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Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
OMG that was amazing u did and wonderfull job on this chapter i cant wait to see what happens next :)
Reviewer: cb2brown (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Beautifully done! I love how Jake gets to be happy too -- just with someone else!
Reviewer: v1cky84 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
That was hot!!!! I love it. They're finally married...I'm glad Edward finally realizes that he won't allow himself to hurt her. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Wow. Just wow.
Reviewer: imnotuniqueimmonique (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I really like what you did with the whole Jacob situation, I'm not normally into too much AU, but I really love what you are doing here.
Reviewer: kaylad_1982 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
That was perfect. The way you write is beautiful, I did not even have to look at the dresses, the way they were discribed was perfect. Than Jake showing up...didn't see thet coming. I loved that curve ball. I can not wait to read more as Edward and Bella get to cross of more things on their list.
Reviewer: twltr12 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
eeeek! That was the best chapter by far! I loved how Edward invited Jake! It was so sweet how it turned out, and he imprinted...and he approves!! I'm sooo overwhelmed and excited!! I had so many reactions to this chapter! Everything was done beautifully..and the honeymoon was even better than I could have imagined! I can't wait til the next chapter :)
Reviewer: girlys75 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:55 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Mrs Cullen !
You out did yourself yet again with the wedding chapter ! I LOVE IT ! Love it !
The emotions, the sex, everything ! Please more, when can we have the next chapter ?
By the way, LOVE the changes to the original story !
I have a question for you :
"On Monday May 18, I will be the guest author for Ninapolitan's Smut Mondays series (if you haven't checked this out, search for her or the story and add it to your favorites!"
What's that ? Those that occur online ? In person ? What ?
Thanks
Isabelle
girlys75.blogspot.com
girlys75@yahoo.com
Author's Response: http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=834 (Smut Mondays link)
Reviewer: TwilightMommy (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
That was so good. SO. GOOD. I think the best Bella/Edward wedding night scene I have ever read.
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Oh my I love this chapter it was so sweet and totally hot at the same time. Great job!!
Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD! amazing. amazing. it could not have been more perfect. fantastic story. MOOOOOOORE AHH I LOVE YOU!
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
What an awesome chapter!! I so enjoyed reading this!!
Reviewer: Rachael (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Great chapter! I loved everything, even Jacob (I usually hate him!). Good work on the wedding night scene.
Reviewer: sofaking (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
HELL YEAH
Reviewer: Carolyn81 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Oh my goodness. That was SOOOOOOOOOOO worth the wait. What an amazing chapter. It was like reliving the entire wedding and wedding night but so much better. The love that they have for each other is nearly tangilble, and you capture it perfectly. Oh and to find out that Jake imprinted! What a twist...but a good one! I'm so happy things are working out so perfectly. It's refreshing to read a story that is based on love and not on angst.
GREAT JOB!
Reviewer: RowanMoon (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Truly fabulous job Laura. Everything was perfect!
Reviewer: VampiresWillNeverHurtYou (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I loved it so much! Update as soon as possible! This is one of the best ffs ever :D
Reviewer: Aggie (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Good... I am hooked... :-)
Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
YAY! and Im glad Jacob gets his happily ever after, he usually getes the short end of the stick! Oh! the links to David's bridal don't work. :(
Author's Response: I can't seem to fix the link, but I added the style number so if you cut and paste the link into your browser, it will take you to David Bridal's page and then you can input the style number....sorry for the inconvenience.
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
You did an amazing job! no reason to be nervous! I laughed, i cried, i loved it!
Reviewer: Anitamichichi21 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Nothing to be nervous of, dearest. It was perfect and there was some Fuckward thrown in there and all. I loved it! I can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I LOVE the wedding!!!!!!! I can't wait for more!!!!
Reviewer: scrider (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
AWESOME! Awesome. Awesome. Awesome... I can't wait to read the rest! As I have said before. by far the best Fanfic I have read. I love how you just show them as happy! I cannot wait to see how the rest plays out!
Thanks so much for writing! I will be impatiently waiting as always,
Sarah
I am sorry to hear about the death in your family. I hope everything is okay.
Reviewer: Melliegirl13 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
This chapter was amazing! You did an aweosme job with it. I'm so happy that Jacob imprinted. That's really good for him. Does that mean that Bella will not get pregnant in this story? I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work :D
Reviewer: Defiance (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I know you want a review, but really I'm speechless. I don't know what to say. It was wonderful, amazing, perfect, incredible, beautiful. *swoon*
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