Loved it! The wedding was beautiful! The wedding night was freaking PERFECT!  Exactly how I wanted it to be in the cock-block fiesta also known as B.D.  So thank you, thank you, thank you for writing the scene I wanted to read when S.M. faded to black.  The card from Jake made me cry!  Can't wait for fun on Isle Esme...and thanks for the condom...hopefully that means there will be no fready half vamp-half human offspring.  So again much love and thanks for a wonderful wedding and wedding night!  Btw can't wait to read an Edward fantasy outtake.

that was such a lovely wedding scene. and i love Bella's dress! so beautiful. 

 

You created a beautiful wedding day for them and an exquisite wedding night, both as I knew you would.  I'm so proud of you for this and I'm looking forward to more. *sob*

ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

WOW

WOW
WOW
WOW
BEST.

WEDDING.

EVER.

* I need a drink or somethign...oh wait i do....*

I'm sorry to hear what has happened ( i guess you get that a lot and I hate it when people mention it but I guess I wanted to say something so you know that we have got your back in writing cool reviews)

 

Well, normally my review consists of screaming because this is awesome!

wedding night was perfect and the jacob part was well done and his gift is wow---you made jacob seem grown up in my eyes

 

looking forward to reading more soon but understand if it is a while

 

rachie

I thought it was interesting what you decided to change about the wedding and wedding night compared to the book.  I liked that they spend the first night close to home in case they need help.  I liked that Jacob inprinted on an adult instead of baby Nessie.  I noticed Edward used a condom.  Does this mean no Renesmee?!!!  She's an important character--she heals Rosalie and Esme's need to have a child...

Great chapter.  Can't wait for the next one.

Best chapter EVER, SERIOUSLY!!! Oh my goodness!!!

I can't wait fo rmore :)

It's always so amazing to unexpectedly find an update!  Thank you for your time and talent!

Loved the chapter!  As always, the writing was excellent and the descriptions were so spot on!  I liked the twist of Jake having someone of his own before the "big day" and his letter showed that he was in a better place than he was at this point in the original...

Bella's gift of her heartbeat was genius!  Ok, the blood, when you get to that part, will be an interesting gift to be sure (can't wait to read that chapter) but she's giving him a piece of her (one of the things he'll most miss about her human self) that he can keep forever. 

Thanks again!   Looking forward to Isle Esme and Bella's rodeo!  LOL

Oh my God, this was SO worth the wait!  My sympathies for your loss.  And I know how stressful having sick children can be.  Thank you, thank you for this beautiful chapter.  I love happy!  Can't wait for more!  PLEASE revisit the meadow!  (I know first hand how fabulous the great outdoors can be!)  :-)Love love love your story!

wow holy shit that was crazy...

Wow! Amazing job!  I thought for a minute he was going to change her - hehe.   Something tells me that no needles will be used in your version for this task.

Don't be nervous--this was a truly wonderful, emotionally satisfying chapter!  Bella with her parents and Rose and Alice, her happiness at Jake's coming and her happiness for him, the surprise of the cabin, the wonderful wedding night--all fabulous.  I loved this so much:

"We held and touched each other softly, just enjoying being alone and quiet and together in that moment.  I reveled in the realization that my humanity had clearly won out tonight over my darker nature.  I would never hurt her.  I could never hurt her.  Oh my God, her trust in me is warranted! I thought in delighted surprise."

Can't wait for more!!  Thank you!

Thank you, thank you for the new chapter.  I just love this story.  The part I liked the best in this chapter was when Edward took her panties from her with his teeth.  God that was so hot. I so hope there will be more chapters to this story.