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Reviewer: AmberrrJune (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I just wanted to comment by saying that.....I love the songs you recommended in one of the future chapters.
Reviewer: nunu321654 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
ahhh!! pleaaassee write more!! just finished reading all your chapters in two days!!... don't keep your fans waiting love! :O
Reviewer: T_O_N_K_S (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
O.....M.....G.....that was fricken awesome!!!!!!! how much longer till you update? I NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Great chapter! the class room scene was hot! Great Job!!!
Reviewer: mickele2 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
hehe- nice job. It was just hard for me to envision Bella doing this :)
Reviewer: white trillium (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
This story is the best. I laughed, I cried, I was stunned, shocked. WHAT FUN! You really know how to move a story, girl. Nice work. I would read anything you wrote.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
You are an evil evil woman, leaving me with nothing more like this. Please, pretty pretty please, update soon. Very soon. Later tonight would be wonderful. *big grin*
I love love love this so far! I can't wait. And out of control Edward? Can we say really fuckin hot? *groans*
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Fuck me, I could not stop reading this! I've spent hours reading it today. It's fanfuckingtastic. OMG I can only imagine how hot the honeymoon will be. Bring it on.
Reviewer: Happiness (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Please write more??
Please? Please?
Reviewer: AmayaBlack (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
hey woman good work in the story. I just finish it (well all that you have done that is), and i like it so much, a laugh a lot to especially on this chapter. you amazing
Reviewer: twiguyemt11 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
please post the next ch hurry
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Wow, holy fuck, this is hot as hell!
Reviewer: Nthetwilightzone (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I am sorry to hear of the death in your family and I hope your kid is feeling better! : )
Reviewer: alice2b (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Fabulous! Impatiently waiting for the next chapter. Just wondering.......on average.....how long does it take you to write each chapter?
Author's Response: Depends, but 1-2 weeks on average between posts has been the norm lately. My chapters are long--8,000-10,000 words on average over the last couple of chapters. So they take longer to complete. Ch. 21 has been submitted to my beta, though!
Reviewer: littlewind (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMG can't wait for what happens next!! Be right back with more!
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Oh fuck, I'd give anything to swap places with Bella at that piano!
Reviewer: dastardly (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2009 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Laura, your story has been a complete pleasure -- it is quite possibly one of the best pieces of erotica I've ever read. What's most impressive is how you've developed the characters, creating a profound physical awakening for both while keeping their development believable and organic to the priequisites of the vampire-human love dynamic. I love the way you weave the conflict and sexual awakening of Edward (after all he is an Edwardian kind of guy). I can't wait to read what happens next!
Reviewer: Merrisol (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
OMFG!! I started reading this, starting with Chapter One, this afternoon. I have literally been sitting in my chair, reading, drooling, swearing, sweating, sitting with my mouth open, sitting with my hand over my mouth and finally contemplating how hard it going to be for me to actually have to get up out of this chair!!! I may be stuck to it! You are an AMAZING writer. I had written a tiny chapter about what I would liked to have seen happen between Bella and Edward the first time he came through her window, but it is kiddy stuff compared to this. You wrote what a lot of us were thinking. Honey, my hat is off to you. You are the bomb!!! I may have a heart attack though, waiting for the next chapter. AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
::::::::::I.AM.DIED!::::::::::::::
Due to explosion of my netherlands, all I can say is FUUUUUUCK, that was HOT!
I must go use my toys now. Goodnight! It will kill me to be away from this story tomorrow while my sister delivers her son. I will be back as quickly as possible.
Reviewer: Robin Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I just wanted to let you know I LOVE this story I have only read to chapter 11. But this is one of the best I've read. and boy does my husband love you right now. :)
Reviewer: sunshine09 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:06 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
This is the most addictive fanfic I've ever read! The way you write... it's just...wow! no words to describe. Will be waiting for CH21 eagerly!!
Reviewer: mOrE_tHeN_mY_oWn_LiFe (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Ok..so I read your story over and over again!! It is amazing!!!! I am well aware that it hasnt been very long since the last chapter but OMG I am addicted and I check every couple of hours to see if there is a new chapter up!!!!LOL My husband is getting worried :) So I cant wait to read more!!! I hope your story goes on forever!!!!!!!!!!! If there was an infinity rating you would get it!!!
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Damn me and my impatientce to getting to the next chapter, the games were fun! Guh...Edward being submissive! Yep, great chapter, now I must run off to the next!!!! Off I go........
Reviewer: adidas187 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I've been keeping up with this story for about a month now and I just LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! It's sexy and steamy, but not trashy and corny. You're a great writer!
Reviewer: ArwenUndomiel (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Oh my lord! I think I need a cold shower after that! Or perhaps that would make it worse, lol. Props for making it wonderful yet not trashy!
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