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Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Laura, you've outdone yourself with the cowgirl scene. I don't think you will ever be able to top that. But I sure as hell look forward to seeing you try!
Reviewer: dancing_in_my_underwear (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG BEST HONEYMOON EVER!!!!!! I loved it and I can't wait to read the next chapter. I'm figuring they are gonna be back in Forks and Edwards fantasy of "against his bedroom door" will take place and put an even bigger grin then what I have now on my face! :D
Reviewer: lovebuggkiss (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
awh do i feel it coming to a close?
i hope edward see's the sweet stuff she wrote.
Reviewer: Hermia (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Oh dear god, that was fucking incredible! Sweet, fun, hot and wonderful. I love the playfulness and the intimacy and the fun. :D So much.
Reviewer: CarrieJ (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
loved it loved it loved it loved it!!! Thank you! I'm looking forward to how you write when she is changed. I'm guessing there's no Renesmee in this story? And thanks for adding the pictures to the chapter notes. I tried to look at the pictures you posted in your bio but I was never able to see them. So thanks (again)!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Hi Laura, 5300 reviews? Wow! Congratulations!
Will review this chapter soon...still reading.
love, Richelle
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Okay, great chapter...but the photos!!! They were fu**ing fantastic!!! **just broke my own rule about never using profanity in a review***
I actually started laughing as soon as I saw the first photo...but the last photo...well, I think everyone knows about the last one...
I just turned into a puddle...
Don't know what you have up your sleeve for the next chappie, but I know I'll love it just as much as I have loved all the others!
Reviewer: sherilynn (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 08:00 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
pant pant pant....will do anothe later....still panting...
Reviewer: sariedee (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
ome! holy crap! this chapter was as awesome as shirtless rob! lol
Reviewer: IngenueFatale (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Um. Okay. So.
First of all, I was talking to Sara and as we looked through stories, I suddenly said, "By the way, what happened to The List? I really miss that one." And then the update appeared in my inbox and any sleepiness I was feeling just fled.
I LOVE the mix in this chapter. The talking, the emotions, the sex (duh) - it all just worked so well together. I like that she did the striptease and that instead of talking about it immediately afterwards, Edward went ahead and gave her two more list items.
God, I love you. This was so great to read right before bed!!
<3
Reviewer: kiki855 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
i am died.....love it girl!
Reviewer: LoveJasper (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
AH! amazing chapter!!! I love your story. It's definitely one of my all-time favorites... and thanks for that last picture at the end!
Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
woah! i think that last picture made my heart stop for a second lol i seriously just like paused and stopped breathing. ooo and i loved the cowgirl outfit picture, it was exactly was i have pictured when i was reading the chapter. amazing chapter and i've been waiting for the seduce strip cowgirl thing ever since edward wrote it and wow! i'm speechless! i can not wait to see where you are gonna take this next! please hurry! and i hope your feeling better!!! xoxo Melissa
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Hot Damn! That was HOT! I found myself breathing all heavy through it! Absolutely loved it!
Reviewer: mslane (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
That was quite the inspiration for your honeymoon chapter wasn't it? I'm so glad that neither of them got angry about the list. It was quite a lemony chapter but a nice way to get things settled. :) Alice is going to get it when Bella gets home but then again, maybe not. hahaha
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
This chapter was perfection...'Nuff said....
Reviewer: astupidlamb (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
It's like 12:30 and I'm dying to sleep but just reading this I was like, "Just...one...more...chapter..."
THANK YOU!
Worth staying up for.
Now, I must sleep so that when I wake up, I can continue :D
Reviewer: lovebuggkiss (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
:) amazing. can't wait for more. :D
Reviewer: chicabg (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Just a wonderful story YOU ROCK as a writer. Can't wait to read more stories from you. In many ways this is the way it should have been. You did a great job explaing some of the untouched things between Bella and Edward. And Bella thanking the Cullens was just so touching. LOVED IT. LIke I said YOU ROCK for a great story. THANK YOU.
Reviewer: hermeyb (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I laughed out loud at Emmet's text.
Reviewer: Absyy (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I thought the symphony was a nice touch ;] x
Reviewer: willis713 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
The List was awesome. You are a very talented author. I have recommended The List to all of my fellow Twilight friends. You have given the readers something a little "extra" between Bella and Edward.
Good luck in publishing your novel.
Everyone should read this, now!!!
Reviewer: Absyy (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Aw, sweet ending there :] x
Reviewer: chicabg (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Totaly understand about the cars your way is better. Now the next chapter. AWESOME WRITING.
Reviewer: amberdale (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
WOOOOOOOOOW :)
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