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Reviewer: emilychar (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Hhhhhhhottttttttttt....
The spanking, oh sweet Lord, the spanking!
I find myself biting my lip and wiggling my ass just thinking about it!
So, to summarize:
HHHHHHHOTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: xFeathersxx (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Every chapter keeps getting better and better! That was a fantastic idea, the journal while she changes. How very thoughtful and unique. This chapter was hot, as always. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: chtx (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I am so glad that you have updated because I have missed your story. I really liked this chapter and could identify with the feelings that Bella and Edward were going through. Outstanding!
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Crap, amazing stuff! I'm so anxious to read what happens now. WAY TO LEAVE IT THERE!
This was a very long chapter, but I loved every word. Usually I tend to skim through things as I read, but I absorped everything. You're some talented.
Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG, OMG, OMG! I hope by some mircale, he remembers that he's supposed to be turning her and NOT sucking her dry, lol. I can't wait for more! UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Reviewer: tj33 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Great chapter, loved the Edward Ice Cream Sundae! I wondered if she would ask him to bite her while they were making love, it was perfect and beautiful but the way you left if worries me that he will not be able to stop.
Have fun at Twi-Con
Reviewer: maiseypattinson (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
oh so good. It was sad and beautiful and tender and perfect.
I was wondering what Bella was writing back at her house - what a great idea, she knew that Edward would need her though her change and she could help him through it.
I'm so happy you udated - please enthrall us all again soon -
ps wish I could go to TwiCon, but alas I live in Australia! Have fun!
Reviewer: rpatzfvr (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OH MY GOD!!!!!! I'm still struggling to maintain my composure. (I don't think people in the office will take too kindly to me screaming!) That was beyond awesome. Love/hate the cliff hanger. Love it beucase as usual, we need the suspense. Hate it because I can't stand suspense! It's a love/hate relationship! Are you oppossed to me making this my own personal list?! I think your writing has only gotten better as the chapters continue to flow. But I must say, I have no patience...write faster! Keep up the great work and please, dont' make us wait too long...
Reviewer: shelly8721 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow. That was amazing. Worth the wait for sure!! Can't wait to read your version of vampire Bella!!
Reviewer: nessap (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I THOUGHT YOU FELL OF THE EARTH. WHY SO LONG TO POST? TOO LONG. HURRY ,IM DYING TO KNOW WHATS TO COME.
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
That's quite a growing list!
I love that he changed during lovemaking.
This story has been a blast. I'm guessing there's not many chapters left. :(
Reviewer: cinemapersians (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Man, that was a long chapter, but it was SO GOOD! I really loved it and read it slowly to absorb the lemony (at times) goodness. I even enjoyed the ending, with Edward biting Bella and drinking her blood. You left it with us wondering if and when he'll stop... hopefully in time! hehe Yeah. You love to make us wonder and worry and think about things, now don't you? This chapter took forever, but it was very much worth the wait. Thanks for the update. Now, don't leave us hanging too long, K?
Reviewer: KristenDH (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
AHHHHH so worrth the wait. I love when bella is changed that way!!! The best!! I absolutely love this story and cant wait till it all plays out and all her list and his is fullfilled. Now that she is changed it will get even better!! Keep up the good work I love it!!!
Reviewer: mangler (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow...just frickin so much fun to read this! Thank you :)
Reviewer: kejones (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
WOO HOOO! You never fail to disappoint!
Reviewer: Eudora Scott (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I love it!!! I swear I love it!!!
Reviewer: purplesayuri (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I am so happy to have an update on this story!!! It has been *too* long!!! I am going to patiently await the next chapter ---- what a CLIFFIE!!--- but Please, please try to get it updated soon. :-) pretty please with a cherry on top? lol
Reviewer: Eudora Scott (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I love it!!! I swear I love it!!!
Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
That was exactly how I wished her change had gone. Perfect, and the ultimate vampire sex fantasy, to boot.
Reviewer: Eudora Scott (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I love it!!! I swear I love it!!!
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow that was so hot I bet the room could have caught fire! What a way to go. I love the fact that they tried to make her last days more fun...they really are a tight knit family...its great to see the love they have for each other
Reviewer: AgMag (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Fantastic with the leather and the bindings and the blindfold. The change catalyst itself is beautiful. Something so intimate and sensual, thank you for that.
As for TwiCon, I'll be there in the area with a few musical chaps. You should join us one day if you have a chance (after the workshops of course).
Can't wait for the next update. Safe trip to DFW! :)
Reviewer: kissyourself (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow. I love the last part, I find it so beautiful. And now I cannot wait to read what happens next. :)
Reviewer: tmbleweed17 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
ahh that was a great chp and well worth the wait!! i cant wait for more!!!!! have fun at TwiCon
Reviewer: littlelady (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Whoa! Yes!
You are such an awesome writer. You make everything seem new. And you have such great ideas. Great job on this chapter. But it just makes me want the next one faster!
Great ending, btw!
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