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Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

I love your version of the wedding night!!! Oh an the whole cufflinks deal was awesome!!!

Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control

I think that is the hottest fucking thing I've ever read.  HOLY SHIT!

Reviewer: Amanda_Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Amazing!  I cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: MeiSun (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

Fabulous and wonderfully long... so much dealt with here.

I LOVE Edward's panty fetish. Too funny. And sexy :)

Another winner... thanks!

Reviewer: SpiderMonkey (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

that was awesome!

Reviewer: Burrberry Bugsy (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Oh my god, *fans self* I've been waiting SO long for this chapter and all I can say is you definitely did NOT disappoint. I have no words, honestly. I just, I loved it. And I applaud you and thank you so very much for writing this. You truly have a gift, and I'm so excited to see what else you have in store for our favorite couple =)


Reviewer: Crystal Twi Rican (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control


Reviewer: isabellatrix (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT PERFECT!  You couldn't have written it better.  Amazing.  Perfect.  Thank you.  THIS should have been the scene in Breaking Dawn.

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

You are an amazing writer, and you are my hero!  Thank you for sharing this with us.  For those of us intensely disappointed with book 4, you have given us a happy ending.  For me, you've given me closure that I so desperately needed.

The love making was the perfect blend of sweet and hot.  The gifts and toasts made me cry.  Just wonderful.  So emotionally packed--perfect.

Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Great Job!!!!! I loved the chapter! The best so far.

Reviewer: Twitterpatted (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Choking, Sobbing, Snotting....Charlie's thoughts were heartbreaking and perfect and Jacob's note... also perfect.  The 2 parts that made me cry...go figure.  I thought it would be the vows or something like that.  I loved Bella's gifts to Edward.  Such imagination on every level.  Thank you so much for sharing your creativity. LOVE YOU HARD.  Oh, almost forgot, NICE LEMONS YOU GOT THERE !  Must go change panties again.

Reviewer: bridesmaid (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:18 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Awww.  I love the Jacob twist in here.  :)

So if Edward had a condom, that means, NO RENESMEE? 

Reviewer: simply_obssesed (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:15 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

this was the worst chapter yet!

and by worst i mean the best, only that you killed me with all the foreplay.

it was absolutely perfect. and you even gave Jake his happy ending.


Reviewer: RiRi (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding


this was so beautiful!

I love how the rest of the story is full of lemony/humorous/fluffy freshness and this chapter was just full and admiration! Great job!

Reviewer: pixiekat (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Ahhh Laura, what a beautiful chapter! The love & joy at the wedding brought a tear to my eye. The passion & nervousness was just beyond perfect. And Jacob's gift, what can I say? He finally understands.

Thank you so much for pouring your heart into this story!

Reviewer: cassandra417 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

omg you did it again girl...another incredible chapter! looked at the links for the dresses they are beautiful. there are so many things i want to meantion...where to start?! totally shocked me when they went to the cottage. i was expecting them to go somewhere else, but i loved how they just had an intimate night with a bubble bath to follow the moment we've all been waiting for. the letter from jacob was genious and he imprinted making me feel so much better for him. there's just so many good things floating around in my head about this chapter, so i'll stop there becuase i can't think logically to put them in a way that makes sense haha. don't worry so much...i loved how the chapter turned out and i can't wait for the next one!

Reviewer: jesyka_haha (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Three words. A.Ma.Zing! I have been waiting for the chapter and you did not disappoint. We at TSTA are thrilled beyond words. You did the wedding and wedding night all of the justice that I have come to expect from your writing. You truly have a knack for this sort of thing. Thank you for sharing. -Can't wait for your Smut Monday piece.

Reviewer: ANEEHS1981 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Loved it.  Why couldn't SM done this in her story?  You story is awesome!

Reviewer: JGUZMAN817 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding


Reviewer: jewelryjunkie (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

This was absolutely perfect! You have given readers who were a bit dissatisfied with the love scenes in BD a really amazing compensation. You executed the wedding and the wedding night beautifully, and verrrry sexily! Thank you for providing the links too! It was so nice to see what you envisioned come to life and enrich the reading experience.

I cannot wait to read the next chapter for sexy times with Edward & Bella on Isle Esme!!

Reviewer: ChelaGraciela (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Omg I wish I was half as creative as you are!!! This chapter was mind blowing. Everything was beautiful!! The wedding, your vivid descriptions, Jacob coming (not sexually hahaha), even their first time!!! It was all so perfect, so tender, and magical.  I'm seriously considering saving your story then printing it out and making my own little mini book (just for me I'd never EVER try to steal you work or anything, but let me know if you DO NOT want me too, I'll respect that =)) Anyway I don't know how else to say that this chapter (and you) is (you are lol) amazing!!! Thanks for sharing with all of us <3!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: eclipsedawn (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

So, so, so perfect. I wish this was how it had been in Breaking Dawn.

Reviewer: christid_md1 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Loved it!!!  Charlie made me cry and Edward made me...well made me wanna do naughty stuff to Mr. Christid_md1.  Cant wait for more!

Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Lovely, lovely, lovely. This was one of the best chapters I have ever read, hands down!  Everything about this was even better than I thought it would be.  I am so glad that you are going to continue writing this story!  Ready to read more....

Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

Ok so the wedding part made me cry, you wrote it beautifuly!

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