Shit..Shit...I need to change my panties..you are F*cking Amazing...God!!!

Dame Bella you are Brilliant!..leaving the blue lace underwear..Poor Edward..he is going to need a release..Soon!

F*cking Amazing!I love it all.

Okay, this is my first review of anyone's story, ever.  Sorry if I do it wrong.  I can't think of any suggestions for improvement, I love it the way it is.  I'm really looking forward to finding out what that binder is all about.  I first read this before you added this chapter.  I thought it was over, and now I found out there's more!  I'm so excited!!!  Okay, too many exclamation marks...

Anyway, I love the stuffing out of this story, or series of stories, or novel, or whatever we call it.  The tattoo idea was really good.  I like lots of fiesty Bella and playful Edward.  I like the appearance of Darkward in this last installment.  I would like to see that in BPOV so we can get that little edge of fear that's missing from his POV.  I really like that all the way through Bella has been more confident.  I don't care if its OOC, it rocks.  I don't think that it is all that OOC anyway.  From the scenes in Eclipse where Bella tries to wrest control from Edward, its obvious she's overcoming her hang-ups with him and inadequacy.

I also agree with you that Edward buying Bella a car that is totally not her ticked me off.  I like that she got to get her own car in your version.  The only thing I would like better is if he got her the Ferrari, they get into an argument and she destroys him for being overbearing (maybe with the female Cullens help), they have make-up sex and go get her the car she wants.  Maybe the Ferrari could go to Jacob?  Too much?  Anyway, just an idea anyone can have.  By the way, Bella's car is now being neglected just like the poor Volvo was....unless I've missed something.

So I've read this story through three times now, and I can promise that it will always be a favorite.  My boyfriend thanks you from the bottom of his heart, by the way.  Well, the bottom of something.  Well, at least he would if he was certain of what I've been up to lately.  Anyway, thank you for spending so much time on this and please keep 'em coming (bad bad pun, I know).  

Author's Response:

Happy first review!  Thanks for taking the time to do it and for writing such a thoughtful and in-depth review!  Glad you're enjoying!  More soon as I can...I'm on vacation and it's hard to fit writing time in with the kids, hubby, friends visiting, etc.  But I am sensitive to the fact that everyone is waiting!  Thanks again!

Oh...Shit..I'm laughing so hard my coworkers think I'm crazy..If they only new. For a moment I thought Edward new..Bella keep it up. I can see him giving..Be very patient. I love this story. And I love twilighted for letting me review on CrackBerry.

o hhh please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!! soo good . lol

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I love that you ended it well.  It does leave me wanting more info about after te event.  I will check in with you often with baited breath for more.  

I've been holding my review for this one moment...when I reached the end of what you've written thus far & all I can say is...YOU ROCK IT!!!!! I love it, I love it, did I say I love it? I do!!!  You have changed the original story line to the way I secretly wish it could have been & I didn't even know it.  Did that make sence? I hope so...I just love it all! Just know I'm going to be jonesing for more & soon...I don't think I can handle the wait...this is almost as bad as my anxiety for New Moon to finally come out! Keep it come in...much love!

Ok, I have to tell you that you are a gifted, amazing writer, and your story has me totally addicted! PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!

YOU NEED TO CONTINUE THIS STORY WELL INTO THEIR FUTURE, I can't bear for this story to end!

 

You have captured the characters perfectly, and your imagination and storytelling is amazing!!!!

I love how you wrote the wedding and the everthing in a different frame.  It doesn't take from the story at all.  It actually adds a lot to it. 

 

Very Sad with the goodbyes but so worth it..Now waiting for the rest :)

Yes Im reviewing now because(sorry) I just couldnt stop reading at the end of the others.. I really really wanted to though!! What to say, you must have heard it all before but that was great, brilliant, outstanding, totally awesome..the list goes on. You are so clever, your ideas are brilliant, I loved the tatoo, the ipod thing, the blanket in the sun and yes I was totally cheering for Edward on the Honeymoon (so proud of him too) Thanks so much for a fabulous story, please dont delay the end too long, I dont think we can stand it. Oh and please, please NO baby...

great chapter, i love this story!!!

cant wait to read more :)