Yum - very nice.

I cannot stop reading this - holy crow...

I can't believe she left her underwear on his bed! Beautiful! :)

That's the kind of reaction that encourages a healthy exploration of one's body. Damn.

wow...very hot!

I haven't been able to read this story for a while...I was limited to library internet only, and well, this story got censored. Imagine my agony! Braodband is back at home, and I am a very happy girl :-) Anyway, I have read this chapter twice now....I absolutely love the blood element, it is extremely hot! And Edward on the phone, well, that was too good to have only been read once. I think I may have to read that section just one more time...three times a charm afterall. I can not stress it enough, blood-talk is addictive, I want more! As are any mention of Edward's arousal, and Bella's panties.....I love this story!!!!!!

ok, it's kind of weird, but i can totally picture and get ur point of the blood and the whole arousal... i mean he is a vamp and he does crave blood, the 2 of them should be an unstoppable force hahahah!!! i'm not creep out at all and i totally looooved the chapter, it's amazing how u connect with the whole situation... hehehe

Gabs!!

omg i just read this all and fucking brilliant!! i loved every word of it.  brilliant just brilliant.

I loved this chapter.   You really did justice to every detail.  Thank you.

OHMYGOODNESS!!!!

 

amazingly amazing! 

AWESOME job!

 

i've been browsing more stories from other authors, and yours is BY FAR the best written!!!

 

PLEASE DON'T STOP!

Hahahaha, nice work!!! Is it the end?

I only discovered 'The List' several days ago so this is my first review. I decided to read it after seeing it was the favourite story on the site, I figured it had to be worth reading! I was a bit skeptical about 22 chapters (and I'm guessing there'll be more?) based around Edward & Bella's sex life. I figured it could get very samey and there would just be too much repetition. I was also worried that it would be really cringeworthy to read!

BUT, I didn't have that reaction at all. Your writing is very easy and addictive to read. And the nature of the story, made me want to read more and more. Many times I though 'Ok, I'll just read this chapter, and then go to bed' but I stayed up to read the next (and the next!). I love it! You've somehow wrote a story with so much sexual content, that doesn't seem perverted or cheap in any way at all. And you managed to keep the characters of Edward and Bella. Obviously Meyer never went as far as to describe that aspect of their relationship, but if she had, I can imagine it wouldn't have been dissimilar to how you wrote it. Perhaps not quite as x rated as you sometimes get, but I was just glad that I could easily recognize their character traits.

I'll look forward to reading the next few chapters. Each day, I've looked forward to reading more chapters and now I'm quite disappointed that there aren't any more! Hope you keep it up. :)

I agree, the pictures and links were undoubtedly helpful... especially the last one ♥ ;-)  I liked this honeymoon much better than the original, though I am a little sad there may not be a baby in the works...  but just a little.