Omg! You write the hottest scenes I swear! I cried when she gave him the notebook! And Edward in leather? Sheesh! YUMMY! PLEASE update soon!!!! PLEASE!!!! I need my fix! Don't torture me!

OMG, Laura, that was just so perfect.  Again, beautifully written and masterfully woven.  I have to say I was expecing Emo-ward when she got back to the bedroom after the bucket list fauxpas but to find him in leather and willing to "punish" her for her slip up, was again effen brilliant.  It shows that he is growing up too!  Not in a bad way that he was really going to punish her but that he realizes he needs to process his emotions and deal with things more openly and include her.  You did a brilliant job with this chapter.  Trust me, it was totally worth the wait.  Oh, and I'm glad that the biting was after they made love.  Carlisle and his morphine was making it all sound so clinical.  You made it perfect!  Great great job!  Thanks for sharing this story with us!

Oh my!  It was perfect!  The bite was perfect and it brought me to tears :-)  I just hope he stops!

 

...and being tied to the barstool *claps* bravo!  yum...........

I can't wait for the rest!

awsome!

BTW forgot to mention that I loved the part about the girls going to the spa...not for the massage, etc, but I can picture Alice getting all worked up about how Bella's hair and nails needed to before she changed.  About died when she said some attention was needed down south! 

Ok, so I had this image of Alice with her panties in a bunch about "sex-haired Bella" going through her change and having a bad case of sex-hair all throughout eternity!  HA!  That was quite an image!

When I saw the alert that you updated, it didn't seem to matter that it was already after midnight when I began to read and as always was completely sucked in!!  Really liked the new chapter.  The passion and emotions you created for B & E was fabulous, especially for E to show the struggle he was really going through!  Nice!  Liked B's request to E about how she wanted the change to happen and your ending description of it.  Question...what happened to the morphine before venom plan??  Oooooo-Carlile's going to be pissed (wink, wink!)  Also, when B gave the book to E to read during her change, I thought she was getting out the vile of her blood to give to him.  I guess I thought it would be more meaningful for him to have it/drink it, whatever while she was still human.  But I guess she could give it to him after her change as a little gift of her humanity for E to hang on to for eternity...hummmmmm...

Nice job on the writing itself.  After reading a few other stories out there, I realized how nice it is to read a story where the author takes pride in the flow of the story, writing traits (grammar, punct, spelling, word omissions, etc) as it makes a huge difference how professionally your writing comes off to the reader!!!  Nice job!  Can't wait to continue!  kj3232

Dude, I can NOT believe you left it there! This whole chapter was just fantastic! Great job!

Unreal!

Hi!  Thanks for the update, it was an AWESOME chapter!!!  

Two questions:

1.- In an earlier chapter, Bella made Edward promise her that right before she changed her, he would cum in her mouth and allow her to swallow his semen (since at that point the risk was null)

2.- What happened to the Morphine plan?!?  I thought Carlisle and Edward had planned to give it to her before hand to ease the pain...? But now I'm thinking about that whole "wordless conversation" that E & C had earlier in this chapter:

"I wanted to try using Morphine to see if it would lessen the pain of the experience."  He looked at Edward.  "We just need to get it in her veins in advance of your venom.  So, when you're ready-"

Edward nodded, cutting Carlisle off.  "I'll call you when she's ready for your assistance."

I watched for a moment while Carlisle and Edward shared a silent conversation that for some reason still made me blush.  I'd have to ask Edward about it later.

And, since you never had Bella ask Edward about it again, thus dismissing the subject, I'm thinking perhaps their mental exchange had been about the potential the morphine would have to paralyze Bella while she still felt all the pain, making it a lot worse instead of helping; but they didn't say anything to her so she wouldn't stress about it....maybe? 

That's just my theory I guess, but it's hard for me to believe that A. Bella would forget to ask Edward about that, B. Bella wouldn't begin their love making on Friday taking Edward in her mouth for the complete blow job experience, and C. Edward would fail to fulfill his promise to Bella on that respect for that matter....hmmmm, maybe you are pulling one on us and that was just a dream  ;p

The binder surprise was GREAT BTW, ABSOFUCKINGLUTELY BRILLIANT and SOOOOO romantic!  This whole thing's so much better than the way SM wrote it....thank you!  I REALLY hope you win all the awards; I not only voted but advertised for you as much as humanly possible!  :D

Laura, I have been reading this since the beginning of the year, and you are my favourite author. The talent you have on being able to make your readers to a degree feel the same as the characters is amazing and enjoy your story, so much so that I daily look for the next update. Oh and ofcourse I love the ideas you have for our favourite couple.

Thanks for the enjoyment.

Sara

Wow! Edward in leather was better than I thought! Never had this sort of fantasy but now... huuummmmmmm

I won't even say anything about Edward sundae.... just too much!

I was sorry for Edward. It is understandable why it is so hard for him to change Bella and in the book, I think he had to live through a whole month a hell so changing her was more like a great solution to the whole sit they were going through. He even begged to Jacob.

But here the situation is totally different. He had to do that in cold blood (well, not necessarily cold since he had just had an orgasm but you know what I mean)

And all in all, he dealt with his feelings very well, didn't he? Spanking her did help, as I understood!

But I am sure he will soon learn to enjoy the benefits of Bella being a vampire. haha

Thx for the chapter.

Goodness gracious...!!!!!!!!!!

You continue to outdo yourself. WOW WOW WOW Am I still even conscious? lol

Who wouldn't want an Edward sundae??? Let's be real here.

And omg I think the leather scene is the HOTTEST scene ever. Definitely my favorite thus far. I love when Edward takes control, and I'm betting Bella does too. ;)

I honestly can't even put to words how beautifully you write.  Not only are your words erotic when they need to be but they are beautiful when their words fail even them. The connection you have created for these characters is undeniably strong and real. I love the raw intensity and love that permeates the story.

I had a good idea that this was how she was going to be changed even when I first started reading this story months back. I've been reading this story since the very beginning, when you first posted it and it blows even MY mind how much recognition and following it has garnered. I'm glad that your following has continued because it would be a shame for it not to have grown to this magnitude. It is very well-deserved.

I cannot wait to continue on reading well into her transformation; a moment many of us have been patiently waiting for. You continue on with your bad self! Congrats on the noms, bb!

~ Much admiration and respect