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Reviewer: Mura (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Dammit, dammit, dammit! Okay, so I totally love your story, however I do have to lodge a complaint. After painfully avoiding fandom sites like the plague all week so that New Moon's Edward reveal wouldn't be spoiled, you spring this on me outta nowhere! GAH! COME ON!
Reviewer: jaime12576 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I just ripped out the pages of the honeymoon from Breaking Dawn and replaced them with this chapter!!!! All I have to say is FUCK you're good!!!!!!
Reviewer: maria1991 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
oh god perfect.it was worth the wait!!write more more moreeeeeeee.
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
You're right, those pictures do help solidify those images in my head. Can I just say this chapter is FREAKING HOT?! It's unbelievable! And you just have to post that last picture of shirtless!Rob and give me a coronary, AGAIN. My poor little heart.
This is so freaking incredible, totally love this chapter and I adore the smut to bits! Totally looking forward to more updates!
Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
OMG, I'm such a smut whore. Good thing nobody else knows besides you and me. Thanks for feeding my addiction! i was really missing having a new chapter to read, but I was easily and happily distracted by Shirtless Robathon '09 too, so it's all good. I'll have to check out the forum sometime soon. XOXO
Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
another "oh my!" chapter :) Loved it!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Great chapter. It seems that Edward is enjoying Bella's list a lot. lol
Please update soon?
Reviewer: Christina Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
This was definitely one of my favourite chapters! I'm more in love with Edward than ever after this week. The toplessness is just too much to take. I may never have a pure thought again :P
It's sunday morning and I'm so ridiculously hot from this right now! It feels wrong somehow :P I really like their experimentation and trust with eachother. And I just LOVE EPOV. It's really awesome to be in his head...
And thanks for sharing that picture. I already have, like, a hindred of them saved, but I don't think I'd seen that one, so thanks ;) The world is definitely a better place for having shirtless pictures of RobWard in it :D
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
OMG.. it's been an hour and i still can't get this stupid grin off my face! my family is asking me already cause i look like and idiot.. hahaha! i can;t even talk so i can;t answer them. i feel so giddy and happy about this chapter! i needed to have a change of undies as well. hahahahahahah =)
Reviewer: bridesmaid (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Haha. Can we have a peek of Edward's List PLEASE with Cherry on top and vanilla syrup and nuts and mallows? Haha :)
Reviewer: breakingdusk (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
WOOOOOOOOOOO The hotness that is THE LIST!!!!! Wow the whole chapter was unbelievable but HOT DAMN the thunderstorm......WOW!! lol yea by far the best chapter yet!!! Woo
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
fabulous chapter- i really enjoyed it!
please update soon!
Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
*speechless*
Sincerely,
ed-chick
Reviewer: Kalle (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
The last picture provides the greatest inspiration for all. ;)
Reviewer: truelove4ever (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
OMG I LOVE IT IT WAS AMAING, IT WAS SO SO SO SO GOOD,
AHHHHHHHH
HAHA
X
Reviewer: starfish_fairy (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
So sweet, so romantic and sooo lemony. I loved it! I have been waiting for this chapter and Laura, my girl, you did not disappoint. Woohoo...I'm having great dreams tonight. ;]
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I don't know what to say...except I need a change of panties! OMFG...the cowgirl was my favorite part, no the wake up after the dream...no no no, the part from behind on the railing. THAT was my favorite...no, maybe the description of the shower, how many times he had gone down on her, how many numbers she went thorugh...
I give up...cold shower won't begin to deal with THIS!
You hot girl you...so naughty. So detailed. Worth every minute, day and week of waiting. This was ExB with whipped cream and a few cherries on top! And the pictures were off the chart fabulous...I sense it is all coming to a close soon...I will miss it. But you have out done yourself.
My only criticism...how the fuck are you going to TOP THIS next time! Well, if anyone can,it is YOU!
Note to self: buy 3 pairs of VS red panties for the last chapters! I am going to need them (and about those chaps...hmmmmmm) Thank you Alice!
Reviewer: slapmeonthepatio (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
BEST honeymoon EVER. lucky, lucky bitch Bella. OMG.
Reviewer: AkilahD (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I like your take on Isle Esme so much better than SM's version... damn her and her "fade to black" Another AMAZING chapter! I am glad that you are feeling better!
Reviewer: Tayci (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
................................I don't even know what to say! This story is amazing and this is by far the best chapter yet!! By the time the thunderstorm section hit, I was ready to jump on my husband.. but at 2:00 am he might not like me waking him up (well, maybe he might). This story is so incredibly hot. And the ending to the chapter, I love the way she writes down the sweet little things like his laughter. You are a fantastic writer and very creative. This is by far my favorite story on Twilighted. Thank you!
Reviewer: miztrezboo (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Fucking
Awesome
Just that.. just that..
Reviewer: Verragood (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I so need a ciggy butt and a cuddle. No wait, not a cuddle and good, hard.... you know. I am becoming a crazed lunatic over Twilighted and your story is the main thing feeding my addiction. "Your story is my own person brand of heroin". Keep the hot hot hot coming and thanks so much for keeping the story going and making it better and better with every new chapter.
Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
i have no words. this is just so perfect and hot and so edward and bella!
Reviewer: AngelMorningFire (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Thanks for the pic. of Rob!!!
Reviewer: Merrisol (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Damn! I have enjoyed this story so much ... but, this chapter is ... the hottest, naughtiest, sweetest chapters I have ever read. And you are right, the shirtless Edward pics are quite stimulating. I bet there are loads of wet panties all over the world after seeing this pics. I always wondered what was under that shirt, and even my imagination didn't do it justice.
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