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Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I like where the story is going. Late joiner.
Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
That was... very satisfying. I love how they're coming together (haha) emotionally as well as physically.
Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
To use Bella's words: HOT DAMN!!!
Reviewer: Ruka (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
With most fan fics, people can't really pick up the style of writing that Steph M. uses, but you pull it off masterfully. I really feel like this is something that she wrote, but with others, it kind of seems like a pathetically written daydream. You are an amazing writer. Keep it up. ^_^
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
5100 reviews! yay!
Laura, I sure hope you're feeling a lot better
Author's Response: Wow Richelle! You never let me down! Feeling better today. Wrote my Twicon fan fic for the contest, and now I'll turn my attention to the next chapter of The List. I hope to have it submitted the beginning of the week, guys!
Reviewer: jdhsmomth (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
That was beautiful! I loved it! The gift from Jacob was nice. Can't wait to see what happens on the honeymoon!
Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I like that she's keeping a diary. First times only happen once...
Reviewer: s3xyr0s (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
love it! are there more?
Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Awww! Beautiful!
Reviewer: BaseballGirl (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!! Oh, Emmett can always be counted on to bring the pain, and hilariously so!
Phone sex was fantastic.
I'm thinking the tattoo needs to be on her hip, or over her heart? Definitely not the tramp stamp.
Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
That was insane, woman! How do you think up this stuff? By this time tomorrow night, I hope my husband will be unknowingly thanking you for inspiring me!!! If I last that long...
Reviewer: dzjoanna (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Awsome and very sexy
Reviewer: jadeblue55 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
“What? What am I missing?” - Emmett
Haha thats so funny!
Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Wow, this just keeps getting better!
Reviewer: simkid91 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Ah if only it was in the book
Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
O.M.G. That was awesome!
Reviewer: Avaleigh1 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Bella's presents to Edward were spot on. And Jacob's was so sweet.
Reviewer: alyssalove (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Thank you so so much for that!! Tht is how I beleive the real thing should have gone. I never understood why SM had them try for the first time millions of miles away from help. This was beautiful and tasteful and wonderful.
Reviewer: simkid91 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Eggs? Oh god no not eggs! VAMPIRE Spawn!
Reviewer: BaseballGirl (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Christ, is there anything hotter than Edward coming unhinged? No, no there is not.
Reviewer: twitart28 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
WOW!!!!!! well miss Laura cullen you sure brought my fantasies to life!!! you are a great writter!!! this is my first review because i couldnt stop reding long enough to write a review, plus i was just so turned on that it would'nt of made sense anyway!! I love how you read my mind on how I wanted their sex life to be, you see when i read the books i instantly became obsessed like so many other twilight fans. but i was dissapointed that it was written for a pg rated audiense because i'm a bit of a perve i like it dirty and sexy!!! damn i have never been so horny reading, i litterally felt what bella felt on her panties just by the thought of it!! again you are wonderful for doing this for us non skilled writters and please please PLEASE dont stop writting!!! damn i have to go releave some of this frustration LOL!!!! sorry but im sure im no the only one thats said this to you, right?
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Woweeee....Mmmm, Mr. Cullen, one please! (or two, or three, or an infinite amount, yeah, infinite works, hehe)
This chapter went from making me giggley and teary-eyed with her words and everyone's acceptance to OME, THAT IS SO FUCKING HOT! I loved how she realized Edward made his own addition and Alice was like, "Afraid not, sweetie." Sigh, I was eager and full of lust when Edward told about a few of his fantasies while stroking his cock. That shit was........delicious, and I ate it up.
Lastly, incredibly written as usual and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: RazzleA (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
haha. i love how you write rosalie sorta accepting bella.
im excited to hear about the revenge on emmet =]
AND IM EXCITED FOR THE LAB TABLE! HHAHAHA
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
He found the list......AND HE LIKED IT! WOOT WOOT! I love that Edward is so romantic and I was extremely happy to know what had him so aroused in the lake. I was even more excited to hear what the other's were thinking about the tattoo. Lovely job as ever and since I'm eager to see "the lab table" scene, I'm outa here.
Reviewer: BaseballGirl (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
::keels over dead::
which is a damn shame because I would have loved to live to see Edward's "revenge."
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