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Reviewer: jadevolturi (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
please please please please please please add another chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im dying here! im seriously addicted to your writing, like no joke. have you published before? i've read you mentioning that you write novels, but I would love to read one of them if they are published!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
The detachable showerhead - a girl's best friend. ;)
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
EXCELLLENT!
Reviewer: elise396 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
omg u are an awesome writer and i love you stories u make it so easy 2 imagine wat is going on um ..... yea this is kinda embarsing but i dont know how to write stories can u write back and tell me ..? ......but if u dont wanna then thats ok i will still love your story either way ok :p =]
Author's Response: Hi Elise--thanks for the review. How to write stories...honestly, there are two ways to learn how to write: 1) read. a lot. one of the best ways to develop vocabulary, get a handle on dialogue, and study how to frame a story is to read how others do it; and, 2) write. just try it. use an outline to organize your thoughts and to plot out the storyline, or just start writing and see where it takes you. Let people know it's your first time trying it and you'll see that the feedback can be very helpful and encouraging. Good luck!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
OH!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
You are an amazing author!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
EXCELLENT~
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:10 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
That was excellent!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
GREAT JOB! You wrote the stuff SM wouldn't!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Excellent story!
Reviewer: Vanessa Wolf (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Gotta say I dig the vampire role playing part.
Hey, I was in Port Angeles a couple of weeks ago and my sisters and I ate at the Italian place, Bella Italia. Small place, very tasty, and has photos of SM from when she visited there.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Hahahahaha!!! That is hilaRIOS!!!!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
IIIII SEEEEE. Gotcha.
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
WHAT!?!?!?!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
OHMYGOD that was so hott....
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
EXCELLENT!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
EXCELLENT!
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
EXCELLENT!
Reviewer: Terenthia (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Damn, girl--just damn. I actually avoided reading this story for a while, because I figured it was just another smutfest without any background or story! And to think, I almost missed this...
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
EXCELLENT!
Reviewer: Terenthia (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
That deserves wayyy more than a 10, but that's all they'll let me give :(. I have never read a scene quite like that before; certainly not in twilight fanfic. Romance and dominance, together?!? Beautiful.
Reviewer: peanut2013 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
This story is absolutely ah-mazing. I knew SM would not describe Bella and Edward's sex life, but I had a hard time imagining it myself. I really want to congratulate you on a job well done. I can't wait to read more! This story is a 10 for sure!
peanut2013
Reviewer: shannonomatic (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
that waz stupid
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
What an incrediable version of a wonderful love story! A great read for the "over 18 yr old" crowd that is crazy about Twilight. Your writing is wonderful
Reviewer: Catta (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
More, more , more!!!!!
I have read from beginning to here in three days.
Thank you for having such a wonderful mind. I feel alive again.
Sincerely,
Corinne
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