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Reviewer: ryllyandzoesmom (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
You rock my world! I'm running the whole gamut of emotions here. I think I might love you. Keep up the great work. :)
Reviewer: ryllyandzoesmom (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
You rock my world! I'm running the whole gamut of emotions here. I think I might love you. Keep up the great work. :)
Reviewer: JessEdholm (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
So will there be no renesmee in your story? The condom thing is confusing me. Love what you've done so far. Learning to be patient between posts...its not easy...
Reviewer: penguincullen (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Love this author, love her stories, thrilled that the author took time out on 4 July to comment! So I wanted to add that LauraACullen has a site on FanFiction(dot)net.
She has the beginning of a French translation of The List over there, as well as the very steamy Edward's Fantasy! Happy Independece Day to all us patient readers and our favorite authors.
Reviewer: Bellaflo (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Excellent chapter, as always though a bit more exciting in a different way. Way to go!
Reviewer: nikkijoy (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
WOW!!! sorry I have to keep going but I promise I will come back!!!
Reviewer: saluki168 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
What a wonderful story. I'm sad to see the Cullens leave Forks. There are so many memories for all of them there. I wonder what Bella's project is? 2-4 chapters left? I will be so sad when this story is completed; I have loved every word.
Reviewer: Bellaflo (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
So exciting! I've review all the previous episodes and all I can Keep thinking is How does she manage to get better every time? Amazing!
Reviewer: TracyCullen (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I was hoping that you were going to introduce the non intercourse. Major rubbing like this. Ahhhh takes me back about oh? 20+ years. Kudos. Awesome chapter.
Reviewer: TracyCullen (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I really love this chapter. She rescued him. She wasn't a helpless girl, she was a take charge girl, for him. He needed her and she thought quick. Kudos. Perfect.
Oh, the ice cream cone, didn't see it coming. Loved it
Reviewer: LoveRobward (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Oh hurry and make more chapters!!! This story is lovely! You truly provided what I was missing from Breaking Dawn. While Stephanie is a master...you are so there too! You have helped me escape these past 3 days to a world that is so beautiful. Thank you thank you thank you for writing this. I plan to reread it a million times, and share it w/ as many people as I know would enjoy this. You are great! Thanks again and PLEASE ADD ON SOON. Hope you are feeling well!
Liz (LoveRobward)
Reviewer: Bellaflo (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
going to the next chapter... love it as all of them.
Reviewer: CLADenton (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
omg i have loved reading this. i love the idea of their being more to the story i have been going through withdrawl for. and you wrote it so well and true to the characters and writing style. I was completely in love with the whole "addition" to the story of my favorite couple especially how u kept tru to the story and made it seem like it was just filling in gaps to the already existing story. Then U started veering from the story and adding things that werent there and even creating non existing characters!!! Y? what about lil Renesme, and the magic of isle esme being where they were first together? im sad. I was hoping for more to that story too. Still i appreciate the effort to keep the story going, im gonna continue reading, cuz edward and bella r hott!!and i love reading about this aspect of their relationship
Author's Response: Well, this is a Post-Eclipse fan fiction, which means it's not beholden to Breaking Dawn. They do go to Isle Esme, but you're right that there will be no baby. Sorry, but that storyline never made sense to me. First, I find it extremely hard to believe that Edward--overly cautious and worries about everything that might possibly hurt Bella Edward--would not think to use a condom, or that Carlisle wouldn't. This is beside the question of whether or not Edward has semen still--SM said in an interview that the only bodily fluid they had was venom, so how could Edward impregnate her? So, to avoid these issues altogether I went with a Post-Eclipse fic to avoid having to follow the canon plotline of BD. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Bellaflo (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I think the blood addition was very creative, a nice touch, not too bad too imagine and well explained. Where do you get all this creativity from? Good Work!
Reviewer: penguincullen (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I would love to make a worthy list of everything I love about your fiction. However, I lack your creativity. Here are some simple comments: 1. This is the best canon fiction. 2. You are the best author. 3. You are a very naughty human. 4. I alternate between begging that The List comes to completion, and dreading when it does. 5. I want you to write The List 2 starting with everything that Edward has on his list. (hugs)
Reviewer: kayja (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
i cant wait for the next one. i have read through three times now! wow....
Reviewer: gretchen (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 09:23 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I am so very sad that i've finished the chapters you have so graciously offered. I'm sure everyone says this, but, this is the BEST fan-fic I have ever read. Can't wait for the rest!!
Reviewer: Bellaflo (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Not only you make us gasp and live the story in out minds, in it you also make us laugh, It's very enjoyable.
Reviewer: Bellaflo (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I'm really having a hard time believing this gets better, but it does, all the time. Nice work, you have me totally caught into the story.
Reviewer: nikkijoy (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
This is so addictive. I almost hate to stop to review, i just want to plow on to the next chapter..fantastic story, congrats
Reviewer: kayja (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
u have some imagination... sorry have to keep reading
Reviewer: Loreli (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I am totally hooked and will check back in for future chapters. You made some great choices in this chapter: Bella good bye to her dad. It had to be low key in words, but powerful in impact. You pulled that off quite well. I am very interested in Bella's little project. I want to see where that thread is going.
I also like Bella's slight hesistance before leaving for Denali. That was very human and believable.
I also checked out the "outtake" on SMUT MONDAYS. I liked that it was Edward's fantasy. It worked great that way.
Reviewer: nikkijoy (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
This story is great! Better than great, Im hooked.
Reviewer: lobilu (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
I love this chapter like every single chapter jajajaja
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Reviewer: lacyangel32 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading your story and I can't wait for the next chapter! You have an amazing way with words!
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