I know i've read the whole thing before reviewing but I couldn't help it and also knew it's been a while since compleltion so you may forgive me a little easier! Lol! I don't often read lemony stories so had avoided yours for a while as it screamed citrus at me from being on the top ten and the rating. Resistance was futile. It was amazingly good. You had an actual plot which I so loved and the sour goodness fit in nicely every time. :) Well done and a big congrats on the novel. Big deal, big success. X

OMG That is so hot. Him telling her what to do? Both hands together. Amazing. Ah, I love this.

Go Bella! Way to grow a pair!

I can't believe it's been seven months!!!

 

Wow!!

 

It's a tribute to you that you were able to just jump back in to this one.

 

Awesome babe, as always!!!

Wow ! your writing style is right on point w/SM's style. The intimacy ,electricity,hopefulness mixes well with all the Chances...the whole vibe of taking Chances disregarding the danger....I especially like how the dialogue runs true to the books , your grammar , spelling and general phrasing is flawless. I've been reading this untill the sun came up!  Thanx ,   

I agree. Her exploding is something we should avoid. Makes for a short story and I don't think that is what you are going for here. Oh and btw, I think this is like the 5th time I am reading your story. It is my all time fav but I have been a bad reader and didn't review every chapter. I think I only reviewed here and there and then at the end. So I am gonna try to review every chapter this time. *crosses fingers and hopes for the best*

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!

jakey poo!!! love the shirt.

their first night together. aww... it was beautiful. and jakey poo. JAKE!!!

sleeping under the stars. edward is so romantic..

Great story. Most Twilight fanfic lacks depth and details in the plotline, and the sex scenes are often either a bit childish... obviously written by 14 year olds lol, or the opposite where they are SO over the top and filthy that they take away from the romantic vibe these characters are supposed to share which kind of ruins the story. The List was interesting, and sexy whilst still being romantic. Laura Cullen, you are a great writer. The List felt like I was actually reading a more adult version of one of Stephenie Meyers books because you got the style of writing exactly right. Trying to escape the rainy weather here in London, I read 27 chapters of The List in one day.

Keep up the good work, you have some serious talent!

_Bianca

 

Hi!

I am 24 years old, married and have a one year old daughter. I've never read this type of thing, but found this website through twilight lexicon. I LOVE reading and needed a little more of Bella and Edward after reading the Twilight Saga 4 or 5 times! You are a really good writer! I love the darker side of Edward and the more playful side of Bella. It's funny- the things that I adore about them in Stephenie's books I don't mind changed- but only when you write about them! I've tried several fanfiction stories on this website and this is the first one I have been able to stick with! I read chapter 1 after hanging a load of clothes on the line and putting Lydia down for a nap. I read chapter 2 an hour later right before making dinner. I read chapter 3 after sweeping and cleaning the upstairs batheroom! It is like I can't stay away! It is now 11:45 and my husband and daughter are asleep and I am downstairs at our computer reading again! I usually do this with books that I fall in love with from the library or that I buy! I can't remember a story affecting me like this since The Time Traveler's Wife. That is a huge compliment! I don't even mind the nc-17 rating- even though it is not normally up my alley! Okay- now I am just babbling- but you asked for feedback.... haha!

 

Anyways, you have a fan for sure!

 

Courtney Haas

Ohio