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Reviewer: Lyra Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
i lovee your stories. i cant wait for the next chap. :)
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Reviewer: blind4korn (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Ijust started reading this story about a month ago and was so excited to see a new chapter up! I really love your work, just keep it up!
Reviewer: FilleMilitaire (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Amazing. I am officially addicted to your work. Please! Write more! I beg of thee!
Reviewer: angel1babe86 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
uhh... which scene? the scene where she gets changed and Edward finally gets Bella's blood that she saved for him? :-)
YAY! I loved this chapter and cannot WAIT for the next one!!!!
I <3 you!
Reviewer: Pebbles Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Another great chapter as usual! I really love the development of the characters in your stories. I could not ask for a more fulfilling story from the Twilight Universe and I can not wait for Bella's change. Keep up the great work! (Lora/Pebbles) I distinguish my name because I have a co-worker hooked on fanfiction too and she uses my profile so you probably always have double reviews from my screenname. :)
Reviewer: edwardchild90 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
omg the new ine has to come out soon this is sooooooooooo awsome i love the fact that bella made a list if i had an edward i would sooooooo think of the same maybe more
Reviewer: TiffaniMM (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Love it!
Reviewer: xxsamanthahalexx (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
hmmm.. i like it and i can't wait to see what bella does with that notebook..
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
He. Has. The. Panties. *She sings*
Reviewer: foreverswt16 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Loved it, can't wait for the next chapter to come!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
YUM!!!!
Reviewer: bethc_88 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
For the love of all that is holy... keep writing! Great stuff!
Reviewer: Haruka81 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
OMG!!! It´s the only thing I can say now!!
Girl,... with such an inspiration....OMG, SO HOT!!!
Congratulations and greetings.
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
The goodbyes were just beautiful! Makes me almost wish she wasn't going. Almost!
Another fantastic, sexy, great chapter!
Reviewer: Carolyn81 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Shit I thought I commented already! lol
Laura, that was so damn good! I was fucking bawling my eyes out when she was spending her last moments with Charlie and Jake. That was too much. I always dreaded that in the books, and you made me dread it all over again in such a different way.
This trip to Denali is interesting to me. I wonder what it will be like around Tanya and the other succubus sisters. I almost don't want Bella to change dammit. Their sex life now is just do damned intense! Then again, he is hurting her. I felt so bad for him when he realized he had pushed her too hard into the door. That was a fan-fucking-tastic scene though!
Bravo!!! I cannot wait for more :o)
Reviewer: AwesomeSauce76 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Wonderful chapter!!!
(and yes, I am TOTALLY waiting for the, ahem, scene!)
Why does the thought of Edward actually convincing Bella to do it on her bed just totally drive me bonkers?? Talk about sexy!
Reviewer: hcm126 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I loved this chapter! It was sad to see Bella say goodbye to Charlie, and Jake and Billy, but I know she'll be happy after she's turned, and hopefully she can at least see her father again. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: kellyliz82 (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I enjoyed this chapter. Saying goodbye to Charlie made me sad but the idea that Bella wil be changed soon makes me happy!:) Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Holliebell (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I LOVE IT!!! I cant wait!!! Please dont tease us and make us wait forever lol. I'm sooo addicted!!
Reviewer: VampireCat3 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I loved it, but there is one thing....
If you do not make a sequel, I will kill you!
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I can't tell you how much I LOVE thus story. I swear, Edward saying dirty words gets me every time!!!!
Reviewer: adidas187 (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Great chapter!!! Love this story so much!
Reviewer: bitemealready (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
this is the first story that i am reading on this site and i have to say i am now officialy addicted to it. Your a very talented writer and i can not wait for the rest of the story.
Reviewer: ZephyrEffect (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Loved it! I actually started to tear up while reading the conversation between Bella and Charlie. I'm glad she was able to say the words. :)
Cannot wait for the upcoming chapters, I want to see how the trip and the "change" goes. Thanks again for this fantastic story!
Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Story is just perfect..and that lady is sayin' something! You are a masterful word maker and I have loved your story since I discovered it. Can hardly wait for your next chapter. Hope it is posted soon!
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