AWESOME Chappie. I loved it!!! I love how Edward is getting to be more comfortable with his sexuality and sex (with Bella's ahem, enthusiastic assistance - lol). Its so great to have Edward and Bella fluff moments - where they're just a couple, that are for once not pondering their baggage (rolling my eyes). I think thats what I love most about The List - and what was missing from Breaking Dawn.

I also really liked Bella's scenes with Charlie (awww). It was so sweet and honest and, true to character, with no mushy stuff (giggles). But I am tremendously curious about what she was typing and what she did with it?!

I think you have done an amazing job with The List and so hope that your novel gets published cos I would love to read more your work. Gonna keep my fingers crossed.....

Cannot WAIT for chapter 24 and the chapter Edward's fantasy was FABULOUS!!

AliciaZA

I think this was my favorite chapter.  So sweet, touching and sexy at the same time.  Excellent work.  Definately worth the wait.

This was such a sweet chapter - I love Bella's scenes with Charlie and Jake.  My favorite part was Edward's POV at the beginning and his new understanding of himself and his nature (very appropriate that he would finally be able to "play" vampire with Bella now).  It was also sweet that he was finally able to let go of his self-flaggelation about hurting Bella and understand that beating himself up was so counterproductive.

Anyway... can't wait until the blood chapter (I have been dying for that! - ha!).

Also - BIG congrats on the Iowa workshop.  Isn't that a big deal???  I bow down to you...

This was a great chapter.  I really liked Jake's gift; I have never been a "Team Jacob" but I found it endearing. 

I, like so many, are waiting for the big moment and I know it will be good. Perhaps we see one or two more of the things from Edward's "list" before the change takes place.

P.S.  Enjoy your workshop; you will kill them with your talent.

I'm not sure what scene you are thinking but I can't wait for when she gives him her blood. Great chapter. Thanks for updating.

Again, another great chapter! Looking forward to the next one.

Great Job!

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story - it is one of my top three favorites!  You are a gifted writer - thanks for giving me more of my favorite characters!  Keep it coming. . . .

Just finished reading this yesterday so was stoked at a new part. I'm really enjoying this so come back soon :D

I whole heartedly agree with the choice of movies- the best!

 

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I've enjoyed reading this story from the beginning.  I've laughed, and blushed on more than one occasion.  But, as this chapter brings Bella's life as a human to a close, I felt bittersweet.  I cried through this chapter, if nothing else then to say my own person good-bye to a character that I've enjoyed reading as a human - with all her frail attributes.  I look forward to the next chapter in their lives...which I'm assuming is the conversion to vampire.

Thank you for such a well-written story.  I can only assume that Bella’s conversion to vampire will be as sensual as her transition to lover and wife.  I can only hope, which is upon my list…

Karen

Yeah for the quick update!!!  I love the vampire girl t-shirt.  I want one!

Great chapter. I loved the E/B interaction. I got a little teary eyed when Bella was saying goodbye to Charlie. Can't wait to read more.