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Reviewer: jessica_1_22 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
You are absolutely incredible!! I haven't been able to stop reading this since I found it. I've been up unti 2 or 3 in the morning every night. I can't wait to see what happens next. I know that you have a life outside of this story, but I hope so much, that you write very fast!! I know I'm not the only one who NEEDS to know what happens next. Keep up the good work, and thank you for your story!!
Reviewer: iifyoucjordan (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
everything about this chapter was perfect!
i love it and i love the amount of thought you put into everything! =D
how romantic.
i had tears and a really big smile through most of it!
Reviewer: sabrina55 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Great!! I love it! I cant wait for the next chapter..Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: emilychar (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
This is the way the end of Eclipse should have been written!
I can't wait till the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I forgot to mention in my earlier review how much I LOVED this line:
"God's not here right now, love. Just me. And what I want to know is, just okay?"
Author's Response: Yay Richelle! #6500 bb!
Reviewer: dinx (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
So, I'm pretty new to this site and came here from a recommendation from another Twilight fan site. I must say I've been blown away by this story. I've read the whole thing in two sittings. This is what I think we've all imagined would have happened in Book 4 if SM wouldn't have been restricted to a young adult audinece. Kudos!! I'm really hoping that you continue on as it is definitely filling the void of not having another book to read in the series. I'm very eager to see how the rest of the story plays out. =)
Please reply and let me know if this is something that you are going to continue or if you are done. That way I will know if I should keep checking back. dinx219@gmail.com is my e-mail.
Thanks for the juicy entertainment! I'm crossing my fingers for more! ;-)
Reviewer: lobilu (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Sexy, Hot and Romantic
Everything in 1 chapter.
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Reviewer: TracyCullen (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
I like how this story is going :)
Reviewer: TracyCullen (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I know I should review this but there just are NO WORDS for me to describe this except for Oh My Edward.. This is awesome..Your very talented LOVE CAR SEX
Reviewer: lobilu (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 06:24 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
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Reviewer: TracyCullen (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Love it so much. Once had an ex keep every pair of underwear I had on *after*. it was funny when his mother found the drawer. Upside was he bought me cuter ones to wear..Kinda freaky now that I think of it as an adult..LOL
Reviewer: joanaz (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 02:55 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
You already know I worship you. It's now 3am. I have to be up in 2.5 hours. It was all worth it.
I'm seriously forcing myself off this time.
Really, Thank you.
Reviewer: joanaz (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
Oh. My. God. absolutely wonderful (I'm seriously running out of appropriate adjectives ... as I said once before, words do you no justice).
PS: 'mine.' Fucker. .... Undoubtedly my favorite line.
Thank you *bows*
Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Loved it
Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
i cant wait!!!
Reviewer: MrsDoctor (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 01:10 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Loved it
Reviewer: joanaz (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
Ok, seriously ... it's 1am, I have to be up by 530am ... and I can't seem to peel myself off this computer!
All hail Queen Laura Cullen! (I'm bowing, literally)
God. Thank you.
Reviewer: joanaz (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I haven't written a review in a few chapters, so I thought I'd drop a line (not that I'm remotely thinking that you've noticed, since I was glad to discover your growing fan-base, which simply confirms the fact that you are an absolutely amazing writer) to remind you ... yet again, how truly awesome you are! I am still ... chapter after chapter, completely in love with your stories!!
Sadly, I took the libertly to pull down the chapter tab, only to realize there is an ending to this beautiful fantasy. Admittedly, I was quite saddened to read "good-byes" but I suppose all good things must come to an end. I thank you in advance, ever so much, for having gifted me ... no, us, with this absolutely enchanting depiction. You are truly the greatest!
PS: When this is all over I seriously want to be your friend. LoL.
Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews--and I definitely do notice! I really am a dork enough to read every single review! There are still more chapters coming, though not that many more at this point. And I would truly love to be your friend!!
Reviewer: JenTheTelepath (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Yes endorphins are good hahaha. So I thought I would be done for the night with that last chapter. But then like right after I reviewed my friend Liz texted me and said she just finished this chapter and got all caught up, and said how sweet this one was. And then just because I was curious I started reading this chapter, and the beginning was just so enticing, I couldn't help myself and by the time I was ready to stop I was too far in to tear myself away, I needed to know what happened. So I just said 'what the hell' and kept on reading. But now I'm all caught up (finally) and I feel so much better about it now that I am. And now I can talk to Liz about it without having to worry about her telling me something I didn't know (as has happened before). I'm just glad I was able to stay awake long enough to comprehend all that happened (2:52am and still going!)
This was a nice chapter, definitely a very fitting way to leave everything in Forks, however sad it was. But of course Emmett is the one who gets us all laughing (at least smiling) once again ["but we don't have fangs"]. Oh, and of course, how could I forget what started me off in this chapter: Edward and Bella. So satisfying to fit in the door fantasy before they can't for a while. And haha to be there when Emmett was helping Edward put up a new door.... ^_^
Reviewer: Megan Hitchcock (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I can't wait for more. I love the dominating, mature, and confident Bella. I'll be patient for the next chapter.......but hurry!!! : )
Reviewer: letmesign (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Oh my gosh, I about died at Emmett's text. I love it when he causes trouble like this. Sorry I haven't reviewed thus far. I read your story when I'm...in the mood ;-)
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Reviewer: JenTheTelepath (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Okay, that was fuckin sweet! When Bella found the outfit that Alice picked out for her (the cowgirl hat ^_^), and realized that Edward didn't actually imply she be dressed as a cowgirl, I convulsed in a fit of giggles (I tend to giggle a lot more than I laugh, and for me there's a difference lol). And the descriptions of Isle Esme were so beautiful. I am pretty pale, so I'm not one for tropical weather (really much sun at all lol) myself, but it's like I get to visit worry-free through stories this this one. I gotta work bright and early tomorrow and get up in about 5 hours (it's after 1am) so I'll keep it short. LOVE, absolutely L-O-V-E how many (and how many times hehe) things actually got crossed off the list. It was wonderfully exciting and fulfilling (okay, in the thunderstorm...HOTTEST fucking thing I have EVER READ, no joke). Oh, and I hope you feel better, being sick isn't fun.
P.S. about the last visual chapter note...I am not a huge fan, but holy fucking shit! Hot damn he's been workin out lately (and I can't help but notice {and stare enticingly at} just how low those pants go...hehehe) ;)
Reviewer: Ginny M Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I don't even know where to begin... just... WOW!
This story came recomended from someone I trust ~ on another site I belong to. So I sat down at 11 pm last night to give it a quick look before bed... and never even moved from my chair until my kids woke up at 7 this morning! I Quickly grabed them breakfast so I could get back to finish this.
You captured not only some of the things I wanted to believe of them ~ but things I wouldn't have dared imagine ~ and not only did I believe it ~ I felt it...
The depth of devotion and yearning and passion... you truly brought out their souls for all to see. You gave them life.
I am not nearly eloquent enough in this sleep deprived state but I am now a committed fan! Sign me up for a copy when you sell your first novel...and your second!
Reviewer: TracyCullen (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Ok this was a very personal moment for these two. WOW, he let go. This was absolutley beautiful and actually made me cry. Very proud of these two. Bravo..
Reviewer: joanaz (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Still awesome ... I can't get enough of these. I literally have put off everything I needed to accomplish this evening solely to continue reading your wonderful, absolutely amazing stories!!!!!!!
You're still my favorite person right now!
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