Shew, that was Steamy (fanning myself - giggle). The chapter was FABULOUS. I loved it. Its so great that their intercourse is love making and not sex. It was sweet, romantic, funny (the bit with the feathers was so cute) and in addition to being passionate, sexy and just plain HOT. So CANNOT wait for the next chapter. I see some very rique and hilarious chapters in the future with Edward's List & their college adventures. It will be awesome...

As always, loved your writing, loved the chapter, can't wait for the next one. Please post soon...

AliciaZA

OH MY GOD!  AMAZING!  Don't even have words to describe how wonderful that chapter was.  You are so good at writing this stuff!  It's sexy, and sweet and hot and loving and you are just full of awesomeness!!!!  Anxiously awaiting another chapter, as always.

The symphony was simply magical.  The preceeding and following scenes, animalistic but controlled... LOVE IT!

Loved it!  Those are the honeymoon moments we missed in Breaking Dawn!  But wait, no weird-arsed vampire/human accelerated pregnancy?  Thank god! 

If that's how you write their honeymoon, I can't wait to read your take on Bella's change and the relationsip afterwards.  I am looking forward to Edward being able to finally lose control.  I bet your Bella is looking forward to it, too :)

It was lovely being able to write this review while ogling that lickable photo of Rob.  My review is taking me longer to write ;)

another smokin hot, well written and entertaining chapter. I can't wait to see what they get up to next. especially if it involves finding out about more of Edwards fantasy's, and we must be getting close to Bella being changed, which I am sure will make for very interesting reading.

I see how distracting shirtless rob is, but please don't keep us waiting too long for the next update.

If only all showers could be that..... enlightening.....

Wow, that was...wow.  I had saved that hoping to reading at a less ungodly hour, but I was so wrong.  I'm going to be a zombie at work tomorrow...my students are going to think I'm still sick lol 

Thanks for another wonderful chapter.  I can only imagine how hard the next is going to be considering her time with Charlie is coming to a close. 

Can't wait for more!

Ride em cowgirl!  Great chapter.  very hot, very inventive.  Keep writing, I love your work.

absolutely loved it... stayed up way later than I should have to actually read it, but loved it all the same...

great chapter.extremlly hot!

SO UH,

Amazing story.

I laughed, I cried (when Bella gave Edward her heartbeat) and giggled (heh.)

ANYWAY! Great story. Any chance of doing a story of after her change?

I had to stop reading half way through to leave a review.  THANK YOU so much for the scenes with the feathers.  It was tender, beautiful, and not a little funny.  Everything I wanted it to be in the book.  You have made a truly devoted fan out of me.  Thank you!!

Oh, dear God.  This was perhaps the hottest chapter I've ever read in fanficdom, and I'm a perv, so I read all the smutty stuff.  ;)  Excellent work, LC.  Highly enjoyable.