Forgot to mention in my earlier long-ass review.  The pics were great.  The house is so beautiful.  Yes, Bella's costume is QUITE inspirational.  And Mr. Pattinson?  Well, can I just say the Wardrobe Dept screwed up since those pants should be hanging much lower.  hehe

loved the blood talk! excellent explanation! totally within the story!

This was exhaustingly perfect. All kinds of kinky,, wonderful, smuttiness. I'm running out of cold water, due to your story. Please tell me that you will be continuing this foray into their mutual vampire experiences. I Will Beg! My favorite oneshot of all time was a challenge thing for a dirty talking Edward contest. The only way to calm Bella while she was changing was to tell her what his plans for her were once everything was done. Thing is, I can see that fitting in perfectly with your story. It was glorious and I Really enjoyed it. Thank you. Really, thanks.

 

~Mia

wowza! hot stuff, missy.  It's obvious by the way you write you are having a fun time writing. I  can't wait to see what you do when they are both vampires!

I love you I love you I love you!

You took one of my most treasured visuals from the story and made it way way better.  The feathers!! I love the feathers!  And I am just in love with the way Bella makes him feel.  Like the feather incident.  The way you write it, they just seem so completely made for each other.  Of course, they are, but you write it so much better!  Her acceptance of him, and all of his ways, is just incredible.  Her placing the pillow by his shoulder was perfect.  And she always knows what to say.

This chapter had so much good stuff going on.  I love the house, the pool, the pictures were awesome, and the cowgirl outfit.  And shirtless Rob!! I will never tire of that pic right there!  That is the picture that does it for me!

You are awesome, and the update was such a sweeeeet surprise!!! Love You!

Loved every bit of it! :) Great job.

OME!! MORE PLEASE!!! LOL! Wow!

Laura,  Once again, a perfect chapter.  Here's what I loved:

1.  The teaser scene you put in the forum- wow.  Its so sexy how he continues to fight for control, yet gives her what she wants.  They work so well together, with her soothing him and helping him to focus.  Really, really well written.

2.  "Motherfucker!"  I was squealing over that scene!  I love how Bella pushed him once again, he trusted her and fun was had by all.  Wow, again.

3.  His big verbal reveal about her numbered list items, outside during the thunderstorm!  I thought I was going to faint!

4.  As much as you write the perfect lovemaking scenes between these two, I do agree it would have been redundant if you had spread the honeymoon out to more chapters.  I agree plot and character development wouldn't have happened.  I didn't feel this chapter was too short at all.  Numbers 1-3 above made it perfectly satisfying.

5.  What made this chapter completely perfect for me is Bella writing this at the end: "36, the number of times he really laughed."  Edward's century long pain and angst were well chronicled in the books and always saddened me.  I haven't read Edward's emerging joy better anywhere than I have here. 

Laura, you make my heart happy.  That is, until I read that there are only 5 more chapters to go!  I understand you want to write your own characters and I'm happy you're going to do that.  However I'm deeply saddened that my favorite version ANYWHERE of the characters of Edward and Bella (and my favorite/best plot line) is winding down.  You know this is my alltime favorite ff, hands down, bar none.  You know I think you're a terrific writer, the very best I've seen in TW ff.  I just selfishly wish this story wouldn't end, at least until 4 thick volumes were filled!  haha

Ok, you still make my heart happy.  I'll just hope you occasionally come back between writing your own stories and grace us with more love and romance from the supernatural world of the Cullens. 

I'm really excited to see how you wrap us this little bit of perfection that is The List and what other things (and how) they'll cross them off!  woohoo!

love, Richelle  xoxo

 

i love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this story so much!  Thanks for a great chapter.  It was a lovely read.

Woo! I need a cigarette!

Awwwh (:
It's not over, is it =/
It can't be over! I need more XD
Edward and Bella sexyfuntimes are WIN! :D

-erinzomg