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Reviews For The List
Reviewer: Muze (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:13 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Mmmm that was yummy!

Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Yum, what a great honeymoon!

Reviewer: blackwidow16amanda97 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

I absolutely love the story!! :)  Its fantastic! I cant wait for the next one :)

Reviewer: nofangsallowed (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Awesome!  Laura, that was great!  That was what I wanted their honeymoon to be.  I wanted it happy, and you gave us that and I thank you from the bottom of my heart (you've made my heart happy).  I hated all of book 4, especially what SM did to Edward, making him freak out and all that stuff.  You are incredible!  Thanks for helping me heal from the end of Twilight by ending it as it should have.  I look forward to more!

Reviewer: elephantshoes47 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Ahhh, more, more, more!! Greatest. Chapter. Ever.

Reviewer: irishjo (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  So hot and yummy!!!!!!!!  Hope you are feeling better!!!

Reviewer: lostluggage (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

ooooh. best one yet. i LIKE dirty edward!

Reviewer: Ambra (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Once again you have outdone yourself.  Another wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: abc (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

I'm enjoying your story... a LOT!  Can't wait to see how Edward enjoys the blood gift.

Reviewer: sunsunhot7 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

That was a really, really good chappy and a wonderfully detailed honeymoon. Thanks for the pics. They do good things for the visuals and make everything seem sorta real. I love it!

Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

That was fucking delicious.

THUD! at the last pic.

Reviewer: Twiloser (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

So happy!

Reviewer: iredisch (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

awesome!! It's the first time I'm reviewing but I've been reading it for a while. I thought you could use some encouragement to keep writing.

Please keep writing. It's such a pleasure reading this story.

Reviewer: sdcullen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

You did a great job on this story!

Reviewer: humorme17 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:48 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

k so my review is for the lovely picture of a shirtless Rob. he's no edward for me, but just as Rob...dang. lol love the story too :)

Reviewer: scrider (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Oh please, please, please, let this story go on forever! I know that's not possible, but can it keep going for like 500 more chapters??? : ) The List and your writing style are my favorite! You do such a wonderful job, and each chapter is exactly what I am looking for! I just love the mix of loving and romance between Bella and Edward... and I LOVE that your Edward is more accepting of her change. 

I look forward to your idea of her change and the giving of her blood to him. I cannot wait for his reaction to that gift! You have the best ideas!!! 

I will be impatiently waiting for the next chapter.... and did I say I wish this story could go on forever? 

I am glad you are feeling better,


Author's Response:

Would you settle for 250???

Reviewer: aylah50 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

WOW! I literally did *almost* nothing this weekend except read all the chapters of this, and my husband is definitely thankful to you! ;) Amazing! Please keep writing!!

Reviewer: onyx8514 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

First of all I'm happy you are better! I look for this story update everyday and almost fell out of my chair again when I saw it ...and the hot pic of rob! I would have so done that with the feathers and had a blast with them and want to keep them. I think the cowgirl thing was hilarious cause if it were me I would have look at him all dressed up and said really...this is how you want me! Lol this was a hot chapter! I think more should be added to the list and darn you for teasing me with only one more of his fantasys she should make him write his list down on the plane trip back while she is sleeping or something so we can have some more hot Edward and Bella love! It gives me lots of ideas that my boyfriend loves and I make him just think I'm creative! Lol! I just love Edward and Bella love stories cause it makes me feel true love is still alive! And where did you get that Robert pic? Email me! Thanks and dying for the next chapter already!

Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

FABULOUS! Although now I worry that this is drawing to an end...? Sigh. All the absolute best things in the whole wide world must end eventually I suppose...

Reviewer: Striking Green Eyes (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:00 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Good Grief, where did you get that pic of Rob Pattison.  I think my heart skipped a beat.

I have been missing this story, thanks for posting, I hope you post more soon!!

Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Oh my GOOOOOD! I haven't even read the effing chapter yet and I've literally been out of the country for over a week (Antigua) but I scrolled down... and rPatz is on tv right now (MTV awards)... sikd;aajf! Best night of my life!

Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

DAMN IT WOMAN!!  This is EXACTLY how I imagined wishing the original books were when I was reading about the chaste and sadly lacking honeymoon.  I loved the humor and playfulness between them and all of the list that got checked off.  I especially loved the new list at the end recalling all the sexy times and sweetness they shared.  This chapter was HOTHOTHOT, magically delicious, and still filled with love.  MASTERFUL!!

Reviewer: sophie921 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Oh, Laura, Laura, Laura.....

I didn't get you anything except a measley review, and you just epically delivered the most golden chapter yet....and you did it sick and tired.  Girl, you got game.  Let's all throw cowgirl hats up in the air with a big yee-haw, ride 'em cowboy yell!

I enjoyed the way you played this out, all of the scenes, the tender moments, the language....this just rolls out like an unstoppable runaway train, taking everybody on the ride of their lives.  I am so looking forward to the way you will handle the change -- my imagination is in your extremely capable hands!  You rock!

Reviewer: girlys75 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Mrs Cullen,

You did it again ! You got me totally HOT with your story. I know I'm giving you way too much information about my personal life, but just for the record, my husband thanks you...

Please keep writting The List, it's my favorite fanfic.

When can we have the next chapter ? Hope you are doing better.

Truly yours,


Reviewer: Lilly9999 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Awesome chapter!!

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