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Reviewer: Bad Kitty (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
What a week it's been especially Shirtless Robathon '09!!! Loved the update very very sexy and well worth the wait!!! Thanks for the photos too very nice, especially the last one (hadn't seen that one yet!)
Reviewer: han (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Wow, amazing chapter. Well worth the wait!
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
OK ok ok ok ok... So happy this was updated. And wow.
The best 6 words ever written? "Stripping and riding now. Talking later."
Yeah.
Reviewer: dmolle (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:48 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Nice job of sticking true to Bella's character, vocabulary, language choices, expresions, and thoughts.
I love the cold water relating to Edward's body temp, that was true creative genius.
Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
that was insanely hot and i loved every minute of it. :)
Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
that was insanely hot and i loved every minute of it. :)
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I almost lost it when he took her outside during the thunderstorm. That is so fucking hot and erotic and ...... shit!! (Yes, it is one of my fantasies. LOL!!) I am so enjoying this story. I love it.
Reviewer: Winelovers (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Can I just say WOW? I was so excited to see the update...This was the BEST yet...soooo freaking HOTTT!! You are so talented and my heart is always racing after reading your chapters...I just don't want it to end! I can't wait to hear more of Edward's fantasies...
And the pictures....wheeewww....nice addition! Always nice to see a shirtless Edward :-) What I wouldn't give to be on an island with him...LOL
Reviewer: aliciaqu (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Oh. Wow. :) Very nice!!! Great chapter and great writing (as always!) Thanks!
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
This is the best chapter ever!!! everything was perfect. There are no words...
Perfect!!
Reviewer: MrsJasperHale (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
First off: welcome back. hope your feeling better.
Second: OH MY GOD!!!!!! THAT WAS HOTT!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Mrs_Bellacullen (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
OMG! OMG! OMG! This has got to be the best one so far! And I completely understand how all the shirtless pics of Rob would be distracting. I didn't get a damn thing done all day after seeing the first shot of him like that.
Hope you're feeling better too btw!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Wow!!!! That was HOTT!!!!!! Thanks for putting up the shirtless Rob picture that just finished of this chapter so nicely. Hehehe :)
Reviewer: chbestcase (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
whew...gasp...sigh..
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Okay, now I have you to blame for a wet computer screen; I can't not lick half naked Rob picks when I don't expect them. Give a girl some warning next time. hehe
Loved this chapter to bits! The striptease was hot, but after on the balcony? HOTT!!!! Like, five alarm fire time. hehe Great job. And, just so you know, I'm still looking up at Rob's yummy tummy. Now there's one treasure trail I'd like to follow. Mmmmmm
Reviewer: cfmom (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I had never worn a ring before. But I loved the way this ring looked on me.
The absolute beauty of that floored me. Marriage is forever - for Edward. This is a huge step in accepting and even being eager for her to be changed. But aside from that - so many men in society today view marriage as almost a chore. Edward cherish everything about it. I love that.
there was something so damned sexy about him asking
This is so true. There is also something, at least to me, about saying thank you after an orgasm. After over 17 years together, my husband still thanks me each and every time. It melts me completely.
I absolutely loved Bella's strip tease coupled with Edward's reaction. Doesn't the silly boy realize yet that Bella will always be the only one with the ability to constantly surprise him?
She reached up and pulled a pillow down, propping it against my left shoulder.
I loved that. It shows that even though she wants to be in control of this time together - she also wants to make sure he is comfortable with the act. Not to mention, she probably wants more feathers for her collection. ;)
Great chapter. I loved it and can't wait for more.
~Lisa
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
ha. I'm sure that last picture helped ; )
The was an impeccable chapter. You've sincerely done SO well with this story!!
Reviewer: spuntinsel (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
can i say first of all, i applaud you for doing anything productive during shirtless robathon. *bows before you*
and besides loving all the..uh...loving, i really liked that bella kept the feathers. :)
i just posted a door lemon a few days ago. great minds.
Reviewer: angbo (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
awesome chapter. awesome story!
Reviewer: LilCullen454 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I absolutely love this story and it was the highlight of my day to see that it had been updated. Great new chapter! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: VampiresWillNeverHurtYou (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
This was my favorite chapter yet! I can't wait to hear more of Edward's fantasies. Update soon! :D
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Wonderful! You are so talented! You should really be published! I LOVED the visuals at the end!
Reviewer: mrscullen17 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
uhhh... can we just print this chapter out, cut it into book sized pages, and go around the world replacing it with meyer's honeymoon? i do enjoy yours muchhhh better- and thats an understatement
Reviewer: Elaine (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
ive loved every chapter of this story, each one has made me lol, is this it or will you be going on untill after the change?
Reviewer: Miss Maree C (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 04:35 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
As always, totally brilliant!
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