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Reviewer: wretched_lover89 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

freaking awesome. can we get to bella's change please? i need to read something along the lines of " and edward pounded me with wreckless abandon" or something or im going to explode!

Reviewer: littlelady (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

I love you I love you I love you!

You took one of my most treasured visuals from the story and made it way way better.  The feathers!! I love the feathers!  And I am just in love with the way Bella makes him feel.  Like the feather incident.  The way you write it, they just seem so completely made for each other.  Of course, they are, but you write it so much better!  Her acceptance of him, and all of his ways, is just incredible.  Her placing the pillow by his shoulder was perfect.  And she always knows what to say.

This chapter had so much good stuff going on.  I love the house, the pool, the pictures were awesome, and the cowgirl outfit.  And shirtless Rob!! I will never tire of that pic right there!  That is the picture that does it for me!

You are awesome, and the update was such a sweeeeet surprise!!! Love You!

Reviewer: geg (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon


Now i have to re-read this chapter with the last picture of robert in mind.


thanks,i really mean it.

Reviewer: koolkelli19 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Loved every bit of it! :) Great job.

Reviewer: CullenReader (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

good god the way he took her and fucked her on the balcony was phenominal.

Reviewer: Tilla Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon


Reviewer: hrobinson7289 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

I love this story! It's amazingly well written, and it's given me some new found confidence with my boyfriend :)

Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Laura,  Once again, a perfect chapter.  Here's what I loved:

1.  The teaser scene you put in the forum- wow.  Its so sexy how he continues to fight for control, yet gives her what she wants.  They work so well together, with her soothing him and helping him to focus.  Really, really well written.

2.  "Motherfucker!"  I was squealing over that scene!  I love how Bella pushed him once again, he trusted her and fun was had by all.  Wow, again.

3.  His big verbal reveal about her numbered list items, outside during the thunderstorm!  I thought I was going to faint!

4.  As much as you write the perfect lovemaking scenes between these two, I do agree it would have been redundant if you had spread the honeymoon out to more chapters.  I agree plot and character development wouldn't have happened.  I didn't feel this chapter was too short at all.  Numbers 1-3 above made it perfectly satisfying.

5.  What made this chapter completely perfect for me is Bella writing this at the end: "36, the number of times he really laughed."  Edward's century long pain and angst were well chronicled in the books and always saddened me.  I haven't read Edward's emerging joy better anywhere than I have here. 

Laura, you make my heart happy.  That is, until I read that there are only 5 more chapters to go!  I understand you want to write your own characters and I'm happy you're going to do that.  However I'm deeply saddened that my favorite version ANYWHERE of the characters of Edward and Bella (and my favorite/best plot line) is winding down.  You know this is my alltime favorite ff, hands down, bar none.  You know I think you're a terrific writer, the very best I've seen in TW ff.  I just selfishly wish this story wouldn't end, at least until 4 thick volumes were filled!  haha

Ok, you still make my heart happy.  I'll just hope you occasionally come back between writing your own stories and grace us with more love and romance from the supernatural world of the Cullens. 

I'm really excited to see how you wrap us this little bit of perfection that is The List and what other things (and how) they'll cross them off!  woohoo!

love, Richelle  xoxo


Reviewer: Paint_it_black (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions

This is the best fanfic i have ever read! Makes me laugh too!! You are really talented =]

Reviewer: dragonfiregirl (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: bleedingmascara (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

omg!!! i absolutely love your story!! and dayummm!!!! for the last picture *giggles* keep up the amazing story and keep feeding my addiction!! xx

Reviewer: redsnapdragon (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

I love this story so much!  Thanks for a great chapter.  It was a lovely read.

Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

LOVE IT!!!! I am so excited to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: xtothey (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Woo! I need a cigarette!

Reviewer: hg20 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

I love you're story!!! You are the queen of romance and lemons. Please tell me you are going to write a chapter on Bella's change and lemons to go along!!! Update Soon.

Reviewer: erinnnzomg (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Awwwh (:
It's not over, is it =/
It can't be over! I need more XD
Edward and Bella sexyfuntimes are WIN! :D


Reviewer: GGervasi (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:49 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

I was so excited to see another chapter added!

And as I can see, from the last pic, a little inspiration was all that was needed.

You're a great writer.  I love your story.  It's simple lines like, "I love you silly girl. You make my heart happy."  that keep me reading, and smiling and laughing all the way through!

Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Wow.  Awesome update!  Amazing honeymoon.  I liked the detail you went into about the house too!  And that it wasn't exactly like the house in BD.  I can't wait for the rest of the story...27 down...14 more to go!

Reviewer: Marjojo (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Wonderful chapter! I'm glad they finally talked about the list! They were absolutely adorable here. I liked also Bella throwing the feathers around and both of them saying they'll never be embarrasssed in bed. 

Reviewer: More Than My Own Life (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:11 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

It was excellent. All of it. I stayed up all night reading each chapter with more and more anticipation. Please, keep writing!

Reviewer: wackymac (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

this is awesome. Please do at least an outtake of Edward's list. I love a naughty Edward. A REALLY naughty Edward.

Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Fantastic.  Absolutely PERFECT.

Jeez - I LOVE dirty talking Edward too. I need a cold shower now...

Reviewer: ECD (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Love your story. Can't wait to read more! Please don't make us wait too long!

Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

Holy fucking crap!!!  That chapter was the hottest, most incredible chapter ever!!!  OMG, I want that man.  Then seeing the gorgeous shirtless picture at the end, fuck, I need to go take a cold shower to cool off.

Reviewer: michellerella (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:34 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon

I heart this story :)

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