great chapter!

Wow that was great! I did vote for you at those awards, since I've been reading this for a while now. I am checking out the story you wrote for that contest.....and I really like the lengths of your stories, it was definitely a nice length, and very satisfying. They knocked out a few from their list, while also doing it the slow loving way a few times, with a good underlying story of her change being in there, makes for one great story.

um.

no long waits this time, 'kay???

Yay! I'm so glad you updated! This was a long wait. This was the first fanfiction story that I read and it has had me hooked ever since. I've read a ton of stories since this one and it's become my guilty pleasure. This is still my favorite! I love it! The chapter was well worth the wait, but I hope the next one doesn't take as long. I'm eager to see what happens next.

Her gift to him was awesome! Very thoughtful and appropriate! Keep up the good work! I eagerly await the next installment!

I think that may have been my fave chapter.  Wonderful.  (great idea leaving Bella's alteration's to our imagination!)

You rock.

Oh, I love Bella's hourly notes she's leaving for Edward!  What a fantastic idea, since of course he's going to be distraught the entire time.  Loved Edward spanking her with her list, and the whole idea that there were 'human moments' that he wanted to do before the change as well.  And the entire EPOV rocked.  I love being in that boy's head!

So great to see you back, and wow - what an update. That was so worth the wait, everything you give us is as hot as all hell, even the teeth - we need more of that!! Can't wait for more.

yay! i'm so glad you updated! I love the raw passion and hilarity yet sensitivity of this story! it totally rocks! 10/10

Ohh dear God! I've been waiting for so long for this, now I'm scared!!! please tell me you'll update soon.. please?

I'm so in love with this story... I get all anxious and worked up!

And Thanks for this chapter, it was really nice, sad and deep.

Beautiful storytelling, Laura.  Taking his need to bite during release and making it -- instead of something shameful or dangerous -- transformative and life-giving, in a way.

Plus, the whole "bite me when you cum" idea is all kinds of hot.  :)

Very touching, very sexy.  Liked the detail of Alice leaving food by the door and not disturbing them. 

I am curious about the bikini area, though -- because obviously, she had some sort of hair removal done.  Alice insisted she had to have it done, but that could certainly have been done after the change, couldn't it?  It just wouldn't have grown back once she's a vampire?  I'm probably wrong.  I'm guessing my knowledge of the Twilight mythology is not up to par with all you fan fic goddesses....

Author's Response:

I don't think SM gave us much guidance in the hair removal area!  The most common approach in other vampire stories is that if you cut it it comes back (like in Anne Rice).  So, I guess you're probably right, it could be shorn afterwards and then it would just be gone.  Also, perhaps the stone-hardness of their skin would make the hair irrelevant.  Who knows.  But, I just couldn't help but think, if I was going to be a vampire, I'd get myself in shape before being changed into one thing forever!!!!!!

yay!! i cant wait for more post vamp lovin!!

Another great chapter. Loved picturing Edward in leather pants. Heh heh. Lucky you, getting to go to TwiCon! Hope you have an amazing time!

So thrilled with the update, well worth the little wait!!!!