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Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Wow. Awesome update! Amazing honeymoon. I liked the detail you went into about the house too! And that it wasn't exactly like the house in BD. I can't wait for the rest of the story...27 down...14 more to go!
Reviewer: Marjojo (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Wonderful chapter! I'm glad they finally talked about the list! They were absolutely adorable here. I liked also Bella throwing the feathers around and both of them saying they'll never be embarrasssed in bed.
Reviewer: More Than My Own Life (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
It was excellent. All of it. I stayed up all night reading each chapter with more and more anticipation. Please, keep writing!
Reviewer: wackymac (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
this is awesome. Please do at least an outtake of Edward's list. I love a naughty Edward. A REALLY naughty Edward.
Reviewer: Tasty1 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Fantastic. Absolutely PERFECT.
Jeez - I LOVE dirty talking Edward too. I need a cold shower now...
Reviewer: ECD (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Love your story. Can't wait to read more! Please don't make us wait too long!
Reviewer: Steph29 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Holy fucking crap!!! That chapter was the hottest, most incredible chapter ever!!! OMG, I want that man. Then seeing the gorgeous shirtless picture at the end, fuck, I need to go take a cold shower to cool off.
Reviewer: michellerella (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I heart this story :)
Reviewer: More Than My Own Life (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
I truly hope you never stop writing
Reviewer: HopeStreet (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Thank you so much for another wonderful update!
Reviewer: mschultz2 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I really love this story - and how you have put Edward and Bella through their thoughts and fantasies! I hope you keep a story going after the honeymoon.
Reviewer: arfalcon (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Wow, you just as inspired by the shirtless Rob pics as the rest of us!! That was an unbelievably good chapter. Phew, i'm gonna need a shower, cause it's Monday morning and hubby's already off to work.
This was just the best.
Reviewer: madasabrush (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Laura I have NO. WORDS.
The shirtless pics of Rob have had me hovering on the edge all week but JESUS. WEPT. This chapter has just about pushed me over the edge. I am done. I'll have to come back to the thread when I've recovered.
For someone who wasn't well you sure as hell managed to out out one hot chappie.
Mwahsies bb
Reviewer: betsi (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Hi I'm a little late to the party ; ) I hope there is still lots more to come ?
what i wouldn't trade to be Bella, I liked the list at the end especially how she noticed how many times Edward really laughed that was sweet! loved all the other stuff too,
looking forward to more x
Reviewer: tahliaa hale (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
omg omg omg omg oh god!!!
that last pic i sware i nearly died! go he is fukin SEXY!! mmm what i would do to him!! lol soz got a bit side tracked! ha lol
anyway this chapter was realy realy good!
hope you update soon!
tahliaa
Reviewer: meyerjc2002 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I love how you did the honeymoon in one shot. It's to bad they have to use condoms but hey, one more thing to look forward to after the change. Hope you are able to post again soon.
Reviewer: tmbleweed17 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
OMG i fuckin love it! this story is wonderful!
Reviewer: fanpiremom (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 12:19 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
You are awesome. I am glad you had so much inspiration. Shirtless Rob inspired me, but just not in the same way ;)
looking forward to seeing more items marked off the list!
Reviewer: Mab fan girl (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Its official You are a fucking GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!! And the blood thing only made the story better!
Reviewer: ccf (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I loved it. More more more I need more. Wow! That was great and I loved the pictures. He has a great body! swoon.
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
you evil evil EVIL GREAT GREAT GREAT woman!! but gah.. this photo........... is.....
wow..................
excuse me. I must stare more..
oh and I loved your chapter..
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I don't know which to thank you for more, the lovely really long length of the chapter or the fabulous, devine visuals at the end!!! lol
I didn't think this could get any hotter, but it did. It also managed to be tender and a tinsy bit deep as well. Bravo!!! We're loving this story for a reason--your fab. talents!!!
Reviewer: melstermomof3 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Thank you so much Laura Cullen!! This is my favorite fanfic and that was one of my favorite chapters in The List. I love how uninhibited they were about discussing Bella's list and how Bella fulfilling one of Edward's fantasies seemed to push him over the edge and make him lose some of his control. You are such a vivid writer - I could picture it with such clarity and it was freakin' hot.
The List is my favorite fanfic and I make sure to spread the word to all my fellow Team Edward friends about story. Can't wait for the next installment.
Reviewer: kathat (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
you give the best descriptions of hot sexy love-making I know! Its just like you're inside their body feeling what they're feeling! Good Lord!!
Reviewer: Rose Brown (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
All-righty now!! I am new to fan fiction and this is my first review of ANY story (not the first I've read...you popped my review cherry!).
First, I wanted to say that I never really understood why folks got so excited when they got an email that a new chapter was posted. Being new to FF, I have the advantage of starting stories that are many chapters in. I read comments on other stories talking about the joy of getting that update email, but REALLY, how EXCITING can it be? I didn't understand...That was until this morning, when I got the email about this chapter. I am too old for this shit but...OMG!!! I think I squeeled. I was soooo happy. Okay, now that that is over with... :)
I never thought myself much of a smut reader. I am a hopeless romantic and love happy endings and these are some of the things I enjoyed about the Twilight series. (Plus, Edward is HOT - even before Robert was cast!) Now, I think I am addicted to smut and you are one of the reasons why! AND, I really enjoy your writing. I never got enough in Twilight of the rest of the Cullen clan, especially Emmett, and you give us a very believable account of what goes on in the Cullen household. I LOVE that Bella and Edward are trying (well now they are DOING, if you know what I mean!), I LOVE that Edward is overprotective and nervous (a side you don't see in SM version enough IMO). I LOVE a teasing big brother. I LOVE everything about it.
So, without taking up too much more of your time, I wanted to say THANK YOU. Thanks for thinking it through and writing a believable, sexy, and truthful story of the love between Bella and Edward and their stuggles to take it to the next level!
YOU ROCK!!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the great review and welcome to the world of reviewing! So glad you're enjoying the story! And I'll try to keep those update emails coming! XD
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