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Reviewer: cvap100 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Yep, I am going to Twicon. Leaving tommarrow Wednesday. Will send you a PM with my full name. Flying out of Houston. This is a wonderful story. One of my firsts and made me into the addict I am today. I voted in the contest. Great story and look at all your reviews. Damn. This story is like on top 10 everything. Give yourself a hug for a job well done.
Michelle B (Houston/League City, TX)
Reviewer: sstreger (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
yay an update! I love this story and now i'm hungry for ice cream...
Reviewer: zaiche (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
oh i just loved the ending of this chapter...can't wait for the next one
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Awesome!! Didn't Bella donate some of her blood for Edward to drink after she is changed in this story??
Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG! OMG! OMG! More! I want more!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I loved this chapter.
Reviewer: tooblu96 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
WOW! What a way to end the chapter. I'm glad you updated because I really missed it. I hope you update soon (please, please, pretty please...w/o cherries on top?)
Reviewer: amycullen23 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Great to get an update. Now I can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
HOLY SHIT YOU CANT JUST LEAVE IT THERE.
Ahem. Fabulous chapter!
Reviewer: beaandmarco (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
holy crap... im very patient.. when i want to be.. please update very very very very very very very very soon. i cant take it anymore... my head is going to explode and then how will i read the story..
Reviewer: effleurage (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:20 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Ice Cream Sundae Edward is Hella Hot
First and foremost, thank you for an awesome update. Secondly, I was taken by surprise by Bella's request to be changed in the throes of passion. I think it was a great way to go, I have read that before, but I never guessed your Edward would change Bella this way without a fight. He is eager to please, isn't he??!! Wow, was he hot in his leathers or what!!? I do so wish that your alternate universe was canon. I showed my love for The List at the Bellies. Looking forward to reading your next update to one of my favorites.
Reviewer: julained (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow! You are such an amazing writer, you actually made me cry! I love this story, and was so excited to see the new chapter...well done! Keep up the great work, I can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: KatieBee8 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Nooooo, how can you end the chapter there?! You're such a tease! I'm too damn impatient for cliffhangers, hehe!!! This was perfect. A pefect ending/beginning. I was always disappointed with how Meyer wrote Bella's change; I'd always hoped Edward would bite her through the choice they'd made together, not as a last attempt to keep her in this world. You've written it how it should've been. But now I can't wait to read on!! Hope the next chapter won't be too long. :)
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:11 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
what happened to the morphine?
~ B
Reviewer: heathersriddles (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OH. My. Edward. I just starting reading your story yesterday, and I am In. Love. I swear that I could read nothing but this story for the rest of my life and be happy. That said, holy hell, this is the hottest thing I have ever read, and I literally had to wake my husband up at 4 o' clock this morning because I couldn't put it down until I was just out of my mind. I have finidhed what you have so far, and am eagerly awaiting more. You are awesome.
Reviewer: edwardluva84 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Gah! That....was......hot. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Very sensually done on the start of the alteration of Bella. it's amazing how many items of "The List" she was actually able to accomplish before the change occurs Continue with the binder list for Bella's benefit and ours. Also dying to know what she wrote in her pages for Edward's binder. Update soon, please
Reviewer: Starlight623 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
"Don't move. I want to try something." Isn't that what Edward said to her before they kissed, ages ago?
Regardless, this chapter was INTENSE!! I loved it! Bella getting changed in the middle of making love is just so poetic.
Awesome.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Wow, I so totally wasn't expecting Edward to turn his moroseness over the whole bucket list quip into, well, THAT. Holy crap that was hot. It just made it even hotter, with the spontaneity of it. The ice cream sundae thing made me laugh. It always reads better than it actually is though. I tried that once, yeah that didn't go over so well. Maybe it only works with vampires. But the thing about the blood that Edward was imagining - a bit of a glimpse into a future chapter? I still haven't forgotten Bella's bag of blood she's keeping for him. I have this funny mental image of Bella holding it up going, "Surprise!".
I loved how they spent the last day.
Thanks for the update bb!
Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
You are my favorite author without a doubt.
I was not expecting the change to begin right now though. That was a nice surprise! Well...I'm gonna sit here and just wait for the next chapter...haha.
You are amazing! :D
Reviewer: Lea Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
that was so worth the wait, WOW. thanks
Reviewer: LZTZ (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG! Need more now!!!!!!!!! What a way to start her transformation!!!
Reviewer: simply_obssesed (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
ok, so if Renesmee wasnt a part of the series, this is EXACTLY how Bella should have been changed in Breaking Dawn.
i got a little nervous there at the end though. he too so many dawls of her blood...
i cant wait for post-change Bella and Edward. theyre right. we're not gonna know what hit us.
Reviewer: danna0724 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Talk about a cliff hanger, but I loved it, can't wait for the next one!
Reviewer: breakingdusk (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
HOLY SHIT!!! AHHHH THIS IS SO INTENSE!!!!! YOU R AMAZING!!!! lol very nice
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