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Reviewer: onoimatwitard2 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
You are a Goddess!!!
I just read the 23 chapters in one sitting (about 6 hours). Thank goodness my kids go to bed at nine and hubby was doing his own thing.
What a fantastic read. I read it like a drowning person gasping for oxygen, just like I read Twilight for the first time. I so love the feeling of being completely consumed by a story.
I have to admit I blushed many a time. I haven't read much Twilight fan fiction because a lot of it is pretty graphic and that just isn't my taste in reading. But...you really worked it girl, and in a way that obviously worked for me.
You set the bar high for any of my future ventures into fanfic. It's the middle of the night and my brain is fuzzy so I don't really feel capable of adequately expressing my gratitude, so suffice to say...THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU.
Reviewer: Cas82 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
THis stuff is pure gold! My family was neglected as I couldn't tear myself away from it. Such great characterisation. Love your work!
Reviewer: TJB (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I very new to fanfic and I'm not sure what to say other then I really enjoyed your story and I can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: reesessweetie (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
i'm not particularly looking forward to the scene where she gets changed. gonna be verrry painful. but i am looking forward to when edward drinks her blood. her donated blood. for some reason, that really excites me
Reviewer: Cloudy_SkieZ1 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
gah! get to it!!!! get to writing, Missy ;)
Reviewer: daviesl5 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Hey
I adore your story it's one of the best I've ever read I think evenbreaking dawn and eclipse would have been better id it had some of your lovely lemons
O, I found a picture of a wedding dress
http://i.ehow.com/images/GlobalPhoto/Articles/2281671/weddingdress-main_Full.jpg
Is it like the one you are describing ?
Reviewer: monkeybutt2001 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
SOOOOO... I just spent this past week catching up on all of these chapters when is 24 gonna be posted. I love this concept of a story and i loved the play between Emette and Bella. You have caputred SM's characters and put them in a world that i was dying for them to go into... stupid Teen rating. I live in the gutter im not ashamed. Also, you did answer a question my friends and I thought about ... What did Edward do every 28 days? Anyhoot, i know im rambling but i just thought id let you know you have gained one more loyal reader. Thanks!
Amy :O)
Reviewer: taylor_rose (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
(y) this is an amazing story
Reviewer: reesessweetie (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
i haven't finished reading yet, but this chapter was the best ever. we are so used to seeing edward protect bella, that when their roles get reversed, the action is much more poignant and we become aware that edward can make mistakes too. reading about the lemons and smut was also very enjoyable, but with this chapter, we again realize that their relationship is about more than just sex. good job!
Reviewer: Cloudy_SkieZ1 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
omg so funny that she only just realized that he saw the list. and her wanting alice to pack a cowboy hot...priceless.
smutty goodness to come *grins*
Reviewer: RazzleA (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
ahh! i've been waiting for the next scene for like..EVER!
Reviewer: Cloudy_SkieZ1 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
awww!!! so sweet, in a frisky sort of way ;)
Reviewer: Cloudy_SkieZ1 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
::wiggles around on her bed:: yeah that was....so insanely hot, I cant even describe it.
Good fecking lord!
Reviewer: Cloudy_SkieZ1 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Yeah. We all fucking love them, too ;)
Reviewer: Cloudy_SkieZ1 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
lMFAO, omg, yeah my reviews are like the same everytime I review, I know, but still.
to quote one of my most favoritist movies of all time (Friday)
"Dayyyyyyummmmmmm"
So very very very good ;)
Reviewer: casiddie60 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
When will there be more?!?!?
Reviewer: flutterfli (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I have loved this story so far! Keep up it up.
Reviewer: Cloudy_SkieZ1 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
have i told u that i REALLY want 17? oh and well any of them, really!!!
Reviewer: AyahPapayah (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
This chapter made me laugh so loud that I woke up my son! I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Cloudy_SkieZ1 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 05:36 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
hmmmmm!!! im so excited!!!!
Reviewer: Cloudy_SkieZ1 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I was reading a fic and I had to stop because the spelling errors were so bad, and the one that REALLY pissed me off was that she called it an ASHTON MARTIN. And not like one time was bad enough, it was like 7 or 8 times. ::Sigh:: they are amazing car. If I ever come into like a shit load of money im buying a Mercedes Benz Maybach Exelero (more of a Bentley ish type of car) and a Vanquish.
Yuh.
Reviewer: MoriaAngel (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Hot hot hot! Love it!
Reviewer: Cloudy_SkieZ1 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
ok yeah so....i dont even know what the eff to say. That was....probably the hottest thing I think I have read. Hands down, for real ;)
Should I confess my love to you now? OR wait till later?
Author's Response: Now is good.
Reviewer: Cloudy_SkieZ1 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
yeah!!! go eddie!
Reviewer: Cloudy_SkieZ1 (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
yeah. blood play can be hot. if done right. We'll see.
Good so far! I cant believe I completely missed this story. Gah!!!
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