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Reviewer: missameilia (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
The story keeps gettig better and better! Thank you.
Lynn
Reviewer: missameilia (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 04:51 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Your words suprise each and every chapter. I love the story and the way it makes me smile. Thank you!
Lynn
Reviewer: Twi_hard_sush (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
well, to be honest, this chapter was Okay. because, Bella is isn't the kind of girl who would do things she did here. Fantasies, alright...but the rest was over the top. Dont get me wrong, this what i thought about this chapter, Only.
Reviewer: madame julie (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
laura cullen, first time reviewer. i absolutly freakin love this entire thing you wrote! like it is so sexual and erotic and kinda bad. it is incredible. some of the things you wrote made me tear up in some places. its a wonderful thing you wrote and i just cant stop reading, its keeping me on the edge of my seat. you i say, is a beautiful writer!! :)
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2010 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Excellent!!!
Reviewer: Kataraw11 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
u do no that bella has to be pregnant for there to be abook right
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
That's enough smut for one night!
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
That's enough smut for one night!
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
That's enough smut for one night!
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
That's enough smut for one night!
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2010 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Fricken' HOT!!
Reviewer: sarah_jeanne (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Have I mentioned HOTTEST THING EVER?? Nnngghhh.
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2010 01:48 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Very HOT!
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
Ok. So, I don't normally write reviews after each chapter, but I found myself writing a review after A LOT OF CHAPTERS in this story! It was INCREDIBLE! The SEX WAS HOT, SENSUAL, EROTIC, TENDER...shall I go on? Plus, the plotline of the story was awesome...happy, funny, sad, & touching.
I have to say..this is by far, my favorite fan-fic of any I've read! I'm so happy to see you are getting published...YOU SO DESERVE IT!
I'm gonna check out your other works...I'm sure I won't be disappointed!
Thank you for one hell of an enjoyable 12 straight hours of reading!
Reviewer: sarah_jeanne (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I LOVE this fic! I've read it before, but after seeing Eclipse left me wanting E/B lemons, I've come back to read it again... how your Bella tortures Edward is just. The. Hottest. Thing. Evar.
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
TWO WORDS...FUCKING HOT!
Reviewer: ReMaBe (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Oh.My.God.
*faints*
Seriously, that was sooo hot!!!! Edward losing it is so f-ing hot!!!!!
You go girl!!!!
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I'M NOT SURE HOW, BUT YOU JUST KEEP MAKING EACH CHAPTER HOTTER THAN THE ONE BEFORE! OH. MY. GOD.
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
PUBLIC BLOW-JOB...HOT! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! THIS HAS GOT TO BE MY FAVORITE FAN-FIC I'VE EVER READ! I CAN'T WAIT TO CHECK OUT MORE OF YOUR WORK!
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
OMG...YOU'RE F'IN AWESOME! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT ELSE IS "COMING"!
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 09:45 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
YOU'RE INCREDIBLY DESCRIPTIVE...& IT'S SO EXTREMELY HOT...I MIGHT JUST HAVE TO EXCUSE MYSELF FOR A WHILE & "PULL A BELLA"! :)
THANKS FOR THIS...WOW!
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
HOT! HOT! HOT! I don't think any more words are necessary!
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Damn....what more can I say...I'm really "feeling" the story here!
Reviewer: leideebug (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I'm loving this! I can't til things get more "hot & heavy"! Keep it coming!
Reviewer: chris44 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2010 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Double WOW!! I think that's enough for one night.
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