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Reviewer: maebee (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Hey! You're back! Awesome update. Hope Ed stops and puts some clothing on her before everyone comes traipsing in.
Reviewer: EmberIce22 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
That was wonderful! I cried, I laughed, I was turned on! At the end I was left hanging and wanting to know more, I can't wait for the next chapter, to see what Bella has in store for Edward to read while she is going through the change. Such a great idea!
Reviewer: EmberIce22 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
That was wonderful! I cried, I laughed, I was turned on! At the end I was left hanging and wanting to know more, I can't wait for the next chapter, to see what Bella has in store for Edward to read while she is going through the change. Such a great idea!
Reviewer: cherry_bomb16 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Oh, happiness. So good.
Reviewer: Butterfly114 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
i think if you make it long enough you could get to 20,000 reviews -hint hint-
love your list <3 always looking forward to new chapters.
Reviewer: latuacantante4him (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
UGH!!! You just had to stop here. Evil!!! Love this chapter. Can't get the image of a leather clad Edward out of my mind. LOL!!
Reviewer: twitart28 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
wow miss laura you sure have an act to make me quivvvvver in my panties!!! i was waiting for a long time to hear from u im sure we all were!!! i think that bella is going to be one horny vampire having been turned while in pure orgasmic pleasure of the most intense being given by no other than the hottest sexiest vamp ever!!!! cant waite for the next chapter i hope eddie doesnt suck her dry!!! xoxoxOO
Reviewer: cassandra417 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
very good chapter! i loved the idea of the book for edward when bella is undergoing her tranformation...it's so sweet/romantic/loving! can't wait to find out how things go and keep up the amazing job!
Reviewer: mopstyle (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Fuck, dude! Your updates are always worth the wait. That was incredible. I hope you win your Bellies! I did my part. :) xo
Reviewer: mommy2kh (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Great chapter! The letter was so sweet and brought tears to my eyes. Can't wait to see what happens after then change!
Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Great chapter! I can't wait to get to the next one! I really loved how the family participated in having Bella experience lots of human things before she was to be changed.
Reviewer: Lilly9999 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Awesome! so sweet, can't wait for the rest!
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Of course you'd leave it there...lol...does someone have to try and stop him, does he remember to stop on his own...if she dies, the story is over? if she "lives"...we see how her transformation takes place...WOW! SWEET! Ok, we're on the edge of the seat...anxiously awaiting whatever you've thought up next! SQUEE!
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Another wonderful chapter. I love the intimacy of the bite. It was so much better than BD. Can't wait for her and him to get rough.
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:54 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
HOLY CRAP!!
I don't think that was planned.
AT ALL!
Amazing though :D
Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Love the barstool scene, and the circumstances of Edward changing Bella are perfect. Now we can get into some of the more wild stuff, right?
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:47 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
It was sad to see the time dwindle down on Bella's human existence, but I am so ready to see her complete the items on the List that can only be done when she is a vamp. I loved how she sensed Edward's pain and altered her position on changing the transformation date. I love the sentiment behind the binder that Bella gave Edward. I'm very curious what thoughts it may contain. Edward's ambivalence toward biting Bella was handled very well. I hope that he has the strength to stop himself and remember that it is Bella. I got a little worried at the cliffhanger.
Thanks for updating!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Gah, that was absolutely yummy. So no morphine for poor Bella. Edward's going to beat himself up for that later, I'm sure... The spa trip was VERY smart. I'm impressed. Great chapter. I've missed this story.
Reviewer: LoveStoryFan (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Um, wow. That left me completely speechless..
Reviewer: EmelieL (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:30 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OME!!! This story is soo HOT!! It's awesome!! More NOW pleeaaasee!! (A)
Reviewer: angelicwish (Anonymous) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I think that you definitely did a wonderful job leading up to the moment he bit her, making the most of her human time. It was absolutely beautiful! And so worth the wait, I'm excited for more! I'll be at Twicon so look forward to maybe running into you there! Thanks for this amazing update prior to the convention! I'm going back to re-read it again now! Hahaha
Reviewer: Cloudy_SkieZ1 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Gah!!!!!! OMG yes it finally happened! Holy jesus! I was wondering when you were gonna drop the bomb. Love this story, so very very much ;)
i cant wait for more yummyness. And I wanna see what the book says :D
Reviewer: redsnapdragon (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
So, so good! This remains my favorite fan fic, and I love it so much. I can't wait to see what Bella has written in the notebook for Edward, and for him to read it while she turns, what a great idea.
Reviewer: divagils (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow. just. Wow. There are no words...
Reviewer: Greenfairy331 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I will be...livid...if we have to wait for another month for the next chapter after the way you've left us hanging with this one!!!!! Great one--I love the family and Emmett's pancakes and everything. I'm really hoping Edward doesn't hate himself for biting her before the morphine also...like he understands that this was probably the best possible way for him to change Bella.
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