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Reviewer: Emmettlove29 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

I am loving the start to this story and I think I am going to like the rest of it :-D great job

Reviewer: ericsookie (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 11:10 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control


Reviewer: RobsFlame (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

Er yeah ... wow. Sorry, I'm not sure I can coherently write what I liked about the first chapter (all those images of Edward getting it on kind of tripped a switch in my brain. Especially the shower and "took me from behind against the check out" one. *Fanning face*).  Lovin the descriptive narrative courtesy of one very (poor) frustrated Bella. Works for me. Looking forward to next chapters ... :D x

Reviewer: ericsookie (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

amazing!!!!! the image i have in my mind is enough to keep me aroused for days! i can hardly type im so excited, well done.

Reviewer: ericsookie (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice

oh my....... this is just what i was hoping for, the way that they both want eachother is tantalising.... keep up the good work.

Reviewer: ericsookie (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

More, more.............

Reviewer: delle1 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2010 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Hey there Laura,

omg thankyou for this story firstly and for this particular chapter.I can tell you I've been a blubbering mess and can't wait to read the next chapter...

Each paragraph in Bella's journal to Edward was awe inspiring and all I can say is that you are 1 great writer.........

Thank you again and keep up the good work.

Author's Response:

So glad you like the book--that is one of my favorite parts too!

Reviewer: goldenvenom (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music


Yes, this chapter has resorted me to using 'eep' to describe my feelings.

Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake

I could not bear to have this story end so I saved the last few chapters for a long while. You wanted a little birthday love and a virtual hug so here they are, just a little late. You have probably already celebrated 40- don't be depressed by that. I just celebrated 50! Love this story and I am thankful I still have some chapters left to read.

Author's Response:

Thanks Randy!  My 40th is coming up in just 3 weeks!  That means it's been almost a whole year since I finished The List.  Hard to believe!

Reviewer: PiperSun (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

OMG I love this story.

I'm sorry I didn't leave a review before, and I'd liked to tell you that I'm really enjoying it.

Reviewer: amynkansas (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

i am loving this!

Reviewer: rollno88 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

I've read many fan fics but this one is my favourite because it feels so authentic, almost like you channeled stephenie meyer's spirit to write a lemony post eclipse story. Awesome!

Reviewer: chocolatelovergirl (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2010 04:23 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I loved it!

You are a fantastic writer!

I have laughed out loud

I have cried


been incredibly turned on.


What a truly talented person you are!


Thank you

Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

This is one of the most touching and beautifully written pieces I have ever read. 

I recall, not long ago, having the experience of finding my parents things (they died 16 years ago, when I was in my 20's), their documents, old photos from the 1920's when they were children (my dad was born in 1922).  I also went back to my childhood home, partial memories forming back into solid ones.  You've captured it perfectly here. 

Reviewer: Addicted2fanfics (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2010 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

Finally finished your story, I loved it, it was great.

Congrats on your book, what an amazing accomplishment!

Reviewer: Gogsnkay (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

I know i've read the whole thing before reviewing but I couldn't help it and also knew it's been a while since compleltion so you may forgive me a little easier! Lol! I don't often read lemony stories so had avoided yours for a while as it screamed citrus at me from being on the top ten and the rating. Resistance was futile. It was amazingly good. You had an actual plot which I so loved and the sour goodness fit in nicely every time. :) Well done and a big congrats on the novel. Big deal, big success. X

Reviewer: AllieH123 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward

I heart Alice. Almost too much and in a non-healthy way. And I think my fav part of this is when he came up behind her and they rested their heads together. So sweet and subtle yet so romantic.

Reviewer: AllieH123 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected

OMG That is so hot. Him telling her what to do? Both hands together. Amazing. Ah, I love this.

Reviewer: AllieH123 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

Hello Jasper! More please! And Edwards reaction may have mah gurly bits all tingly. Maybe. Just sayin.

Reviewer: AllieH123 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions

Go Bella! Way to grow a pair!

Reviewer: AllieH123 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice

Love love love LOVE this scene! Beautifully written darlin! And him holding her arms up? Yes please!

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake

I can't believe it's been seven months!!!




It's a tribute to you that you were able to just jump back in to this one.


Awesome babe, as always!!!

Reviewer: Leprechaun (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

Loved it!  The dialogue is spot-on. 

Reviewer: leesmee (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Wow ! your writing style is right on point w/SM's style. The intimacy ,electricity,hopefulness mixes well with all the Chances...the whole vibe of taking Chances disregarding the danger....I especially like how the dialogue runs true to the books , your grammar , spelling and general phrasing is flawless. I've been reading this untill the sun came up!  Thanx ,   

Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

Reading your story for the second time, actually some chapters I have read numerous times. I probably did not always review, so just to let you know I really love this story. I am so glad that it is still here to keep reading. I think I missed some of the later chapters, so those I will be reading for the first time. I am especially looking forward to the blood chapter, I assume it is here somewhere. Thanks for defining the bucket list, I actually did not know that term.

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