this is really good - will there be more?

OMG!  You make getting out of bed so worthwhile.  I guess the fact that I don't have Edward IN my bed, makes getting out of it not too difficult either, but getting onto the computer and finding a new chapter is just plain FUCKTASTIC!

What a great great chapter.  I loved it so much.  Again, you painted just such beautiful romance and love even when rough and tumble.  It's ALL JUST PLAIN GOOD!  I loved "Stripping and riding now. Talking later."  With his resounding "Hell yes."   Aaaahhhh, just so plain good!   What a way to start my day!

Thanks for sharing, Ms. Laura.  Love you TOTES!!!

Excellent inspiration for an excessively hot chapter. *applauds* Also, Yay! for half-naked Pattinson pics. Every fanfic should have them, really.

Oh man! That was worth the wait. Thanks.

that was great i loved it very steamy i cant wait to see what happens next

WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!1111

I feel like I need a cigarette and I don't even smoke! haha

That was SPECTACULAR! My favorite chapter yet, I must say!

It was incredible in length, detail, and just overall style. You are amazing at what you do and surely you must know this by now.

I must confess that my favorite of the 'positions', I guess you might say, would have to be in accordance with Edward's, from the back.  It's so primal and raw and yet erotically beautiful all at once.  It's also incredibly hot because it brings out  Kinkward and we all love him! hehe So imagine my pleasant surprise when I read Number 35 was to be fulfilled. Yay! haha

We love your writing and we love you for allowing us to read your words. Cannot wait for what's to come. (Pun perhaps? :P)

~ Much admiration and respect

P.S. Lovely inspirations ;)

I'll give you a more detailed review:

Oh yes. I like me the 'motherfucker' part. LMAO I really really loled. It was awesome. Very intense, in more ways than one. Oooooooooogggghhh. His dirty mouth makes me want to clean it with my very own tongue. You make me dirty and sex-starved.

And then the thunder part where he got all 'miiiiine' oohhh yeahhhh. That's what I'm talkin about. He was so aoeaodsfjls;dfaldf it was almost caveman. Fucking sexy. He just took her and took her right. Woo!

And I love how he tells her that the fucking was great, and that 'talkin' could be a go. The way he said that just made me rip off my own panties.

And how he just names off the numbers. Him remembering and vocalizing is just like a begging for me to do him right. It's almost like angry hot fucking but better.

I love how Bella is so confident. Especially confident now. It does great things for her. Like touching the fucking = ]

And I DO like them being VERY vocal about their needs.

And the "playing with fire, little girl. Just wait..." kinda really really made the little wings of my heart flap like whooshwhooshwhooosh.

And this: "I want to see you watching me fuck you." Wow. Ballsy and sexy. I got really hot just then.

Good Lord.

= You made me really happy.

Ohh fuckmesohard those half-naked pictures of Rob just did me in when I saw them! Mother of God.

I can't believe you skipped over the majority of the honeymoon! We were just getting started! = [ You're not done, are you?!

This chapter............. was so different. And the confidence in each of them just made it even better. And the befores were already outstanding. Woo! I was giggling and laughing and squeeeees were unstoppable. My jaw hurts from biting on the blanket so hard to not scream aloud! It was great! VERY satisfying. My Gaw. Please don't stop! More, please? = ]

Author's Response:

Thanks for the two great reviews.  I wanted to respond to your middle comment there.  Deciding to make the honeymoon one chapter was a strategic decision and I wanted to explain it, especially since I spread out the weekend over three chapters.  In the weekend chapters, every chapter advanced their relationship or the plot in some significant way, thus each chapter continued to move the story forward.  I could not figure out any way to do that with the honeymoon.  Honestly, additional honeymoon chapters would have been almost entirely for the purpose of the smut, and though fun would really have done little to truly advance either plot or character development.  I'm sure some would argue otherwise about my story, but I really do intend it to be primarily about their relationship, and not about the smut.  I am starting to run out of time to continue writing fan fiction (I would like to spend June writing my next (original) novel), and therefore I have additional motivation for wanting the plot to move forward so I can bring this story to its natural conclusion.  I'm not exactly sure how many chapters are left, but definitely no more than five.

That was a great Chapter

Ummm...awesome. As usual.  I really don't know what to say, except that you almost killed me with that Shirt-free Rob photo at the end.  Honestly.  Like my heart actually almost stopped.  It was sort of epic.  You are so win.

Holy snikeys lady! Wow... I want my Edward and my list right now! If I wasn't sitting down I would stomp my feet hehe! I was jumping in my chair like a school girl when she was talking about the outfit, which by the way was awesome! I think I might vote this best chapter ever! I loved it hehe!

I am sorry you weren't feeling well and were so busy, but as usual you came through magnificently! I loved every minute of it! I can't wait to read more about what happens! Oh and the last addition to your photos....really perfect! HEHE I love it! You are amazing! I just can't say it enough!

OMG I have no words !! I don't ever want this story to end lol

That was great!  Always love your writing!  I can't pick out one particular thing to write about because I loved it all!  From your writing to the length of the chapter!  The chapter was worth the wait!  Rock on!