own...I loved this chapter! and I do love Alice... rsrsrsrs

I haven't wanted to pause to review yet but I have to say this story is amazing and reallly, REALLY well done. :)

Amazing!!!  I am spellbound and speechless!

holy good fuck you are good!!!!!

I am loving this story and just can't stp reading.

Its sooooo hot!!!!

This is a freaking awesome story! Has to be one of my favorite vampire fanfics! Absolutely wonderful! More soon, please!

wow.....i read the whole story in one night. that was truly amazing. your an awesome writer wth great ideas. i hope this isn't the end

Sorry, forgot to add that I am going to read your other 2 stories posted on here, but would love to know where I could read more of your writing, if you have any posted on other sites.  I have a feeling this story will always be my favorite, for very "naughty" reasons, but I can't wait to read the other stories.

 

Romo

 

oh my god Laura, you're so talented girl... once i started reading i couldn't take my eyes off not even to sleep it tookme tow days, and in fact i only stop to go to school, but all day thinking about your story

i'm so in love whit everything about your story soooo hot, i preffer this way over breaking dawn... well i love breaking dawn... but i just couldn't believe that their honeymoon was only one chapter...

thank you so much i can't wait to reed more!!

 

kisses from MEXICO

Merit!!!

ciao =)

Gosh darn, woman. Hot, ridiculously hot, as always.

I also wanted to say that sometimes when I am thinking about the twilight books, I think about scenes that you've written and sometimes get confused as to whether or not they were actually in the book. You're giving Steph a run for her money!

Hope you're feeling lots better!

Dear Laura,

I wanted to read this whole story before I said anything and now that I have all I can say is - WOW!!

You should know that I am very far from a teen.  Truth be told, I'm old. Old but not dead! 

I really hope that you are doing something with this talent you have.  I read a lot and I can't remember when I have been this drawn in to a story.  I loved the saga but your changes and how you have expounded has added a dimension that makes it so very much better.  If there were just a way to crawl inside and live it......

I've spent quite a few hours with a very rapid heartbeat, the shakes and an extreme dose of frustation.  Thank you.  I hope that you will continue this story.  We need it!

Do you have other stories and where might I read them?

Thank you, again.

LST425@gmail.com

PS please keep writting!

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the great review and encouragement.  I'm so glad you're enjoying.  If you click on my name it will take you to my profile that links to my other fan fiction stories.  I am working on my original novel (actually one is done and two others are started), but I haven't had the fortune of being published yet.  Maybe one day!  Thanks again!  Laura

oh. my. edward! im totaly taken away wow girl you truly got great no sorry mean fantastic taste :D

thank you for this incredible chapter

Im glad that Edward invited Jake and that he came and most of all im happy that he came with that girl Samantha :D

loved this chapter so much loved it when edward bite himself instead of bella but man what a bite so row and so hard grr

haha it reminded me of Rob P. biting Tyra Banks so fun :P

 

Have a great time darlin'

This was awesome.. I enjoyed it so much..  Please write more..

wow. that was awsome!

I didnt think it would happen that quick but i did. i loved it