fuck her. I also loved how they danced together on the dance floor; that shit was hot. Oh, and also the part where Edward stated that he "hated when Emmett made sense." I don't know why, maybe it's the late hour (1:55 AM), but that just made me fall into a fit of giggles.
As I've stated on previous chapters, this is well written. I can't wait to find out what you have in store for them next. Sadly, I will have to pick this back up tomorrow, well actually, later on today. Night!
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Not upset, my nether regions needed a chapter break. *Whew! wipes sweat from forehead* I can't believe he took her panties, though. Edward is a naughty boy and I adore it! Yes to the possibility of crossing more things off the list this weekend!! Of I go...........
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Just fucking WOW-- fingering and handjobs have never been so hot. Shit, I hate that my brain is so fucking clouded with lust that I can't articulate how profound this whole experience is for me. Seriously, fucking fantastic writing! Off I go........
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Damn it woman, you'll either be the death of me or one of my toys once I get ahold of them tonight (sadly, the hubs is out of commission- works long hours on the weekends). Anywho, I loved actually hearing that although the pairs love each other beyond belief, they still find other's appealing. Jasper fucking Alice........shit, shit, shit- *files away for another day's use.*
As all have previously stated I'm sure, this is exceptionally written.
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
I love Bella and how devious she is becoming. I'm super eager to see his reaction to the panties, what a fucking fabulous idea. Also, I enjoyed her additions to the list. I encourage the growing length *snickers* growing length. Anywho, off I go......
Oh, again, another awesomely written chapter, but you know this by now.
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Ummmm, not my most intellectual statement, but HOT DAMN FUCK, THAT WAS HOT! Sorry, my brain can't assert much energy into this b/c my blood is currently pooled elsewhere.....IthinkyouknowwhatI'msaying, andthankyou. Anyways, extremely fuck-glorious chapter. Off I go........
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
You know, I was actually thinking about a similar idea for a fic the other day. What would Edward think of doing *that* while Bella had her period. What would the others think. Interesting (if not yucky) concept.
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Okay, so him reacting to her arousal was just........to quote him, "phenominal." Yep, I won't try to speak all eloquently right now b/c my brain is frenzied, but I will say fantastic job. Hook.....line......sinker, I'm caught. Still curious as to where you will take this. Also, I love that Alice knows about her little notebook. Off I go........
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Well, I've heard other's sing your praises in the BBR. I've had you in my to-read list for a while, (I'm a bit OCD about reading my fics in the order I put them on my list, sorry, I know I'm super weird.) Anywho, I was thrilled to finally get to yours' today.
After I read the first chapter, I must say I'm intrigued. I can't wait to see what you have in store for this duo. Everything was written beautifully as well. Off to the next chapter.......
Reviewer: TessTheBest (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
this chapter was SOOO hot
Reviewer: Virety (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
wonderful climax and letdown.
Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
ok, ok, you have got to write more...I have enjoyed this more than the Twilight Saga and I am totally addicted to it!!! Pleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssseeeee update soon. I have been checking my email through out the day at work just to see if you have updated!!! You are a damn good writer! Edward is just too hot in this story....I LOVE HIM EVEN MORE!
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Author's Response: Thanks so much! Hang in there for a few more days for the update. I had a sick kid and a death in the family this past week and I haven't gotten done what I thought I would. So it'll be just a few more days...
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