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Reviewer: 17KCullen (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Great start! I like Bella she seems like the SM Bella.
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I loved everything about this chapter but I think the thing I loved most was his surprise at the concert when they played his musical composion. That was beautiful. Thank you.
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Um, er, ah, OMG, I can't put a comprehensive sentance together. sorry. Um....yeah!
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
This just gets better and better. Keep workin'. :)
Reviewer: Joanny (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Wow! just read it all in the last... 3-4 days! And just... wow.
Dazzling.
Fuckingly addictive.
How the hell am I going to be able to wait for the next chapter???
[sigh]
Reviewer: Jessicias85 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 01:31 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
FUCK YES!!! The Aston Martin ALONE Makes me hot.... butIN the Aston Martin OH MY FUCKING GAWD
Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
HOLY CROW! okay i get that a baby would have totaallly ruined like all of the smuttyness but wth! why does everyone so strongly oppose renesmee?!???
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Lord have merecy! That was f**king awesome. Thank you, thank you. A three fer for sure, maybe even a four fer. lol.
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Awsome chapter. I'm a puddle. Can't wait to see what you have her do with the hot wax. (wimper). The shower was incredible. She is such a saucy vixen.
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Beautiful! You're a great writer! Keep it coming. (he, he). ;)
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Okay, he had it coming! no pun intended.
Great chapter. wish I could feel sorry for the bugger.
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Wicked Bella! LOL. Love the way her mind thinks right now. Great chapter and can't wait to read more. Loved the blue lace panites trick! Way to go Bella.
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
THUD...and THUD again! Now I need to change my panties. lol.
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I have died a million times over reading this story - not to mention finding myself in a puddle of goo on many occasion! I haven't been able to stop reading - except when I had to drag myself off to work! You are a fantastic writer and I am so looking forward to where you literary fiction will take us next.
With a big grin, blush and thank-you -
Reviewer: kinsano (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I love your story and I can't wait for more! Hurry up, already!!!!
Reviewer: missyallykins (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
lovely!
definately time of my alltime favs your story is, keep up the great work!!
Reviewer: amazeofgrace (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 09:12 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
ok I also have read this whole lovely "list" in just 24 hours! And I hope it never ends, being they have eternity and all, it shouldn't, I am sure we (your fans) could help you keep it going, on and on and on....
I have to say I have not felt "this way" in quite a long time, I may even have to decide to start dating again, even though after my divorce I swore off men! This has awakened something..........and I doubt RPatz would be up for helping me out, I'd probably scare the poor boy to death! LOL
On a serious note, it's AWESOME!!!
Reviewer: Vampmama81 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I liked it... I cant be hot and bothered with all the chapters
Reviewer: Vampfan1 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Awsome, Awsome, Awsome. I want more. Hope its coming soon. I do need the particular, ahem, scene. Type, Type, Type. Please, Please, Please!!!
Reviewer: kinsano (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
It was fucking hot! The only thing is you should have had her tell Edward to taste it. (a human turnoff, maybe) talk about vampire candy!
Reviewer: Vampmama81 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
HOLY SHIT !! AWESOME !!
Reviewer: kinsano (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Extremely Hot!
Reviewer: MommylovesEdward (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
OH MY GODDDDDD!!!!!! I thought this was an old-old-old story and was finished!!!! HOW CAN I EVER WAIT UNTIL THE END??? This is worse than reading the actual Twilight series....and when I'm done with THIS LIST what do I do then??? panting, dripping, and chomping-at-the-bit waiting for the next chapter...come on girl...getter done...
Reviewer: stay_red (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I'm a new reader and read the whole story in just one day!!! Just wanted to say Hi and thank you for this great story!!!!! Enjoy your vacation, but don't forget to continue this absolutely fantastic story!!!!!!
Reviewer: MischievousMe (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
SAD TO SEE HOW TORN SHE IS ABOUT HER GOODBYES
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