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Reviewer: Vampmama81 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
I love the way you write it seems so like the characters
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Your imagination is quite naughty, but I love it! Go on with that.
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
sexy....damn...!
Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
i gave a blow job in a movie theater also, but we were 'watching' bedtime stories...lol
Reviewer: Fitten (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
ooooh hot Edward...
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
"My heart beats for you, Edward. For both of us."
I am crying. Thank you for that lovely words.
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Thank you Laura. There are so many parts of this chapter you have written that I wish were in SM's book. Not meaning to deminish what she wrote but the one part where I felt so cheated was when they finally got to Isle Esmee, and after they emerged from the water and went back inside, it was like their joining in love didn't even happen, they just woke up to feathers! Argghh. Frustration! So you have given us their blissful wedding night as we imagined it and it was beautiful. Brought me to tears.
Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I really hope they do it on the lab table. I love that one!
Reviewer: laurathelittle (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
This chapter was great. It had me laughing aloud several times, like when Bella found what Edward wrote, and then Edwards possessive fantasy. I loved that, it was priceless! I never was a Jacob fan, so I just had to tell you that that fantasy was perfect.
Reviewer: NicciCullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
haha aw i love alice.
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
This gets better and better each chapter.
Reviewer: justagirl1237 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Love your story...why so long since updated :(
Reviewer: hetzel4 (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I absolutely love this story! Can't wait for more. Please post soon. Great job!
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
FUCK.FUCK.FUCK.
How shall I ever get these images out of my head? Huh?
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
WET EDWARD! Jesus Christ!
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
I'm out of words. Great. As always.
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
As you maybe see, I am rushing through the chapters. Each and everyone its worth the time. Just love it!
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
This was hot and cute and innocent all together.
Reviewer: a fan (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 09:20 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
This story just keeps getting better and better. I love SM, but I wish you could send her a copy of THE LIST and a note that says, "this is what the world really wanted to happen in your books!" LOL
I know you are busy, but I am breathless with anticipation...don't leave me hanging any longer! I need the next chapter--I can't wait!
Thank you! you are a terrific author and keep up the great work :-)
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Come on, a wet Edward deserves a review.
You bet!
Awesome.
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Leaving the panties?! Hilarious!
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Glorious!
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Goosebumps and Butterflies.
Reviewer: -EnjoyyourJacob- (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Wonderful!
Reviewer: Vampmama81 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
If I could givwe you a high five I would
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