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Reviewer: Bella19011918 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
wow. that was amazing!
Reviewer: ang01 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
This was awesome.. I enjoyed it so much.. Please write more..
Reviewer: Bella19011918 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
im completly speechless.
in a good way.
Reviewer: Bella19011918 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
wow. that was awsome!
I didnt think it would happen that quick but i did. i loved it
Reviewer: Bella19011918 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
that was funny. in a good way. I liked it =)
Reviewer: themrs (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Bow chicka mow wow.
This chapter cracked me up. I wish I had more free time to catch up and read. love it
Reviewer: saluki168 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I read 90% of this in one sitting before I had to stop and...um...take a break. You write the smuttiest of smutty smut - I love it!!!
Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
nice thought of your : ) yeah i agree that ist nice of edward letting her chose because he always make dission for her without asking for her option.
liked that last part when edward said those thing about the truck and mostly brining up jake. he isnt jealous i like it because it just proves how much he trust himself and bella and their love
loved the payback from bella haha so sweet laughed really hard and much thank you for bringing laugh to my day :D
haha edward couldnt last he lost the dare it was so fun he couldnt hold it anymore haha
thank you darlin for this chapter :D
Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
hahaa oh gosh Edward being nervous soooo sweet cant imagine anything sweeter :P
their way of not having sex, but giving theirself orgasms damn that is so hot so damned gorgeous so damned sexy there isnt even much words to discrebe that grrr
i loved bella for saying no, for thinking of edward at that moment, even if they both wanted it so damned much, she is brave that little girl of edward haha
gosh what more is there to say? yeah of course the Symphony so wow, so incredible want to hug edward for being so lovly and doing such a thing gosh 'Masen Edward' he misses being that boy...
eay last but not least i wanted to say its so fun when i read that they are so proud of themself causing the other scream/moan/cuming haha so fanfuckingtastic :D
thanks hun for this chapter
Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
gosh my heart is melting for them my heart is beating for them and most of all my heart is calling for them :D
wow what a chapter darlin' this one was cool in some places (like the blow job) and really hearttaking in others (like the looong conversation before bella fall a sleep AND the big sun hitting on Edward) in other places in this chapter it just was joyable :D
thank you for this chapter hun : )
Reviewer: themrs (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
HAHAHAHA - Gotta love the Emmett text.
Reviewer: themrs (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
See - this I like. You have a perfect mix of the dirty/sexy with the lovey/affectionate/sexy with this story.
Reviewer: rpattzdude (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
HO M E THAT WAS INCREDBLE SO HOT AND GREAT THANK U FOR A GREAT WEEKEND IM HAPPY TO SEE EDWARD HAPPY BY SPOILING BELLA IM SORRY FOR THEY BIG LETTERS MY PHONE IS NEW AND WIERD BUT THANK U AGAIN DARLIN=)
Reviewer: NanMcCullen (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I can't wait for an update. I don't know when the last one was, but I'll check back for more whenever I'm over here. :)
Reviewer: NanMcCullen (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I loved the wedding, and Jacob's gift to her. I like how there is no Renesmee and how Jake imprinted on someone before the wedding. Made everything that much easier. Which I am assuming was your point. :)
Reviewer: NanMcCullen (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Wow... lots of information. Loved the chapter!
Reviewer: NanMcCullen (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Mmmmm... an Edward sundae. Delicious.
Reviewer: NanMcCullen (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I like how your Edward has learned to listen to Bella and take her opinions into account too. Not just with the car, but with their intimate relationship. He doens't just assume he knows best and refuse her everything. Great job!
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
I cried! It was beautiful. You are awesome. I sound like a complete idiot but I've had less than 8 hours sleep in 48 hours, my children & I are sick , and your writing as rendered me speechless. I loved how you changed everything, very poetic, damn near perfect.
Reviewer: NanMcCullen (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
So she gets amazing almost sex AND a thunderstorm. I have a feeling when the storm hits she'll be able to cross that bad boy off her list too. But who am I to say. :)
Reviewer: NanMcCullen (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Well, the scene in the IMAX theater was too hot for words, and then it ended on such a sweet note. Great job!
Reviewer: NanMcCullen (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I think all I can come up with at this point is wow. Especially reading it straight through every moment I get. My mind is numb with a sexual haze. lol
Reviewer: NanMcCullen (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 07:11 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Emmett is hilarious. I loved the banter between them all as they had their intervention. I really love the way you're taking this story. And of course, Raunchward at the end was just fantastic! Wow.
Reviewer: HarleyChick3587 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I just read your fic straight through from beginning to end and OME!That was the best fanfic I've ever read! It was fabulous. Anything to do with Bella, and Edward, and touching, and ... is simply amazing. but the storyline that goes along with this a great idea. Having an actualy list of things to do with Edward is a fun idea, but its even better trying to figure out which items Bella will be able to cross off her list. I really hope that you aren't done with this story yet. I could keep reading it forever.
~Anna
Reviewer: slackalice (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
absolutley breathtaking! thank you
i lost my breath
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