AWW... LOVED IT! ALMOST BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES...

Omg I wish I was half as creative as you are!!! This chapter was mind blowing. Everything was beautiful!! The wedding, your vivid descriptions, Jacob coming (not sexually hahaha), even their first time!!! It was all so perfect, so tender, and magical.  I'm seriously considering saving your story then printing it out and making my own little mini book (just for me I'd never EVER try to steal you work or anything, but let me know if you DO NOT want me too, I'll respect that =)) Anyway I don't know how else to say that this chapter (and you) is (you are lol) amazing!!! Thanks for sharing with all of us <3!!!!!!!!!!!

Loved it!!!  Charlie made me cry and Edward made me...well made me wanna do naughty stuff to Mr. Christid_md1.  Cant wait for more!

Ok so the wedding part made me cry, you wrote it beautifuly!

Yes oh yes, I'll have what she is having, multiple times if possible. Another wonderful chapter, well written and impossible to stop reading. I am glad that the wedding was so sweet and well done, with out being over done and clique. I loved the family interactions and how the characters relate and interact with each other, this chapter continues to build on the story and the relationships while staying true to the characters.

They finally did it, and I am so glad that everything went so well with liomited angst and a excess of lust and love, I can't wait to see what happens when they get to Isle Esme, and what happen when they get home. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next update.

I am adoring this story! I had all but given up on really good, canon, VAMPIRE Edward stories. It's so funny, I'm halfway through one of my own that is set right around the same time frame.(only much shorter and a little darker) I gave up and wrote one of my own, lol!

I was not grossed out at all by the blood in here. I think if it is going to be anywhere, it should be in a Vamp/Human story. It is a reasonable topic and I am glad I'm not the only one who wondered about it.

Keep up the great work!

Oh my god, I almost forgot:

Jacob finding an adult woman to be with, along with the card he gave Bella about the exception to the treaty, made him so much more likeable as a character.  You truly improved upon the book like whoa through that.

And Bella's gift of the recording of her heartbeat?  PERFECTION.  Is there a better gift out there, anywhere?  I think not.  It follows perfectly what the book and your story highlightsa bout Edward's fixation with that sound.  And I love your detail about Bella imagining their wedding night to get the heartbeat racing for part of the recording.  Just too, too awesome for words.  Love.  It.  Hard.

 

A little too out of character for my taste- like the stuff with Jacob, not going to isle esme right away, other little details that are included in the book, etc. Im just being picky because the wedding was one of my favorite parts of the books, so i would have loved to see it more in character... then expand on all that sexual stuff where SM did not write about.

Im interested to see where this is going though... especially with Jacob's letter and the Cullens having to leave Forks for Bella to become a vampire because that means less time having to read about Jacob (a character that I hate and bores me to death)... and the use of condoms and whoever Samantha is means maybe no Renesme (I'm not a fan of her either).

Can't wait for more!!!

You sure hit every emotional note in this chapter.  All the wedding stuff?  And the toasts?  Gah!  I wept throughout.  (Your writing? Or my emotional state?  Discuss.)

The first time was very sweet, very meaningful, very tender, very heavy.  It was that much more of a thrill to hear Edward's thoughts about wanting to go at it with more abandon.  We all love Edward's dirty thoughts.  That's the vamp we all know and lust love.

Laura, I am partial to your amazingly schmexay / hot / drrrty love scenes, which you write better than anyone around.  For that reason, I am very much looking forward to the honeymoon.  Edward, just check those items off your list there, one by one.  A dirty-talking, panty-stealing (with his MOUTH this time?  Such brilliance!), craving-to-take-bella-from-behind-and-tie-her-up-too Edward is always my favorite kind.  I get a little woozy imagining the sex once Bella's changed.  To paraphrase Lady Gaga, if love ain't rough it isn't fun.  Hells yeah!

Glad things are quieting down for you.  So sorry about your loss -- truly.  Hope you're okay, Laura.  X O

That was perfect.  Everything about it, from the gifts from Rose and Renee, the toasts at the reception, Jake imprinting and coming to the wedding, the cabin, the wedding gifts to each other, their nerves before their first time, their first time, the gift from Jake, and the bath, all wove together to create the perfect chapter of Edward and Bella becoming husband and wife.  Job well done.

Now that they're married, I can't wait to see which list items you tackle first. 

THAT WAS AMAZING!!!!!

I'm not even kidding.

I think that should've been in the book.

AMEN.

 

Wow- another fabulous chapter!!!  It was almost as hot as my wedding night. (and that's saying a lot.)  :)