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Reviewer: ReMaBe (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Oh.My.God.
*faints*
Seriously, that was sooo hot!!!! Edward losing it is so f-ing hot!!!!!
You go girl!!!!
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I'M NOT SURE HOW, BUT YOU JUST KEEP MAKING EACH CHAPTER HOTTER THAN THE ONE BEFORE! OH. MY. GOD.
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
PUBLIC BLOW-JOB...HOT! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! THIS HAS GOT TO BE MY FAVORITE FAN-FIC I'VE EVER READ! I CAN'T WAIT TO CHECK OUT MORE OF YOUR WORK!
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
OMG...YOU'RE F'IN AWESOME! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT ELSE IS "COMING"!
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
YOU'RE INCREDIBLY DESCRIPTIVE...& IT'S SO EXTREMELY HOT...I MIGHT JUST HAVE TO EXCUSE MYSELF FOR A WHILE & "PULL A BELLA"! :)
THANKS FOR THIS...WOW!
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
HOT! HOT! HOT! I don't think any more words are necessary!
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Damn....what more can I say...I'm really "feeling" the story here!
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I'm loving this! I can't til things get more "hot & heavy"! Keep it coming!
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Double WOW!! I think that's enough for one night.
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
OMFG!!! That was HOT!!!
Reviewer: PurplePeopleEater (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2010 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Ahhhh this story is so amazing!
I LOVE IT!
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
I think I liked this chapter best of all! So, ...I have no words to describe the aching beauty of Edwards re-emerging human memories, the romantism and love of it all. the deepening of their relationship, their perfectness for each other. I like all the smexing, but the connection between them is the best thing, something you have expressed so well.
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 09:35 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Well, I almost laughed when I thought you were going to end the story with the 69er! The real ending was so much better. In this chapter, I loved the girls hunting together, the cabin wrecking (ner ner to Emmett, after this teasing in the original book). I loved the lovely presents, and the wonderful book again.
This has given me so much joy, another way to get close to my favourite fantasy people
You have an amazing talent, you are a skillful, thoughtful and masterful writer. All the best in your future endeavours, Ill be buying anything you write:)
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
What an awakening, the reaffermation of life, a life forever. Im starting to get that bereft feeling, you know, you said seperation anxiety. What am I going to do when your story is finished. Now Im crying again
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
I said last review that I loved the book (Bella's countdown for Edward) but I really worship it now. It is such a lovely touch, bringing comfort, forgiveness, occupation, sharing and love-truly genius idea.
I was also really touched by Jasper and the way he helps through this. I remember thinking when reading through the original that it sucked that noone knew it was still painful for Bella, so thankyou for easing things for her (I know its only fiction, but when you suffer form OCD of the Cullen variety, you feel it, everything)
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
So bitter sweet. I love the way they all help find human experiences to jam into her last days, almost as they were doing it for their own lack of final things, a laying to rest of their own lack of goodbye experiences. I love the feeding Bella food as an expression of love. I love Edward getting in all his final human moments enjoying Bella too. I LOVE EDWARD IN LEATHER. And I love the book idea, it made me all teary & gooey. And the final moment, the bite, very hot!
You obviously live and breathe these characters. I hope you win the category for the story you most wish was Canon, you so deserve it. I'll vote for you
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
That was fricken' HOT!!!
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Its nice to have the slow seperation and good bye moments without all the pregnancy drama from the original books. Its nice to hear Edward acting like a typical 17 year old. I love your version, your alternate Bella/Edward universe. It has the essence & feel of the original, with a true life edge, very skillful
Reviewer: CrazyCullens17 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
You are a God. This story is fucking amazing!
Reviewer: Persephone23 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
That was beautiful. I laughed. I cried. and yes I even jumped up clapped my hands and squealed at times. That was an amazing story.
Reviewer: Bubblespike2 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 01:15 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
I can't wait for Edward's List. Fantastic!!!
Reviewer: PoisonAngelTears (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2010 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I love the story soooo much. The first time I read it was on Fanfiction.net but I still loved it there and I love it a LOT here. Sorry if I sound a bit stalkerish or weird, but your work is so...awesome! :) I LOVE IT!!!! XOOOX, PoisonAngelTears (author of Hidden Eyes on FF.net)
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
This is such an awesome alternate version, you are a God, you work magic of your own, I freakin love you so much right now. THIS should be your day job. What a story weaver you are. All the blood, sweat & tears are worth it.
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Aw, I cried as Bella went to each family member and shared her feelings. It was so nice! Point for you, nah nah for Stephenie. The lab scene was sweet then smoking/meltingly hot! Even better was Edwards quiet stroking sessionas he went through his fantasies (I think I need a blood pressure pill, I spontaneously combusted).
Lots of sweet, sentimental family moments, with some lustful playtime thrown in- all gold :)
Reviewer: middlewife (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2010 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Nice to see the list admired in its glory and now embellished in mutual admiration. I love that the love story is so tighly threaded through here, very masterful
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