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Reviewer: AngelinaBallerina (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
You made me cry during the goodbye to Charlie. It was very emotional and beautiful.
Loved the vamp t-shirt--so funny.
Looking forward to more--I love your writing. :)
Reviewer: AkilahD (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I love this story!!! I can't wait for the change, but I am not looking forward to the end. Keep up the phenominal work!
Reviewer: Strix (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
i laughed i cried, it was perfect
Reviewer: TwilightMundi (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
This is really good. We're getting there. What was Bella's project? I think that she was writing stuff about her human life, in case she forgets after she's changed. But she was pretty certain of the page length, so maybe it wasn't that. Hmmmm....
- Stacy
Reviewer: Chriscrew (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:22 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
It's hard to say what chapter I loved the most...they are all so good. Sweet, sexy, and most of all well written. I wish you best of luck with your own novel. I'm looking forward to the rest of this story but in a way I'm a little down it's almost over.
Reviewer: viola cornuta (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:21 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
well, endorph you!
this is, as always, just the way the story should have gone, thanks!
Reviewer: Juliamine (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Wow, so much happening in this chapter. Bella seems almost unsure towards the end. Scared even. Great chapter, and the vampire play scene was so tastefully done. I<3 The List!
Reviewer: BethBSB5 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Another fabulous chapter! I like how she said goodbye to Charlie. The gift from the pack was hilarious! I can't wait for the upcoming chapters, but I'll be sad to see the story end.
Reviewer: pinkpixie (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Great chapter. Very poignant, you actually made me shed a few tears.
Reviewer: Lyanna Whitlock Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
update asap i wanna know what happens
Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I absolutely LOVED this entire chapter!
It was so sad/happy. lol
I like that Jake can accept it and joke around about it. It makes me happy :)
Super excited for the scene we're all aticipating!
Are you going to make a sequal at all?
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I can't tell you how much I love this story. I came home for lunch and was so excited to see an update. I called a friend of mine, who is also pathetically addicted, and she is going to her house now for lunch to read this update - lol!
You do a great job!
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
This was so sad. Saying good-bye to everybody and everything. I can understand why she didn't feel ready to leave the house. But, that was quite the yummy scene of the two of them in her childhood bed!
Kathy M.
Reviewer: merryXgirl (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Oh, bitter sweet! This is really lovely. Such a wonderful way to say good bye.
Reviewer: Vampgurl20 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
got to love this story
Reviewer: bumpuscat (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
You really have a talent for writing. I'm really enjoying your story.
Reviewer: chbestcase (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
i am so sad that this is ending. one of my all time favs. of course the coup de gras is coming and we all love that. i m sure you will do it justice. what is the "special" project. form whom, charlie...edward....not sure.
Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I so LOVE this story!! Great and sweet chapter!! Can't wait for the next update!!
Reviewer: ChoccyJoJo (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Yah updates for The List!!!!!!!!!! Yahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! That's all I've gotta sa, really. Except maybe Yaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!!!x
Reviewer: effleurage (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I was so happy to see your update in my mailbox!!! Thank you. I can't wait to find out what Bella's paper project turns out to be.
Reviewer: drotuno (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I love this story...you are doing an awesome job...
Reviewer: greenfirl35 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Laura ~
Let me know how you like the workshop! I'm doing a three-day workshop here in Davenport, Iowa this week (Wednesday - Friday) and I would love to hear how they compare - maybe I'll try the Iowa City one next year! You're only going to be an hour away from two of your most addicted fans (myself and twilightzone). I hope you have a great time! :)
Reviewer: Sarah Peachel (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Oh my goodness. You're not all smut. You are an amazing writer.
Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
You are SO right about waiting for that scene. I am DYING of anticipation over here. Honestly...I cannottttt wait. I haven't been more excited about something that Breaking Dawn since I read it the first time...but this is better. Because it's almost more real, like something that a more relatable couple might do. This story never ceases to amaze me, and only gets more captivating as I read on. Thank you so much for making my summer break a good one so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!
-Shelbie Lyn Cullen
Reviewer: Belle_Morte (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Another beautiful (and hot...oh it was definitely hot) chapter! I must admit I got a little misty eyed there at the end ;)
Oh how I wish vampires were real....me likey that role play very very much! Can't wait for more
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