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Reviewer: hluvsdogs (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I am going to try this game one day if it is the last thing I do!!
Reviewer: hluvsdogs (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Really great chapter.. I love all the games, talk/banter, and getting their is always the funnest part!! Some forget this!
Reviewer: raeshelle1 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
These chapters just get better and better. I felt like I felt Edward's one minute orgasm! Jesus! :)
Reviewer: raeshelle1 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
I enjoyed this chapter because it showed the closeness that the Cullen men share; u did a good job creating a situation where Carlisle, Em, and Jazz were each able to give Edward some advice in their own unique ways. Gotta Love Em and that teasing, and Carlise is always so patient and wise.
I can't wait to read about Edward's turn! :)
Reviewer: raeshelle1 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I wasn't bothered at all by the talk of blood in this chapter. I feel that it contributes to the essence and appeal of vampires!
I was impressed with Edward's reaction to Bella's revenge! That was so well written!
It was a stroke of genius to link all of the lemons to a master "list" of things for them to do intimatly.
This story was recommended to me and I am glad that I chose to read it! :)
Reviewer: raeshelle1 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
The phone sex was hot!!!!
I can't believe that Em sent Bella that text! HILARIOUS!!!
Reviewer: raeshelle1 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
That was hot as HELL!!!! Bella brought Edward to his knees (literally) and it was such a joy to read!
BRAVO!!
I almost feel sorry for Bella; I know Edward is going to pay her back for her little stunt when it's his turn! :)
Reviewer: raeshelle1 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
This was my favorite chapter yet! I am glad that Bella is managing to break some of Edward's control!
Reviewer: raeshelle1 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
This story is just too cute for words! I love how the characters are a little OOC but still faithful to the original work. The added intensity of your story is amazing! Shit I wish that you had helped S. Meyer with the original! :)
Reviewer: raeshelle1 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
GOOD LORD!!!!!!!!!
WOW!!!!!
That is all! :)
Reviewer: raeshelle1 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
You've done a great job building up the anticipation for the "main event!" I can't wait to see the list realized...and Poor Bella is going to pay for leaving those panties!
Luved the lemon in the JPOV. :)
Reviewer: raeshelle1 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
WOW that was a great chapter! I really like that the Cullens are so comfortable with each other that they can tease each other about intimate details of their relationships!
LOL @ Bella leaving her panties for Edward. I can't wait to see how that turns out!
Reviewer: raeshelle1 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I am so glad that Bella is working through that list! Thank God for Alice! :)
Reviewer: raeshelle1 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I am so glad that Bella is working through that list! Thank God for Alice! :)
Reviewer: raeshelle1 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2010 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I love the idea of this story! I can't wait to see how the list turns out!
Reviewer: akemi (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 11:53 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
edward can mark me anytime!!!!!! and look at bella going Dom on edward.
Reviewer: akemi (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
i will never be able to read BD the same again. my mind will be in the gutter . thank u. lol
Reviewer: akemi (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 05:19 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
the power of pussy...
Reviewer: missameilia (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I want the weekend to go on forever!
Lynn
Reviewer: akemi (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 05:05 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
naughty naughty bella. i love it
Reviewer: akemi (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 04:29 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
who knew that edward and bella would be getting down like that. i got flushed reading that. stephenie totally cheated us.
Reviewer: hluvsdogs (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Freakin awesome! Loved Jasper too!
Reviewer: hluvsdogs (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
New reader to this site... really liking this... great writing, great imigination!!!
Reviewer: joeybb (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
this is very good! im clapping my hands with glee!
Reviewer: missameilia (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2010 06:47 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
The story keeps gettig better and better! Thank you.
Lynn
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