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Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
i thought it was ingenious and hot
Reviewer: MoriaAngel (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Oh, HOT HOT HOT!!!
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
mean ole emmett lol
Reviewer: MoriaAngel (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Good first chapter...
At least you have my full attention now... ;-)
Reviewer: lobilu (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
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Reviewer: Brandywyn1220 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
OMG!!!!!!!!!! Wow, that was freakin' hot. Nice work. Keep it up.
Reviewer: GraphiXXXGal (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Awesome so far. I love the T-shirt idea. I can do that if there is a desire for it. I'm a graphics person and I know of a good screen-printing place. I'm all game!!!
Got to love the Pack's sense of humor! Even Emmett not quite catching the humor of the vampire girl with fangs. Goofy Emmett!
can't wait to see how Bella takes to the change in your story. Thanks again for sharing your creative genuis with us Twilight fans! :)
Author's Response: That's a very cool idea! I looked on cafepress to see if there were any vampire girl shirts, but there really aren't many. What would be involved? Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: sweek539 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Thank God!! I have been wanting to read something like that since the first freaking book!! lol :) The only complaint I had about the series is that the older crowd didn't get something like this chapter. Well, done! Can't wait to read more :)
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
i love that he used his last name already soo cute
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
wooohooo way to cross off the list! Wonderful!
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
wooohooo way to cross off the list! Wonderful!
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
oooh she is going to get to check off number nine and number eighteen!
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
amazing. you have a gift of discription!
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
he took her panties! WOO HOO WAY TO GO EDDY!
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
number tten gets a standing ovatation!
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 10:46 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
poor eddy needed some release
Reviewer: Princess Meg (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Hi, I just wanted to say that I love your story so much! I just started reading it and I can't wait for the next Chapters! xoxox Meggie
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
she is a naughty girl isnt she!
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
that was awesome i am so happy for her! Nothing better than a long awaited release!
Reviewer: Rosalynn (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
god i love alice!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
just wanted to let you know there are 20 grown women in my twilight book club waiting for you to add new chapters i printed out all your story and we all feel you are as well written as sm herself we pass around each week we are patiently waiting for more
Author's Response: That is beyond cool. Thanks for letting me know! More will come as soon as I can!
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
well i hope you have had a great holiday and am looking forward to the next chapter - how you will handle the "gift" Carlisle is holding for Bella will be VERY interesting.......
Reviewer: fabulous face (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
i check every day to see if you have written more. I am enthralled with your story so far. It is perfect. I will be back tomorrow to check again!
Author's Response: I'll have an new chapter submitted this week, but wait a few days before checking again. I just returned from two weeks of vacation! Thanks!
Reviewer: Treya (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
That was wonderful! "Bad Vampire"! wow that was just toooo funny. Can't wait to read the next one!
Reviewer: My Hubby is no Edward (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
This chapter had some many moments I wanted to highlight in my review, but sitting here, I can't think of a one- I blame it on mommy brain (being the mother to 2 boys, ages 3 & 20 months). This story is great & you do a fabulous job being the author & expressing your magnificent ideas to us through this story. There is so much I'm anticipating in the final chapters of your fic, and I'll be eagerly awaiting your next update.
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