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Reviewer: katydid450 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
The spoon scared me.
Reviewer: PinkPrincess (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I have read all your stories so far but could never review before. I just went straight to the next chapter. Your stories are addictive. But i have lost all respect for edward ;) but you have inspired me to make my own list. :)
much love,
PinkPrincess__x
Reviewer: ambermay89 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Love it!
Reviewer: redsnapdragon (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
This story is incredible! Your dialogue, characterizations, storyline - I love, love love it all! Just finished reading up to ch. 21, can not wait for you to write more. Thank you so much for this story!
Reviewer: Marymoo (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Behind her ear, on her neck where he marked her the first time?
Oh, btw, lovin' it!!
Reviewer: Marymoo (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I can hardly wait! WHEN WHEN WHEN already!?! So awsome!
Reviewer: bicrim (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
so, so hot! love the blood talk!
Reviewer: Marymoo (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Jeeze, that was just the best EVER!!
This is what those "other" 4 books were missing! Thank you so much for fixing it!!
Reviewer: ambermay89 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
AMAZING!
Reviewer: Marymoo (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Absolutely AMAZING! That was so fun to read, I think I found a new favorite author! Thanks!
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Oh God this story is so emotional so good. I can wait for more, so pleeeeeeeeeeease more more. Thank You
Reviewer: Marymoo (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Mindblowing!! This fills a niche I hadn't thought of before, and don't ever stop!!! I have the movie on right now too, so it's extra hot! Thanks!
Reviewer: ambermay89 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
WOW! That's awsome! I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Marymoo (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
That was soooooo awsome and amazing! I feel like I was in the room-I feel like that is exactly what she is really thinking! Great job!
Reviewer: imcool1 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
keep writing!
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Well I have been reading all afternoon and night and i finally got to the last chapter and ofcourse was left CRAVING MORE! I had to restrain myself from commenting after each chapter or i'd have just repeated how much i was enjoying it. I have a lot to say...so please forgive me for that. The Twilight saga has reawakened a lot of fantasies and feelings in us girls all over the globe. and i have to say for this adult girl, your fanfiction has flared all those fantasies to life instead of being purely imagined. (because of the PG13 books) I found myself enraptured in your story. I can also relate to it a lot too and i don't think i'm the only one. Anyone else feel like they were turning into a nympho when their sexuality started being awakened? Another fanfic that actualy has been published but is for Jane Austen's "Pride & Prejudice" is Mr Darcy takes a wife & nights and days at pemberley by Linda Berdoll. Is the continuing story of darcy and elizabeth's nightly exploits following the marriage. another book that left us all wanting of action. but i'd recommend those 2 too you if you were a Darcy fan ;). As your style of how Bella lusts after Edward reminded me of that. I truely loved your writing and i have recommended your story to a few other adult fans. I'm waiting with baited breath for more chapters to come. thankyou so much for your time and soul in your writing.
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I've been a bad reader...I had started reading the first few chapters(I can't remember if I replied to them or not...sorry about that) and then for some unknown reason never fnished. Well, I'm all caught up now and I ADORE this fic like you wouldn't believe...lol! Can't wait for more! :)
Reviewer: AngelAtTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I must say, this is such a clever plot, and fits in with the original twilight saga! Sexy build up *sighs* reading on!
Reviewer: AngelAtTwilight (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2009 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
This story was recc'd to me. Sounds very interesting!
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I don't think I've reviewed this yet. I was w/out internet due to moving for almost 2 weeks, and every story I have on alert decided to update practically! I know I read it though!
This chapter was great! The wedding, which was described beautifully, even w/out the pics of the dresses! I love that Jacob came, and that he imprinted, that's really great for him! I also really like what he gave Bella as a wedding present. That says a lot about his love for Bella. The wedding night, well, what can you say but wow! Just wow! Loved it all!!! Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
OMFG the Aston Martin....DAYUM!!! So much better than the Volvo!
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
As much as I want the list to be done, really crossing something off every chapter leaves nothing for us to want...sorta....lol....
Oh he stole her panties! He told himself he wanted them....LOL.
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Damn she is a vixen! WTG Bella! Crossing things off the list like a wild woman!!!
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
OMFG Bella would DIE if she knew Jasper or ANYONE other than Edward had seen her panties.........but DAMN what a brilliant move on her part!
HOLY HALE Alice is a devious and brilliant woman! Blue panties of her own! SMEXY!!!!
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
The present she left for him.....GENIUS!!!! The list....getting to a higher level of AWESOMENESS!!!
Also...why do I have this feeling he will find the list? I mean...sitting in between the mattresses? Why do I get that princess and the pea feeling? LOL. Hmmm...I'm not saying it's a bad thing...just sayin'.
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