Oh I love it! SO glad she got an ultimate shower fantasy, although there was only one vampire. But our Edward is only so understanding! Great job with the goodbyes, and my favourite thing was the Vampire Girl t-shirt. Because it is awesome. Although I had thought she would keep the wolf smell to remind her when she was changed, before washing it. But still. Loved it absolutely anyways!

And of course, I'm very excited about the, um, scene. Yaaaay.

Well done and good luck with your original writing, and thanks so much for the update despite your amazingly busy and important RL goings on. You are a star! :)

 

This was absolutely perfect!!  First, the fiery, bold Edward who let his guard down enough to add a little vampire to their lovemaking, and then Bella, reassuring him (again) that she wasn't hurt;  the lovely good-bye visit with Charlie, and Jake's gift from the pack. 

So they're going to Denali to change Bella!  I know you'll make it great!  Have a wonderful time in Iowa.  I know enough about writing workshops to know that Iowa is Harvard to writers, so it will no  doubt be a great experience.

Great chappie! I really like the way your version of everything goes...so much less drama! :)

Flawless, absolutely flawless.  Take a bow, madam, you got it going on. 

I loved the line about 'bad vampire', because truly that is what every woman's fantasy is about -- the bad boy reformed for just you and only you.  And Edward definitely would be the ultimate Bad Boy, reformed to a Prince.  I can't wait until Bella can hold her own with him after the change.  The possibilities are just endless. 

Thanks again for the great ride! 

This was nice Bella and Edward are always surprizing me with their intemacy.

I Loved the first paragraph it was so loving, so moving hmmmmmmmm!!! made my night.

I also fell for Bella.

 

okay so the whole Emmett-knows thing...FREAKING LOVE IT!!! some of my favorite stories are always the ones in which Emmett's mischief become central to the plot hehe. I know I will probably find out as I keep reading, but I just thought of something while reading the end of EPOV section: while this conversation was going on, Edward was not alone in his household. So even if the rest of the family couldn't hear Bella's voice too well, they sure as hell heard his, if he was moaning and...you know...all the while. So, I was just wondering when Emmett is going to use that as material, and why/how in the world would/could Edward forget that his family (i.e. EMMETT) hear this conversation quite clearly?

I'm looking forward to finding out the answers...;-)

omg, I dropped a bottle of orange juice all over my carpet and squeaked like crazy when I found out that you finally updated this fabolous story!! Felt like a little girl on christmas morning  :-D

I have to say that this chapter was so worth waiting for!!! From all the fanfictions I`ve been reading so far I like "your" Edward and Bella most - their development is just perfect and absolutely authentic and it really makes all my dreams come true *verydeepsigh* As I said before, you just found the perfect mixture of real love, pure damn fucking great sex, romance, trust, commitment and just everything that needs to be there! Thank you again soo much for all the effort and love you put into this story!

I`m sad that it will be over soon, but I know that I won`t be disappointed `cause I`m sure you`ll give us a very special ending :) :)

P.S: Pleeeease write us something about them being intimate when they are finally "equals".. I bet that would be heaven ;)

Wish you all the best! xxx

This chapter was amazing! I started to cry during Bella's goodbyes to Charlie and Jake. Her little speech to Charlie was so cute yet so sad at the same time.

I can't wait to see what her little project is!

Yay! Thanks for posting it. After I saw the new New Moon cover I hope this is the end of Jacob for this story. I cringed at him even touching her. Can't wait for more E/B. I'm sure the change will be interesting. Plus, vampire sex afterwards.

great job please ud soon

Great chapter.

the update was awesome~  I can't wait for more!!! 

That was really good i cant wait to see what happens next loved it :)