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Reviewer: jeanie (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
this was a great story I have read alot of fan fiction lately but this is by far my favorite thank you for taking time to finish it for me and everyone else to read,
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
After finding twlight and reading it over and over again i thought that until her latest book is finally published that this was all there was a friend told me to look up fan fiction so i did and i read everything i could find then after month of readimg i found your site I have spent the last 3 day reading the List ecery thing i wanted the bok to say was right here your ideas have held me reading kudos keep up the good work i cant wait till the next chapter my own edward lets me read to him he sens his thanks too lol
Reviewer: Bellaflo (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
No more comments, just gonna read chapter 8! I can't seem to stop!
Reviewer: Bellaflo (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
OMG! do you realize you're killing me here? not much to say other than it's so good. every girl's dream. ::winks::
Reviewer: dixie12 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I've said it before, and I'll say it again.....I LOVE THIS!!!!!! I can't wait until the next chapter. Just finished reading the whole thing a second time.
Keep up the great work.
Reviewer: emilychar (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
You have given me back "my" Bella and Edward, I thought I had lost them forever when I saw the movie...everything was all Rob and Kristen from then on out untill I read this!!!
Rob is hot, to be sure, but Kristen is so awkward...the movie was not what I wanted it to be.
But now I actually feel like I could re-read the books with MY Edward and Bella in them all over again and forget that terrible movie ever happened!!!
*happy*
Reviewer: Bellaflo (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
I love the fact that you're including Jazz and Alice and their point of view! =) would you be my best friend? hhahaahha.
Seriously. I'm loving it. and there's something about the way you write, I really like it, I enjoy it.
Reviewer: Chels-Jade (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I read all of your chapters in a day!
It's a lot to take in trust me!
I really like how you're writing puts me in the same head space as it does when im reading The real twilight..
Cannot wait for the next Chapter!
Really want to know what Bella's Project is.
Thankyou for this wonderful Smut!!
-Chels-Jade
xx
Reviewer: Bellaflo (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Excellent, it only keep getting better! And the fact that you included EPOV is more interesting.
Reviewer: Bellaflo (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
well, at this point.. what can I say? you know I love this story. Thanks for the recommendation as well. Will get to it as soon as I finnish with your story...
Reviewer: Bellaflo (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
OMG I love you for writing this! Thank you!
Reviewer: jmink (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Amazing !!!!!! I read all 23 chapters in 1 sitting, i just couldnt put it down !!
Reviewer: Bellaflo (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I just love it! going right now to read Chapter 2!
Reviewer: Jamieson (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Ah, excellent. This story just gets better and better. I'm looking forward to Alaska and the change. Very much enjoying it!
Reviewer: luvnrob (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I have been so obsessed with reading this that I have been late to work for the past couple of mornings!!! You are so talented!! I can not wait until you finish the rest! When did you start writing this? I just found this website on Monday of this week and I am in love! Your story is the first I have read!! You are amazing!!!!
Reviewer: itunesx221 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 03:37 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
cant wait to hear about alaska!!!
Reviewer: Kaoru (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
This is really fantastic. You add enough of the little quirks you see in Meyer's writing to make it seem entirely realistic that it's one of her original pieces. Except she would never go into such erotic detail, for which i am thankful you did :) Really well written, love the direction its going in. 10/10
Reviewer: devina28 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
holy crap, so GREAT!
Reviewer: tuleangel (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
OH MY FREAKING GOD I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! The scene in the biology lab with Bella hanging her head and sholders off the table and giving Edward a blow job!!!!!Either you have one AMAZING sex life or the dirtiest mind ever (OR BOTH)!!!! Either way your story rocks!!! If you have a list to send emails about when your story has been updated I would like to be added. My email is tuleangel@gmail.com
So far favorite quote: "God's not here right now, love. Just me. And what I want to know is, just okay?"
Also, I should tell you that yours is the 3rd story on this site i have started to read, but yours actually inspired me to try and write one of my own
Reviewer: iifyoucjordan (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
<33333 i loved this chapter!
Reviewer: faithpuppy101 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 10:56 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I have to say that this is one of the best twilight fics i have ever read! it is so well put together and all the characters are very well done. i like that you do both perspectives for edward and bella but just sum up the important stuff or stuff we missed when telling it from the other side. cant wait for a new installment!!! thanks so much for writing such a great piece.
Reviewer: XsweetXtragedyX (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
okay,, so I just finished reading this WHOLE story and it took me like two days...and I just wanna say one thing:
FUCKING AWESOME!
hahaha...oh and the part where Edward and Bella were texting when she first got the phone (I think it was chapter 12 when it was said) they were texting and right when EPOV started the line: "this phone is the devil"...CLASSIC! I literally lol'd. It was just too funny!
I can't wait til the next chapter!
Reviewer: TracyCullen (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I am thinking her tatt is on her thigh BUT it can't be because she would never allow a stranger to see that area of her for fear of Edward getting upset that SHE DID. So I am Saying her left breast, he loves the sound of her heart and a tatt there with his name will represent him forever marking her heart. He lives in her heart, as in the poem. Love Emmett..funny forever
Reviewer: joanaz (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
No, No, No ... this can't be over. You'll write more wont you? Pleeeeeeaaasssseee ... LoL. Oh. My. I need to get a grip of myself. But your stories are just so ... fascinating. I can't tell you enough. This one was wonderful. You have such a great understanding of who the characters are. This is just so perfect ... it's like you knew exactly what was missing in the book ... the vivid details of their um, well, sex life. LoL. Because all the adult fans know they would have definitely appreciated picturing Edward, well, you know. LoL.
You're so completely, utterly, and incredibly amazing for this!!!
Thank you Thank You Thank You Thank You
Oh, and please please please continue. I'll beg you if I have to. Really.
Again, You Rule *Bows*
Reviewer: TracyCullen (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
ok, this just left me breathless, speechless and needing more. I am sorry these are not really *Reviews* or are they? I dunno, this just kind of makes me dizzy with pleasure.. So glad to be back with Vamp Edward, been missing him.
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