OH. MY. GOD!  Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! 

Oh, lo and behold, if I turn off the tinyMCE, I can leave a review from my phone... JOY!

I listened to the first Twigasm podcast this week, and they had several mentions and nothing but love for this story, so I immediately rushed to find it (while at work...not the smartest move). Luckily work was slow, lots of people were on vacation, and my permanent blush could be attributed to the 113 degrees we're experiencing.

This story is just all sorts of awesome! While I've expanded my Twific reading to AU & AH, I generally start here, with my favorite type of story - the ones that stay closest to canon. It's great to read something this wonderful, not to mention insanely hot, and have it all ring true in terms of the characters and the situations you've put them in. Nothing rings hollow or false in all this epic hotness. They are exactly 'them' - true loves, neophyte lovers, ridiculously curious and laden with baggage. But I think one if your greatest points in this story is how very much you showcase Bella as Edward's equal and the perfect yin to his yang. tHe situations where she's able to save him from his own doubt and self loathing are amazing. And the scene where she physically gets to save him from the sun, and then the spiral of depression that followed...that was simply phenomenal. I absolutely adore how very much you emphasize their equality in this relationship, and how you make Bella so strong and make Edward see and acknowledge that strength and make him realize again and again how 'right' it simply is for them to be together.

And let's not forget the sex. The absolutely phenomal sex!

Your descriptive talents are genius. Not only are the scenes ridiculously hot, but they are so very true to their characters, and what it would be like for them to finally explore this enticing and dangerous facet of their love. In every way you show how new this is to them and how very much they truly love each other.

So, thank you! Thank you for this brilliant story that stays so true and so very, very smutastic!

You should so write a real book.  I would so buy it.

that was so sweet i want to cry...it brings the story back to their love and how special it is...sigh...awww...

ok I keep telling myself that this is the last chapter but I can't resist just one more...ah it's been going on like that for the last hour and a half.  I am so turned on from this story, I just can't believe it.  You are a powerful talented sexy writer!!!!!

well...if you insist on me reviewing i must say...i need a shower. you know? yea...so i'm gonna go get on that now...too bad i don't have a removable showerhead...lol

Wow. This really is endearing in a very good way. I like seeing that Edward is finally seeing Bella as his Equal since she had to protect him for once. Edward is defintely a changed man.

Excellent work!

SO HOT! Love it! You rock!

oooohh.. poor edward. here's my favorite line:

Isabella Swan had just caused me to fall the fuck apart without even being in my presence. 

haha..lmao!

I decided to read your story all the way through before reviewing, and this is what I have to say about it: FANFUCKINGTASTIC! I got seriously addicted with this story and your writing immediately I started reading it. Seriously, you had me at "Argh!". This story is so overwhelmingly delicious, erotic, sensual, ROUGH, sexy, loving, mind-blowing, beautiful, romantic and it describes so many of my personal fantasies that you had me dreaming about them night and day. You've like totally turned me into sex-crazed nympho (which is not at all, not by a long shot, a bad thing). So THANK YOU for writing this story and lighting the fire within me again. 

please please please please please please add another chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im dying here! im seriously addicted to your writing, like no joke. have you published before? i've read you mentioning that you write novels, but I would love to read one of them if they are published!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

EXCELLLENT!

OH!