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Reviewer: Eudora Scott (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I love it!!! I swear I love it!!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow that was so hot I bet the room could have caught fire! What a way to go. I love the fact that they tried to make her last days more fun...they really are a tight knit family...its great to see the love they have for each other
Reviewer: AgMag (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:29 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Fantastic with the leather and the bindings and the blindfold. The change catalyst itself is beautiful. Something so intimate and sensual, thank you for that.
As for TwiCon, I'll be there in the area with a few musical chaps. You should join us one day if you have a chance (after the workshops of course).
Can't wait for the next update. Safe trip to DFW! :)
Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow. I love the last part, I find it so beautiful. And now I cannot wait to read what happens next. :)
Reviewer: tmbleweed17 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
ahh that was a great chp and well worth the wait!! i cant wait for more!!!!! have fun at TwiCon
Reviewer: littlelady (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Whoa! Yes!
You are such an awesome writer. You make everything seem new. And you have such great ideas. Great job on this chapter. But it just makes me want the next one faster!
Great ending, btw!
Reviewer: ariateh (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
that was amazing! Such a compelling way of describing that last moment... Can't wait to know what's in the binder...
Reviewer: 1badmom (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
great chapter, what happned to her getting morphin beore she was bitten?
Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Okay. I's speachless, turned on, purring, and cooing. This is so sweet. Question-what happened to the morphine? Will he stop? Of course he will...he better! How long will I have to wait in torment.
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:20 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
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omg! he DIDN'T! O.O
Reviewer: mOrE_tHeN_mY_oWn_LiFe (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:19 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wonderful!!, as always!!
I cantwait for more
Reviewer: samt915 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:17 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I thought they were going to give her morphine first, oh well. I cant beleve how romantic that came across. I just love it today is the day, bite, lol. My heart still breaks for Edward when he has to change her, but I also feel for Bella, a 17 year old and a 80 year old will just look really funny, lol. Yeah spa days, I just wish we were there for the girl talk, and for the bowling and such, but oh well. It would also take away from "the list" lol. I just laugh seeing Edward sundae, lol. Keep it them comming, just love to read your writting.
Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:14 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I really love no. 44 and 49....wow loved the update....hotothototo edward in leather...hot damn!
Thanks for updating ( you were gone for a while but I'm glad you're back!)
Did Bella give edward her diary or was it the notebook ( my memory is fuzzy) is it a book of memories so edward can help bella remember???
Rachel
Reviewer: EdwardsWifey (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
AWESOMEEEEEEEE.. So hot the way he changed her MY GOD! I need a cold shower!
Reviewer: mldewolf (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG!! What an AWESOME chapter! You write soo increidbly(?) great! It just feels so real. Like I'm right there with them going through everything, with them. It's out of this world. The whole stool thing...that rocked!! Never had crossed my mind. But it was awesome!! Very creative.
I do have to say, I hope he stopped. As hard as it was, I'm sure that was the biggest "high" of his life. I just hoped he stopped. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Take care and YOU ROCK!!
Reviewer: Voluptuous Vamp (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:11 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Um ... HOLY SHIT. I doubt that Bella will be angry that that's the way she went, but of course Edward will hate himself even though it's the same thing that he was going to do in a few hours anyways. Stupid vampires always thinking morphine will take away the pain of your body going through an entire metamorphic change. It doesn't matter that you waited so long to update because that was pretty fan-fucking-tastic. But please, you can't leave us on a cliffy like that for too long.
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
WHOA! Edward biting her is fucking HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What about the morphine?? Hope he tosses a blankie over her before her calls Carlisle in!!
Please update soon! Don't leave us hanging with THIS much of a cliffie!!! :)
Thanks for the update. I know in advance the next chappie, with her scrapbook, is gonna make me bawl. :(
Reviewer: lyleslove (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
ok, i cried... i didn't think i was going to, but it was weirdly beautiful :) great job yet again
Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
SO MUCH YUMMINESS IN THIS CHAPTER! I feel so spoiled. Thank you :D
I'll be at TwiCon, it'd be great to meet you!
Reviewer: EdwardAlways (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow. I really think this is your best chapter yet. I loved how Edward punished her, he really was a tad bit scarry, and how he changed her. That was awesome. The journal idea for her change is very creative, I've never seen anything like that before and I've read A LOT of stories where she is changed. Update soon!!!!
Reviewer: twilightjie (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
This is just perfect. Edward's agony. Bella's determination. And their love for each other.
Reviewer: de24601 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Worth the wait but please don't leave us hanging again! Beautiful writing, I especially love Bella and Edward's Thursday together and the reveal of what Bella was printing... that was a heartbreaking in a good way moment. Thanks for your story!
Reviewer: kim1974a (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Best change scene ever. (I am going to assume it will work out - please)
I was totally wrong about what she was writing earlier.
Reviewer: TwilightMundi (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Ugh! This was an amazing, wonderful, HOT chapter. Ooooh, a little bit of Domward, and that Edward sundae. Delicious! I love this story so much, and am so happy to see the update.
I like how Bella decided to have Edward bite her. I'm so curious to see if a.) Edward can stop, b.) Carlisle gets the morphine injected in time for it to do anything, c.) what Edward will be reading, and d.) how Bella will turn out (assuming the answer to a is yes).
- Stacy
Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Even though it was a cliffhanger it was a fantastic ending. I loved it!!!! I just hope that Edward doesn't beat himself up over it. It was earlier than planned but it was perfect.
Please update soon. :P
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