this is how I wanted Breaking dawn to be.How they are so in love and sweet.And Jacob fnding his own woman..just love your version!!!

um... wow... Thank you! I finally fill fullfilled with these charactors & it has helped so much with me and my hubby between the sheets! He doesn't know what hit him.

the best the best the besttttttttttt so far!!!

wahhhhh if i can scream without waking people ard me, i will!!!!! Alice, i'm going to buy u a present too lol

hey dear author, i totally understd your request. i was a fanfic author to (but not EdwardBella).

This is awesome. Post Eclipse and it went justtttttt the way i always wonder how Bella felt for Edward. And she had to satisfy herself like that huh? Heheeeee... i think i will do the same to if i were in her shoe lol

utterly remarkable and beautiful.I cannot pull myself from the pages..you are such an excellent writer and you stay perfectly in the 'twilight' world.I just LOVE it all!

ok, i haven't reviewed yet, so i'm sorry, even though i realize the story is finished as i'm reading it (so reviews might not really be necessary)... but i just HAD to vent my small complaint about bella. not about your writing style or anything like that, i actually like this bella better than SM's bella (she kind of annoys me. a lot.) all i have to say is... what. a. bitch. she gets edward in all his dirty glory. AND only has her period for THREE DAYS??? and can't even tell that it's STARTED??? most months i'd rather get hit full force by a mack truck than live through that first round of cramps and all that hell.

ok, now that THAT's off my chest... i love this story! i've read quite a few (because i obviously have no life, jk) and this is definitely one of my favorites! good work honey, can't wait to finish it! :)

hot!!!!!

i was a bit grossed out by jasper seeing her panties,i'm glad he didnt touch them eww! but  yeah i know a collateral from not being able to hide anything from anyone in this family!!

ha ha ha , so far so good and i'm still giggling, bella's train of thought had me wondering too, i for one always wondered how bella could stand it being so close to him and all that frustration pent up! i look forward to seeing which task on the list gets done first...

oh my word that was awome keep em coming

I have waited a long time to read this chapter. I can't bear when my favorite stories end so I try and save the last chapters. This one I was especially waiting for to read about the blood and how it was given. You did not  give any hints that you were getting to it and I was starting to think that you had forgotten. I knew there was an extra chapter (I think it is an extra chapter)and I think that is what got me to read this sooner then I previously would have.

I love it all, I like the part where Esme and Carlisle gave Bella their gift, but of course my favorite part was what you saved for the end. I am kind of sad though that now Edward does not have any of Bella's blood left. If I were Edward I probably would have filled a small test tube with a little of the blood in the cup and saved it, but that is part of my personality and not his. I actually have two bags of saved breast milk (in my freezer)from each time I lactated nursing my children. My oldest is starting college this fall! Thanks for writing, also just so you know I was reading this story as you wrote each chapter, so I really have been saving this for a while.

I love the fact that this actually has a very good plotline, and is still original but brings out the best of the characters.

I like it A LOT :)