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Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Omg they're married! The wedding was beautiful and so was the wedding night. It was perfect and sweet. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
aww, so cute!
Reviewer: Sierra_Sitruc (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Hallelujah!!!!!!!! That's all I can say at this point. Everything else past this sentence would be gibberish.
Reviewer: mskohl (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
The blood works for me. It makes perfect sense. If it offened anyone, please, they shouldn't be reading NC17.
Great Chapter. I had to get some family stuff done btw reading and reviewing, so I'll just move on, but I wanted to make sure I said something since you did in you A/N.
Reviewer: Horizon77 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
There was absolutely no need for you to be nervous about this chapter! Holy crap! It was everything I was looking forward to and more. You captured everything perfectly from the ceremony, to the toasts, to THE WEDDING NIGHT. And Jacob's card? I'm stunned and speechless and completely happy!
Tell me you're writing this through Bella's change! You need to have your hand and some vamp sex! Thank you a hundred times for sharing an outstanding chapter!!
Reviewer: bella_edward05 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
omg. This was soo goood. I had a huge grin on my face on the wedding. Even Jacobs nte made my tears watery. LOL
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
4900 reviews? Not surprising at all, Ms. Laura!
Something else I forgot to mention in my long ass review. I'm very happy that overly cautious Edward used a condom, at least that first time. To avoid the creation of demon spawn? NO! But his venom-semen would have surely entered Bella's bloodstream and caused a post-coital vamp conversion to happen. I really scratched my head on that one when I read BD.
Oh yeah, LOVED Bella's recording of her heart beat! And especially Edward's sweet reaction to that. ahhhh.....
Oh no, just read in the forum how sick you are! How in heck did you manage to do all you've done lately with your family, put out this most epic chapter of all and be sick at the same time? You ARE a machine. Laura, I'm sending you virtual chicken soup, lots of love, and a wish for some quiet time for you to recover! GET WELL!
Reviewer: bludazie (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
That was absolutley beautiful! Tears......it's exactly perfectly, the most accurate description of the wedding night we never got!!! From the bottle caps, to the act, and Jacob's note. This should be in Breaking Dawn!!!!!!
Reviewer: AwesomeSauce76 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
LOL!! I LOVED Edward's final fantasy, in front of Jacob and calling him a fucker. PRICELESS!
Reviewer: Stacey Joyce (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Fantastic chapter Laura of course!!
Absolutely loved Rose and Alice giving messages to Edward coming down the aisle and the toasts--especially Charlie's, it was soooo sweet.
Loved Bella's heartbeat on the ipod!
The whole Samantha was ok- I'm so team Edward though that I don't really care what happens to Jake, lol. But I did love the letter taking care of the treaty.
As for the lemons--are you kidding me?? You NEVER disappoint!!!
MWAH!
Reviewer: Robin Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Oh my.... (as I fan my heated face) That's about all I can say. I have now read your entire story and LOVE it. You id great on this last chapter, you conuld have made it a bit over the top, but you didn't. It was very "tastful" so to speak. You are doinging great and keep em coming.
Reviewer: larajean (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Your a great writer! I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Marliarna (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I have read this twice in the last 24 hours.
How do I love this chapter? Let me count the ways....
The toasts were perfect, touching and funny.
Bella's gifts to Edward were wonderful, most especially the recording of her heartbeat, and his reaction---if a vampire could cry, I think he'd have been sobbing.
Jake's gift to Bella was absolutely amazing and a true gift from the heart.
So much better than an "emergency vampirization." (I understand why SM did that--to make sure that Bella, like the rest of the Cullens -with the exception of Jasper and Alice-- was on the verge of death before the change--but I like your way better.)
Edward's POV during the lovemaking--WOW. Just WOW. So joyous, So loving! I've always thought it should be like that. Thank you for giving them the joy they deserve--especially Edward!
Reviewer: xjennjennx (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
GREAT chapter =)
Aw, and I'm sorry to hear about the death in your family!
Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:54 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
This is the best story I have ever read. i was addicted for 3 days reading this.
keep up the good work. Cant wait to here what they are up to next. :)
Reviewer: northernlight (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
OK how am I going to sleep now?
Yet again I am so caught up in your story, I wish I could read it in a black bound book form, and carry it everywhere like I do now.
you rock!!
love love love from canada
Reviewer: Graveyarder03 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Thank you so much for re-doing the Wedding! SM's version was not what I thought it should be. I appreciate you getting Jacob some (NON Spawn of Bella and Edwards!) to mate with.
I love the wedding dress and accessories you picked out, beautiful!
I do hope that you will continue to write even after Bella igoes vampy... I want to see the rest of her list fullfilled!
Reviewer: tmr (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I was SO happy when I got the alert email that you had posted a new chapter!
What a wonderful and sweet chapter! I loved that she recorded her heartbeat for him. They are married! Wow. I can't wait for their tomorrow.
(I hope your kids are now well. And, my condolences on your loss. Thank you again for continuing this addictive story, especially with so many important things happening. All best wishes!)
Reviewer: AwesomeSauce76 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Love love LURVE how this story is developing!
I am soooo glad that others find the idea of Edward cumming on Bella to be hotter than HELL!
(BTW, I don't know if you've ever seen it, but that end scene where he is behind her... it totally makes me think of that movie Secretary. One of my all time favorites, and hands down one of the hottest scenes in the movie. If you've never seen it... definite. must.)
THANK YOU!
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I'm sighing & smiling with happiness! Nothing more needs to be said, I think. XXXXOOOO
Reviewer: mskohl (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Great Chapter! I'm waiting for the blindfold to make an appearance this week. I know that's not what he meant, but he didn't think of phone sex either.
You didn't say where on her she got her tattoo. I'm insanely curious. I guess I'll find out when Edward does.
Emmett is such a child. geez. Of course, it's exactly what a brother would do.
Thanks again for the long chapter.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Love, love, and love some more.
Reviewer: fencing babe (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Fanfucktastic! Now I need to go and find my husband.
Reviewer: mattys_mama (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
YAY! What a great wedding, what a great wedding night, what a GREAT wedding present from Jacob! :-)
Reviewer: TopazHeart (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
That was very sweet and a little 'hot' as well. I love it that they got to have both.
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