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Reviewer: Marie-Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Welcome back sweetie!!!! Belive me it was worth the wait.I love all your chapters but this one has really left me speechless.
I can't even begin to tell you what was my fav part b/c i can'teverything was so perfect that is hard to choose.
Every part of this chater in it's own was was important and beautifull and once more i bow down to you and i'll never tire of saying you are a GODDESS!!!!
I'm also sad b/c i know i'ts coming to an end.
Now... Can't wait to see Bella changed cause then things are REALLY going to get even HOTTER!!!!
XOXOXOXOXOXO
Reviewer: Edwarda (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Oh my GOD!!! Did he really bite her oh my.
Really loved this chapter, I can't wait for the next.
Reviewer: ArieCullen (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMC he bite her and he came in her OMFC shes gonna get pregnant i know she will jesus UPDATE PLEASE!!! :)
Reviewer: strwbrryflds (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
What a GREAT chapter. On the forum it seems like most really liked the Edward Sundae, which I agrea was great. But my favorite was the leather clad Edward and the bar stool. I loved when he was spanking her with the list and talking about it at the same time. But when we go to when she gave him the binder that she made for him I got all teary eyed. I am so looking forward to the next chapter. I hope you let us know some of what she wrote for him and his reaction to it.
Reviewer: Jenny Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Woohoo! Bless you for the update. I went back to read the previous chapter again before reading the new one and realized once it's finished, I'll cry. Then I'll start over and read from the very beginning again. *sigh* Thank you. :)
Reviewer: gjmb2000 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I can see the end in site.
And I wanted you to know that this has been a really good story. I have enjoyed it.
Reviewer: onoimatwitard2 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Thank you!!
I found The List when there were already 23 Chapters, so this is the first time I have to wait to find out what happens next. The wait was so worth it. But, pretty please with sugar on top, don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.
Reviewer: laurielaur (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
awesome... i absolutely cannot wait for the update! hurry please!
Reviewer: jellycatty (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
that was AWESOME! really long chapter and i looooved it. not sure why but the teeth licking was uber sexy. i can't wait for the next update :D
Reviewer: CullenLovin226 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
OK, my name is Theresa, and I am completely and irrevocably in LOVE LOVE LOVE with this story!!! I am so sorry for not reviewing sooner, but I couldn't stop reading long enough to form an appropriate response. Not the one that you deserve anyway. I can't contain the gooey, warm, and fuzzy sexy stuff this story does to me =) The Saga, and every single person in them have been my entire life for almost a year now. This story has fulfilled all of my "something more" needs. Stephenie Meyer did a wonderful job bringing these lovers to life. She also brought them into my heart. You have now brought them coursing through my veins! I read every sentence you write with such need and want. I can't wait to see the rest unfold. I have a few stories that I read on FanFiction, but yours is currently the one I can't walk away from. I am so happy when the Cullens, and their characters, and their loves and lives are left in tact for the fanfic stories. Not only have you given the visions I needed to further love them, but you leave we wanting more out of my own life!! Kudos!!!
Reviewer: Helpless_Delicious (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! I'm farely new to this site and your story is the $#!t.... the cliff is driving me crazy, can't wait!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:14 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Ooooh gosh. He took the panties.
Reviewer: Cedwardsgirl (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
omg so excited!!!!
I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Twilightie (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
amazing chapter!!!
Is tanya going to be in this? I hope not
oh I wonder what will happen Edward has to stop!!!!!!!!
Amazing story!! Keep writing!
Reviewer: mjpiper74 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Thank you for the great update.
I liked that whole family tried to give her human moments before she was changed. Of course Emmett would want to go bowling. I can just imagine vampires trying to control their strength when throwing the ball. Of course the pancake challenge with Emmett was hilarious too.
All of the sexual interactions were hot too. I like that Bella asked Edward to turn her while they were making love. It is something that Edward has had to fight every time they have had sex. I hope that being that primal and letting his instincts take over he doesn’t loose the part of him that wouldn’t hurt Bella. I would hate for him to go too far, but I am sure that Alice would be able to see if something were to go bad.
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Wow...that was hott!
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Mmmmmm. Yummy... :D
Reviewer: D Pattinson (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Excellent chapter. I hope you will let us read along in the binder with Edward during the change. Just to get some of his thoughts while the change takes place. That part is sorely missing from Breaking Dawn. Love this story. Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: elixir (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
This was so beautifully written Laura - I was in tears by the end. The mood you created was so perfect. You are so talented - please don't stop, I'm greedy for more!
Thankyou
E
xx
Reviewer: MrsJasperHale (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
One word Hot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
OMFG AT LAST!!! It has been so long, but you made it worthy and incredibly hot. I can't wait to read the next chapter and the transformation. :)
Reviewer: shichi (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Fantastic! I can't wait for more! But I thought Carlisle was going to administer morphine before Edward did the deed. And didn't she want him to bite her on the inside of her thigh, or am I confusing stories here? lol. Would love to see Edward clad in all that sexy black leather. Woof ! I'm going to have to try that ice cream sundae trick out one of these nights. :O
Reviewer: Buckles (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
perfect.
Reviewer: holly16 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:16 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Awesome chapter! I can't wait to see how her transformation goes. And the notebook for Edward. That was so sweet! I can't wait to see what she has for every hour. Can't wait for the next update!!
Holly
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Hehe, I love your Edward! He cracks me up and it's only the second chapter! Great job hun!
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