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Reviewer: x_theaddiction (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG! LOVE IT!!!!
Absoulutlyyy amazing. wonderful. spectacular.
:) Can't wait for the next chapter. i lovee dominating edward. ;)
Reviewer: Turtle Love (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
AWESOME LAURA! I was wondering after your post in the BBR today if you were going to be able to finish this story...then I got the update! WOOT WOOT!
Having Edward bite here during sex/orgasm like that was really hot! I can't wait to see how her change goes!
Reviewer: bekanz (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
mint chapter! it's finally happening yeyey!
dw that you took awhile to update cause the wait is always worth it =D
keep up the brilliant work!
Reviewer: BellaChick (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
LURVE this story, can't wait for an update!! (don't wait so long next time please?!)
Reviewer: t1nkerbell9598 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
That was so great. I so glad for this chapter I can't wait to read the next one. Thanks, Jennifer
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Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
lovely, absolutely lovely
Reviewer: momoffour (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
oh my fucking fantasies have come alive! This is your BEST CHAPTER EVER. It was SO worth the wait!!!They are so sexy and I love the mixture of sweet loving Edward with a side of naughty. Can't wait to see how the transition goes and all the hot, rough sexin after!
Reviewer: jenjan24 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I'm sorry...this is going to be the shortest review ever for me because allI can say is OMG!!!!!! OMG!!! I can't believe that he finally bit her. Just seems so surreal. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: juniperberry (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Ummm... what happened to the morphine?
And didn't he promise to let her 'swallow' prior to being turned? I believe this was brought up on the drive home from the Vancouver trip?
Other than that, I completely adore this story.. and Leatherward, whoa.. (fans self)
Reviewer: CassLVStwilight (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Great job ud soon
Reviewer: jaymac (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
awesome chapter!
i know BD was written for a younger audience, but how good would the change have been if it was more like this and less clinical?!
PLEASE dont keep us hanging a long time for when she wakes up, theres still plenty of fun to be had on The List!
Reviewer: Sydflower (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
HOLY CRAP ON A STICK! GIRL IF YOU DONT WRITE UP THE NEXT CHAPTER I WILL COME AND GET YOU! HOW CAN YOU JUST LEAVE US LIKE THAT?! UGGGGH! I am pouting. GAH! And Lord, I hope this isn't another 'Forgetful Bella' thing! Where she is all "I remember everyone except you, Edward! Oh you're Edward, DUH!" Ive read like 8 billion of those. PSSH.. BUTT if it is, Ill still love you, and Im sure it'll be better than the rest written..
Oh yes, has anyone ever told you how awesome your lemons are?? Fracking AMAZING.
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Another great chapter. And I'll be at Twicon. Hope to see you there.
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Damn, best chapter yet Laura. Seriously! Love it! Can't wait to read the next one after Bella wakes up. Cause I know you're not gonna let Edward kill her.
Reviewer: La Jodi (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I can't believe we've arrived at this part. It was so intense. I had to compare a little to breaking dawn and I thought this way was so much better, SO MUCH BETTER.
So much love between these two it just pours out of every word you write. In everything they do, all their interaction just shows how crazy they are about each other. I love that Bella made him a book. I love reading EPOV, it's so incredible to read about this amazing man who loves this woman so much and likewise.
I am a little nervous about the end of this chapter. I can't imagine that Edward would kill Bella, but he seems to caught up in it right now. A little nervous...
Thanks for writing!!!!
Reviewer: chica193 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
This story is amazing!! I was instantly hooked. You are a wonderful author :)
Reviewer: tahughes28657 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
THAT WAS SO HOT!!!!!
Reviewer: Twilight_Muse (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Good one. Hehe!
Reviewer: 2myblue (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Iwould like to finsh the story then review please
Reviewer: LoveRobward (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Hey- I LOVE LOVE LOVE your writing! I've told everyone I know about it and they all agree. When do you plan on adding on? My email is: elizabeth62582@yahoo.com
I don't know how to check messages on this site! You rock!
Thanks!
Reviewer: mundanemomma (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
You are an amazing writer! This is by far, my most favourite story on this whole website, and there are quite a few really great stories here! I, like many others I'm sure, have been checking daily, multiple times for the next chapter update. I hope it comes soon....??? Will begging help? PLEEEEAAAASSSEEEE hurry...LOL Thank you for being such a wonderful talented giving person and sharing your stories, and my husband thanks you too....his sex life hasn't been this good for a long time!
Author's Response: So glad you're enjoying the story! I submitted the next chapter today (Monday), so hopefully it'll get up in the next day or two if my beta, kallieross, isn't too busy!
Reviewer: underlvlyhalo (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Absolutely fantastic!
I can't wait for the next chapter. Have you written anything else on this site??
Reviewer: fais268 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
that was HOT. i love it when Edward's so commanding like that!!
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
I've read the entire list and waiting until this last chapter to review. For that I am sorry, but I wanted the full affect before commenting. I thouroughly enjoyed the entire vision you put out here for us to read. I can honestly say that I look forward to more chapters to come. Thank you for having such a wonderful imagination and taking Edward's and Bella's story to a whole new playing field.
Reviewer: cherry_bomb16 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2009 11:09 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
Amazing, as usual. You rock!!!
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