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Reviewer: Littleblueduck (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I know I have told you this before, but I love this story. I love a really Edward and Bella story that has Bella all sad and crap over Jacob. THANK YOU for making her wishy washy over Jacob and Edward.
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Sweet car sex.
Shopping Bella, seductress Bella, dancing Bella. Who is this and what have you done with the real Bella? No seriously, this is the more real life Bella, not the Mormonised version. I like this one, and can relate to her desperate desire for Edwards passion and touch.
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
well, there wouldn't be enough chapters if they finished the list off in one go (?). So Edward's a snow dropper now? Poor guilt ridden boy, being born in 1901 sucks for your sense of sensuality
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
That last line is so sweet. You write hot sex so well, but the emotion that goes with it is nice to hear too. The romance of the original story is the big attraction, and I love that you have captured that too
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Oh, I like the mental picture you have drawn in my head.Wet Edward *drools like Homer*
Loved the Jasper bit too, I never really considered how their sense of smell would react in this sort of situation.
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Hmm, so there is going to be lots of innuendo banter. Can't wait to hear EPOV when he finds the undies! Or what Alice conspires to achieve next
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
With Alice on the case, completing Bella's list is a sure thing. Plus it is relatively easy to circumvent the restraint of horny teenage boys.
This is like reading what Stephenie's religious sensibilities won't allow her to write
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Oh my gawd, I almost have no words. I'm not surprised you are getting published, if you haven't already ( I have to check the timeline for when you finished this story ) I'm not just saying this, but this is the best story I have read to date, sure I've read other stories that I have loved, but this one is just in a league of it's own. You are a very talented story teller. I loved how you incorporated the elements from the Twilight saga, especially the characters, and at the same time made it your own. I hope that made sense, I'm not sure if I said it right. I love this story and I know that I will read it again. I laughed, I cried, I got hot and bothered ( in a good way! ) I felt other emotions I can't even put into words. This was a fabulous story and you are a fabulous writer! I look forward to reading your other works and I wish you all the best. Kisses!
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Nice list, well, for starters anyway. Phenomenal pheremones! *wistful sigh* I remeber the smell & taste of those.
Loving this already
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
lol, I remember being 18 and thinking these thoughts! Even girls can think of sex every 12 minutes, and boy, do we have good imaginations!
Reviewer: wintermist73 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
I just had to send you a small note of thanks. this has been one of the most incredible stories I have ever read!! The emotions you've managed to incorporate into this piece has been extraordinary!!! LOL I actually cried during the love scene in this chapter!! an absolute first for me!! I can't wait to read your other works!!
Reviewer: PhoenixRising (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
This story is absolutely beautiful. I LOVED it! Especially the very last chapter, the outtake. Bella's gift to Edward was just so sweet, such a perfect gift for Edward. I could go on, but I won't bore you lol. Love your writing and I'm off to read more of your fiction. Oh, and congrats on the novel btw! That's awesome!
-Danii
Reviewer: Littleblueduck (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I love how she took control over the whole sun situation. He just needs to learn and I believe he is, that she can take care of him just the same as he does for her.
Reviewer: Littleblueduck (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
You have done it again. :-D I can't stop reading this wonderful story.
Reviewer: Littleblueduck (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2010 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
You have done it again. :-D I can't stop reading this wonderful story.
Reviewer: tyg (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 07:06 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Mr. and Mrs. Cabin Wrecker rule! Jasper being able to make amends was excellent. But the very best part was the line 'And never speak of this again." Ten hours very well spent. Thank you for your hundreds of hours of plotting and writing. I'd love to get a gander at Edward's List!
Reviewer: Littleblueduck (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Awesome as always. :)
Reviewer: Littleblueduck (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I think that is a brilliant idea for revenge!!!
Reviewer: Sookella (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 06:09 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Laura I can not make words to tell you how much I enjoied this story. As much as I can't believe this, I like your story much more than breakig dawn. I feel like it gave them a newly wed option. I am so jealous of the Edward you have created, I've even dreamed about him! Hey are unbelievably the exact replica of the relationship I wish to have with my boyfriend. Your fantastic writing and ideas has spurred more adventures in my relationship and I couldn't be more thankful for your story. I can't say it enough but I love your writing style. I love that you kept the characters how Stephanie wrote them. I lovethe curve balls you threw in there too. The tat especially :) the blood even more though. I always felt that should have happened. I wish your story was a book. That way I could always bring it when I needed something to preoccupy my mind
please excuse all my typing errors. iPhones are a bitch for me to type on :)
Reviewer: Littleblueduck (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2010 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
She is getting through her list pretty fast!!! I love it! :) I am really enjoying this story.
Reviewer: Littleblueduck (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2010 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
AWESOME!!!!! That is all I have to say! :)
Reviewer: LadyKnightAmy (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I'll have to write a more thorough review when I can think straight. Your last chapter felt more emotionally real and true than Breaking Dawn ever felt for me. Thank you for sharing your amazing gift with us all!
Reviewer: Littleblueduck (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I will never look at a rest area the same again!!! :-D I love getting ideas from you. THANK YOU! :)
Reviewer: 4everLoVe53090 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
OMG!!! this is my first review but I waited till I read ALL of it so I could tell you how amazing your writting is and how I loved every minute of it!!!!
Reviewer: Addicted2fanfics (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2010 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I have to go pick up my jaw off of the floor now. Nicely done ;)
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